HeWolf
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I enjoyed your story. It's an imaginative tale puttting the BBT crowd into a new environment. Couple of minor points: Penny should have more than a dagger. No warrior carries a dagger as a primary weapon. Also, there's too much 'smirking'.
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Nice story. Not much on fan fiction but this is fairly original. Only thing I'd change is dropping the reference to power points.