| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 16:45 CST
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Great chapter! I knew Inuyasha wasn't gonna let Kagome fight Naraku on her own. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: October 29, 2006 14:30 CST
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ooooooooooooooooo! Naraku's gonna get it now! hehehe InuYasha to the rescue!
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 12:18 CST
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yay yay! Good chaper keep up the good work and update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 18:54 CDT
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Awesome! Congrats on your essay!! What was it for and about? For the story, I love the witty remarks and your writing has been approving on each chapter. Love the story..well, I love all you have written, but I especially like this one!!!
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Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for fight scenes! Come on Kagome, kick is a**. I'm glad Inu showed up. Akina315
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 13:51 CDT
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White Wolf of the Moon: Who would have known that would have happened besides well you. Wolf: Yep he really just has no idea. Loup: Yes we all didn't know that Naraku would show up and try to kill Kagome. Sita: What we didn't know was that Naraku would turn into a demon. Julia: Odd we should have predicted that. White Wolf of the Moon: Oh well we didn't by the way I am almost there with my new chapter it is only a matter of time before i upload it but I have to find a good way to end the chapter should Zabuza Live and return to his bosses or die a horrible death. Loup: Eirther way it would end with his *gets shot at by my bazooka* White Wolf of the Moon: Don't say another word. Julia: *laughing at his pain* Sita: Well in any event we have almost completed the chapter. Wolf: Only you have to wait I'm trying to make it long for the lack of chapter over tha past months. Ray: By the way congrats on the winning of the publishing thingy our master did that once and won 10,000 in cash for the awe inspiring poem he wrote. White Wolf of the Moon: No revealing past information. Sita: Oh well this has been lame so far let me liven it up *she jumps in the closet and comes out with a whip and 20 ogres* Now attack my minions. Julia: *jumps in the closet and grabs Lena clothes from slayers and attacks* Wolf: Go Julia kill the vampire. Ray: *attacks wolf* Julia: begins the slaying of the ogres* White Wolf of the Moon: What will happen next I will tell you later if you want to know. Ookami: Lame. White Wolf of the Moon: Later I have to start I mean finish that chapter *runs into the sunset* Ookaim: Nice chapter by the way *runs after me*
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:16 CDT
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yay, the action has started. i really like this chap. good job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now Naraku is going to get a good ass kicking from human Inuyasha and if Kagome gets healed quick enough, he would get some more ass kicking from her as well. So update soon and keep doing what you do best, write. Oh and congrats on getting PUBLISHED!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 14:57 CDT
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i really liked this chap. i can't wait for Kag to kick Naraku's ass!! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kihaku-Shiteki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigosh! You need to update this! I can't wait to see what happens next.. I like how you have the character's portrayed to be intune with Beauty and the Beast! I also love how you have their fates tied to that poem and how Sango, Miroku and Shippou fit into this... Ebil Naraku... -shudders- Please don't let him get ahold of Kagome-Chan!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: To each his own. Julia: The quote of our day. Wolf: Wierd way to sart the review i would say. Sita: I agree but i have no backup today ray went to Peru so no fights. Wolf: Maybe but we will have to see. Ookami: Hello all back to the other reality of this review. White Wolf of the Moon: Okay this chapter has been leading me in one of two directions. Wolf: Like what. White Wolf of the Moon: Was I done *i say as Wolf dissapears* Now as i was saying this story is leading me in two directions one being the death of our beloved Kagome and the other being the death of Naraku. Nami: What happened to Wolf. White Wolf of the Moon: I sent him to the fifth dimention. Loup: *appears at the worst time* No not that anything but that. White Wolf of the Moon: *fire burns in my eyes* What did i tell you. Loup: *whimpering in the corner* Leave and never return. White Wolf of the Moon: What did you do. Loup: return. Sita: *unfurls a giant scroll* by the bylaws set down by past creations of the creator those being Atme, Metu, and Zeta it is said that if a yami and or creation is banned from returning and returns the sentence is death or being killed and brought back to life a million time. Wolf: *back from the fifth dimension* Hard choice. Announcer: What will Happen will Loup die once or a million times find out after this commercial. White Wolf of the Moon: My mind is way to far gone evn for the phycharatrists but anyway Loup chose to die a million times by the way the story was great and we will tell you exactly how we feel when the story is done another thing all my creations are not going to be here for a week they are all going to explore the Mexican ruins so i will be alone revieing your one shot.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the battle will begain. I hope that she will win, with her powers she should win. I wonder if you are going to put demon Inuyasha in that battle as well. But thats me saying that. So hope you update soon and keep up what you do best, making great stories.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You evil evil evil evil evil thing!! You leave me on a cliff! ;_; Loved the chapter anyway ^^ I have writer's block and you know it! Gr...Anyway, Akiko should be giving me some ideas I hope. Akiko: Nope! I'm empty-headed! *knocks on head* Kitsune: *punches Akiko's head* Akiko: Owwwwwwwww...
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 11:17 CDT
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Yea, your back! I'm so glad. I can't wait for the showdown between Kagome and Naraku. Please update soon. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 07:09 CDT
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good chapter I can't wait to read more!! Glad to see you back!
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