This is an english story. If you want to write Japanese dialogue that's fine but don't forget to translate. Nothing is more annoying for someone who is trying to read and having the writer try to teach us Japanese as well. Since you seem to forget to translate and for the ease of those who are reading your story, why don't you type in your Japanese dialogue and right next to it, in parenthesis, type in the english translation; ex. Aishiteru (I love you). That is all.
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This is an english story. If you want to write Japanese dialogue that's fine but don't forget to translate. Nothing is more annoying for someone who is trying to read and having the writer try to teach us Japanese as well. Since you seem to forget to translate and for the ease of those who are reading your story, why don't you type in your Japanese dialogue and right next to it, in parenthesis, type in the english translation; ex. Aishiteru (I love you). That is all.