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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 23, 2006 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea you did make me wait but it was a long chapter so I'll forgive you. I like the opinions Kirara has of Inu, it's nice to see him get some more recognition. And it's about damn time that Inu put Shippou in his place. You know since he is a kitsune I think Shippou gives Inu such a hard time because foxes are cunning and Shippou is just testing Inu to see if he deserves his respect. *sigh* I really do want to see Inu and Sesshy go at it. That would be soooooooo cool!!!!! And yes I do understand how vacations are few and very important. I was kinda taking my own by being at my friend's house all weekend. Well I loved the chapter and update soon ok ja!!!!
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Title: Forgive my delay!
Reviewed By: Inu4ever(NSI) On: April 23, 2006 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such an entertaining chapter to read! Thank you for sharing more of Kirara's personality with us! I love the Neko! Having her spar with Sesshy was priceless,but when he licked her,I thought I'd fall off of my chair in a fit of laughter!! Bless you,my friend..I just love your story...Will update you in private about how life has been with me...Namaste,my dear LP!
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Title: Vampire?
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to ask. So, the boar was drained of blood. Hehe, is that what Sesshoumaru had for dinner? Hehe. It's plausible, and for vampire fans, exciting.---Snow
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Title: Awsome!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue not signed in On: April 22, 2006 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is awsome!! WANT MORE!!!
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Please update soon! BTW, what site is PM? I've never heard of it. Could you e-mail the link to me at bracletbab@yahoo.com? I am always looking for more stories to read and sites to post on. Your story is really good.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 16:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter! Loved Kirara's attitude and all her discussions. Wonder what will happen next time Sesshomaru comes around her, lol. And Kanna....shes up to no good. When has she ever not. Heh, as for the psych book? Its all Latin to me, so I know I wouldn't understand any of it anyways, lol. Great chapter tho, cant wait till you update again. And you're most welcome about FA. I think you're also correct with the typing of your story as well. Maybe IYFG should make a cat. like that. I dunno. Anyways, update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Title: My oh my, The Cat's in the Cradle
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 14:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My oh my, the cat's in the cradle And Sessh's temper is all else but stable; The challenge's been launched Hackles raised, shoulders hauched, To the 'Puppy no Taisho' of t'fable. But Kirara just can't give a toss Cos she's sure to show Pfffft Hhhssss who's boss. The Cat's out of the bag And there's fun to be had; Something tells me Sessh's in for a loss! But right now I cannot get rid Of the image behind my eye-lid Of the bawdiest nature With one inu and neko On their wedding night, who's to be bottom'd. *snickers* Fireworks just doesn't cover the dog-cat interaction of this chapter darling. I enjoyed it specifically when Shippo was having his little interaction with Inuyasha, though. That was really precious. Although now I'm beginning to suspect that the way Kohaku's behaving is tightly tied to Kanna's presence there. I think the closer she is to him, the stronger Naraku's hold on him is. Or perhaps that is what you want me to think while you're really brewing something all the more deviant in the background... I'll soon know! ^v~ M-sama
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Reviewed By: selenityshiroi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:22 PDT
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The Sess/Kirara thing in this chapter is creeping me out, but otherwise this story is wonderful!
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Title: Chapter 50
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You literally had me laughing! Especially when Sesshoumaru licked Kilala. That was too totally awesome. I was amused with your author's note, but wondered if I would really enjoy the chapter. It was just great. I have always wondered if Kilala had a bi-pedal form. Hm, does she have kitten ears? Or ears like Sesshoumaru? I really, really want to know. I hope that this is the beginning of a romance. Squeee! It sure looks like it. I'll be smiling all day, envisioning Sesshoumaru licking her. Please have some more neko/inu love bickering.---The section with Shippou was great. And I'm really confused about the time thing that narrowed down to whether or not to feed Inuyasha. Maybe it kept him from burning himself.---It will be interesting to see how they will help Miroku. That is suspenseful as well as intriguing.----One more time; pleeeease, more neko/inu love digs at each other. That was just too much fun. I loved Kilala's language and names for things. You did a terrific job with her character. Inuyasha understanding her really proves his intelligence.---Sorry that this is so jumbled, but I'm kind of in a hurry and I will definitely be reading this chapter over again.---Snow
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Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:21 PDT
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I'm still only part way through, but wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this immensely.....
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 18:58 PDT
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update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kilika(nsi) On: April 15, 2006 13:41 PDT
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Another great chapter!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr NSI On: April 09, 2006 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Ive been wondering about Kohaku and how he was going to act towards Sango. But seems changed since perhaps he saw Kanna there? Interesting. Wondered too, when it was going to happen to Miroku with his Wind Tunnel. But of course, still miss the InuYasha/Kagome action. Like your portrayal of Sesshomaru. Anyways, cant wait see what happens next. Update when you can.
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Title: bravo!
Reviewed By: Mysterium(nsi) On: April 07, 2006 22:47 PDT
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Ok, I don't know why I didn't start reading this story earlier, but I'm really glad I finally decided to do so. It's been a very enjoyable read. I'm loving the whole Time Lord/Nexus plot... it's unique, and you fit it in with the manga nicely. I like that your story doesn't always go with "fannon." For example, Inuyasha's demon half is not just this mindless monster. I also enjoy all the characters' interactions with one another. So, yes... I'm going to log myself in and add this story to my favorites list now. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ardent-amber(NSI) On: April 07, 2006 07:20 PDT
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Wow, long update wait this time, but life gets busy, so meh! Liked this chapter very much, but for some reason it didn't show up on ff.net(?). And personally (I know you're older & all) I think you know too bloody much for your own good! *throws miniture tantrum* It's not fair!!!! Lolz, jk, and MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA till next time!
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