| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:27 CDT
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Kagome is going to whoop some serious evil ass since she has some bif 'ol spiritual power in her!!! It's OK that you were late. Homework comes first and your muse was just on vacation, bathing in the sun with sunglasses and some wine in one hand...looking at hott guys...::looks off to the distance with a dreamy look::
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 17:55 CDT
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She should kick some ass!! I think it will be kind of a dissapointment if she goes out there ready to whoop some and then gets her ass kicked! Let her at least put up a good struggle!!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: I hate that my comp was taken for days upon end but now we appear with a review to give. Julia: My friends pulled through good to know that i still have reliable people in those parts of Europe. Ray: Maybe if you didn't kill 20 paople every time you went there. Wolf: She has no sefl control. Ookami: We are going off topic. White Wolf of the Moon: Yep aint it great. Loup: Such terrible english were did you learn. White Wolf of the Moon: My redneck uncle. Wolf: Don't explain much. Ookami: Well since the others arn't paying any attention i will give the big speech *walks up to the black podium and throughr salt over shoulder* Well This story has ever entranced us into waiting for the next chapter we still love it and won't leave even if the ending sucks. Wolf: Wrong words moron. Julia: Really how does he dress himself in the morning. Ookami: Well i don't i get my buddy person to help so hah. White Wolf of the Moon: The world is comming to an end repent of your sins so you may have everlasting life and chill with jesus. Ray: Church has drained his openmindedness. Loup: Is that even a word. Ray: Who cares Canadia aint a word but we all use it. Wolf: Point well taken. White Wolf of the Moon: Live long and prosper Oh i thought of a quote oh happy day Julia say it. Julia: In Canada act like a retard you get to smoke pot. Ray: Not to good of a quote. Wolf: To each his own. Loup: We leave you now with good tidings and ham *he throw ham at the computer screen* White Wolf of the Moon: Bad frenchie you get the contry *he runs off screaming* Wolf: This is us saying good night good night.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 16:27 CDT
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yay!!!!!! new chap. i like this one. good job. please update soon.
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Title: damn it all to hell! i got kicked off for some odd reason i dont even know about!
Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster kicked off site On: September 06, 2006 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES of course!!! what you thought i was kidding about the movie thing, are you NUTS?!!!!!!!!!!!! This would make a GREAT movie!!!!!!!!!!! look at all the reviews you have!! i mean SERIOUSLY! damn site banned me after i uploaded a chapter since i havent in like a year, and i dont even know why the hell they did it! i put the little Disclaimer at the bottom, though it wasnt at the top who gives a rats ass! please someone tell me why i have to go through the trouble of finding a computer which i havent loged into because all of the others just happend to keep me like that, so i couldnt get back on sooner, sorry, love the chapter ! you really should think about asking them to make this into a movie! bye for now.
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Reviewed By: kitsunemagic1 On: September 06, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Sit," she ordered, nodding toward a small wooden bench a few metres away. You mispelled that and something else...^^; I think you can find it somehow. Anyway, I know that my last chapter was terribly short, but that's only 'cause of the writer's block, remember? I'm thinking about just ending it and starting a series of one-shots like you mentioned...I'm just so jammed to do anything but those! Oh yea, this a review for your chapter....kinda forgot...*ahem* Anyway, you are so evil! Naraku better get his act together, or I'm gonna...um...oh Hell, what can I do to him?? -_-; I need serious help....haha
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 15:49 CDT
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Aw, Inuyasha is concerned. And Kaede is going to train Kagome! She is so totally going to kick Naraku's cold ass!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 08:33 CDT
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Great chapter! I wonder if Kaede will find out what the purest act is. I hope you had fun in Europe. I've never been out of the country, I've been to Canada but I don't think that counts. But that is gonna change because i'm going to Thailand in November! Then I can officaly say I've been out of the country. Anyway, please update soon. I can't wait to read more!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: AyaKazeki On: September 06, 2006 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Leave it up to Her Royal Majasty of Cliffies! You are too good, how can anyone help but be hooked on your story! I CAN'T wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I know what the purest act isbut guessing it and getting it right will spoil the whole thing. But I really hope they can find the answer soon before Naraku messes up everything. Well I hope you update soon and keep things up.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deax (emailed review) On: August 30, 2006 08:47 CDT
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White Wolf of the Moon: The site won't take any of my reviews at the moment so i send this to you via e-mail. Loup: Yes we had to. Ookami: The story is getting even better and we can't wait till you are back from europe. Julia: Don't get shot by the russian maffia *dials a numer on her phone and talks russian* White Wolf of the Moon: No don't tell tham to put her on your hit list. Julia: I didn't i told them to try and find her and treat her to italian spagetti. Loup: That's fine then as long as it isn't poisoned. Wolf: Where are sita and Ray. White Wolf of the Moon: They went to the Parakaleses islands near the island of mol mol to visit Su and Nyamo. Wolf: That was the short answer wasn't it. White Wolf of the Moon: Yep. Loup: Such a insane creator we have. Wolf: We will be free in the next life though. White Wolf of the Moon: You be right cause the world will probably end soon hope you know jesus. Loup: Well that's it from us see you whenever.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements NSI On: August 30, 2006 08:43 CDT
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::narrowed eyes: OF COURSE since you eill be gone awhile, you HAVE to leave a cliffy...keh...
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Reviewed By: ADEA NERI On: August 14, 2006 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LVU THIS!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 00:41 CDT
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i really really really like this story. the way you adapted Inu Yasha to fit a Beauty & the Beast sorta plot is very well done. awesome job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster bein lazy On: August 03, 2006 16:01 CDT
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awesome, i love the plot. cant wait to see what happens next!!!! you should really have them make movie or somethin like that about this!!!!!!! it would turn into a best seller and everyone would know about Inuyasha instead of being totally oblivious to what it is!!! even though its not the real plot in the series but its still a pritty damn good one!!! cant wait to read more:)
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