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"NO! You'll stay in there until you tell us what the hell is wrong with you!" he yelled through the wall. Then in a somewhat quieter voice he added to the others, "No one goes near her but me or I will kill you."
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I found it deeply engaging. It explores Kagome’s inner turmoil and her complicated relationships with Inuyasha and the group. Though the dialogue is powerful, certain sections feel redundant, which affects the pacing.