Ellieness
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This is an english story. If you want to write Japanese dialogue that's fine but don't forget to translate. Nothing is more annoying for someone who is trying to read and having the writer try to teach us Japanese as well. Since you seem to forge…
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I know this story was supposed to be about love but it came across as lust instead. At least, more so on Rins' part than Sesshomarus'.
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Well this was better than I had expected but it, ultimately, led nowhere.