| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: February 26, 2006 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I love Inu?...umm cuz he's awesome!!! ^.^ And I completely know how Kagome feels right now. I'm borderline hypoglycemic so I can get like that, I haven't had a bad attack of it though in a long time, now I mostly just get depressed. It runs in my mother's side of the family, my uncle checked himself into a mental institution once because he was hearing voices cuz his blood sugar was really fucked up cuz he wasn't eating right. It took them a week to figure out that it was cuz he was borderline hypoglycemic. Anyway, yea I understand and this was a really good chapter so update soon ok and if Kikyou does come back....lets just say whatever reaction I have will not be pretty.
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Title: Awsome!!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: February 25, 2006 00:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok what the hell is going on with Kagome? Tell me she just fainted, and she is not dieing all over again. You know i think you love to torcher us by leaving ciffys! "its not nice :-(" anyway love your story looking forward to the next chapter soon i hope.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 15:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! This is such a terrific fanfic that I don't even know what to say! You've had me absolutely riveted. You're a fantastic writer and your story line is so perfected and deliberate. I've been so moved by the mate and pack references between the characters, it's so beautiful! You definitely have my complete attention and I can't wait until your next update ;)
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Reviewed By: Neko_angel666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 09:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOO!!! OMG YOU ARE EVIL!!! PLEASE PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY AND I MUST READ MORE!!!! Love ya, Angela
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: February 14, 2006 20:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crosses arms and pouts* Feh so I'm not a big Kouga fan. *shrug* there are worse things in life. I like him more than I like Kikyou. But then I even like Naraku more than Kikyou. I wish she'd just stay dead, she's died three times and yet she can't seem to just stay that way. I felt like smacking Kagome when she healed her, stupid girl, doesn't she know you're not supposed to help your enemies? Anyway good chapter but I'm a little confused on how exactly that reaction to the Tetsusaiga occurred. *shrug* oh well update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: Very good!!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good!!! I can't wait for more!! Will there be more Rin in this fic???
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Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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At the end of 44 I wondered a little what would happen when the combo of Inupapa's youki and Inuyasha's youki met and melded with that of Kouga's claw thingie (whose name escapes me). Since two deads outweigh one living I wondered if there would be trouble. Would the addition of Tenseiga (living even though dead) and Sess's Youki help out any? (three living versus two dead) Anyway, onto the review. Another enjoyable chapter. I like how you incorperated Kirara into the Pack Call. I don't know how many times I knew that my cat wanted to do something that I had "asked" it to do, but then it's very catness foiled me. I also liked how the humans react to the Pack ideal. It really made me think about how humans are pack creatures just as much as anything else. Kanna had some interesting thoughts and comments in this chapter. She brings up that she was created in much the same way that the kazanna was. I can forsee many interesting conversations between Kanna and Miroku should he survive this latest ordeal. Should he start to loose and was drawn into the time vortex would that destroy the vortex. It is the whole portable hole in a bag of holding thing from AD&D. An interesting thought nevertheless. On a mostly unrelated thought, have you ever read the Necroscope series? I think that Kagome's time lines are somewhat similar to Harry Kough's life strings....kinda... Thanks for writing for us. I look forward to seeing how this works. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: February 14, 2006 07:47 PST
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Another excellent chapter. You must be owned by a cat, judging by Inuyasha's reaction to Kirara's jumping on top of his head and kneading his scalp! I could sympathize with that one. Keep up the great work, but the cliffies are killing me!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 20:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, sneaky author and your cliffys,lol. A shame really, InuYasha goes through so much just to get sucked into that? Now that would really*suck*. And am still wondering what Kanna is up to. She hesitated when she spoke, so...hmmm. And Sesshomaru is leaving? He is needed elsewhere? Whoa! So much going on in one chapter, heh, that what makes them so great. Update soon. On a different note: The Teletubbies? You have actually watched the Teletubbies? Kami, Im old! Lmao, I would never have know what a Noo-Noo was if hadn't told me. Still love your small skits though.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 17:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really love this story! While there is a lot of the "time stuff" that I don't quite understand I think that you have a wonderful story going on here. Characterization is awesome. The whole concept of Pack is extra awesome and I just overall like it a lot! Thanks for writing! Caitriona
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 11, 2006 21:16 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read through chapter 17 and I must say that this is a REALLY intrigueing and original story. I don't know what I want topic I want to comment on first.... The concept of the time lords is a little confusing. The idea that the four of them must become a living jewel is facinating and I love how you are doing it. But the thing that has grabbed my interest the most so far is what you have done so far with Inuyasha and the concept of Pack. While I'm not going to read more tonight, I can't wait to start in the morning to see what grows out of this. Inu with the dogs after the park was especially great. Conversations between the three incarnations of Inu aren't anything new, but I like HOW you have done them, and I like that you haven't make the Youkai incarnation into a mindless killing monster. Thanks for writing! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: February 11, 2006 03:49 PST
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I knew there was a productive reason for me to review - how do we vote? Good luck with your nominations. And why do I get this ominous feeling about their plan with the wind tunnel/air void/air rip/whatever you call them thingies. I'm probably trying to read too much into your titles, hmm?
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: February 11, 2006 03:45 PST
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Kagome and teenage Rin are no longer destroying my brain! YAY! They were sucked up by the vacuum cleaner .. unfortunately, so was my brain, hence the not reviewing : ) *shudders at the mere mention of Teletubbies* Can't stand them, not at all. But but my brain's back so all's well! Great chapter, as always, but one gripe - YOU STOPPED TOO EARLY!!! Nasty cliffies! Grumble, grumble ...
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ~parvatilotus~ On: February 09, 2006 20:59 PST
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oooohhhh... I'm all excited.. whats gonna happen?? I feel like im 6 yrs old and cant wait for anything lol. great chapter. :) good luck on your nominations and the voting! I wish I knew how to vote, but i dont. :(
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Title: Great Chapter!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like it, I love the story. Have from the get go. As I read, I was wondering if thats what Miroku had up his sleeve, or rather, up his hand. To use it against the time rip. Hmmm...should be interesting to see if it works. And wonder whats up with Jinx and Bandit? Still trying to figure out what Kanna is up to. Its never any good. Great chapter though. Update when you can.
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