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I was thoroughly intrigued by that. It presents a great concept with compelling characters, but it feels hurried, and the dialogue could use improvement. Streamlining the details would make it more captivating.
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I was thoroughly intrigued by that. It presents a great concept with compelling characters, but it feels hurried, and the dialogue could use improvement. Streamlining the details would make it more captivating.