I feel set up as a reader. The first half was 10/10, second half a flat 0. You went from writing the hottest multi-chapter lemon ever, with great characterization to boot, surprisingly well written, to a s***** meandering mess filled with original characters no one cares about, conversations that get dragged on for way too long with strangers, nothing coming out of Rin's revenge or dilemma with Anotsu, or most importantly any damn closure with Manji. And garbage characterization, too. Rin just fucks off her vendetta like that? And doesn't even get a level headed confrontation on it? As if! Just a complete and disappointing lack of purpose. And no warning in your disclaimers the complete heel turn this fanfic takes, either. I'm so mad I wasted my time trying to slog through the rest of this to not even find any resolutions. It's BS to completely set up your readers and then not give them any payoff whatsoever and dragging this out for so long. I didn't pay to read this but boy I wish I could have gotten my time and investment back. SO unsatisfying. I hate that I ever read this now. I actually created an account on here just to vent. Fucks sake, write what you want, but maybe warn readers next time. SMH.
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I feel set up as a reader. The first half was 10/10, second half a flat 0. You went from writing the hottest multi-chapter lemon ever, with great characterization to boot, surprisingly well written, to a s***** meandering mess filled with original characters no one cares about, conversations that get dragged on for way too long with strangers, nothing coming out of Rin's revenge or dilemma with Anotsu, or most importantly any damn closure with Manji. And garbage characterization, too. Rin just fucks off her vendetta like that? And doesn't even get a level headed confrontation on it? As if! Just a complete and disappointing lack of purpose. And no warning in your disclaimers the complete heel turn this fanfic takes, either. I'm so mad I wasted my time trying to slog through the rest of this to not even find any resolutions. It's BS to completely set up your readers and then not give them any payoff whatsoever and dragging this out for so long. I didn't pay to read this but boy I wish I could have gotten my time and investment back. SO unsatisfying. I hate that I ever read this now. I actually created an account on here just to vent. Fucks sake, write what you want, but maybe warn readers next time. SMH.