| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: January 28, 2007 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu no no no no! you will not do that, they are both cute ;_; esp. together ^^
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 15:19 CST
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update soon plzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 13:26 CST
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oh my god! what a change of events! i was not excepting that, I thought that this chapter would be about them living happily ever after! Oh my god!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Holy crap that was the biggest and most horrible thing I have ever seen it left me in shock and terror. Nice job that really was a first for something like that to happen to me. Sita: yeah you are normaly just an emotionless rock. White Wolf of the Moon: Go away *looks around and only sees her* where is everyone at. Sita: somewhere. White Wolf of the Moon: Spil or that's it curtains for you. Sita: Okay they are here *all of them pop out with a happy birthday banner* White Wolf of the Moon: 0.o what the heck it's not my friggin birthday *they all look at Loup* Loup: what I thought it was today. Ookami: Idiot *smacks him in the head and walks off wolf folowing him leaving me with Ray and julia along with sita* Julia: So what now. Ray: I think we need to have another Show lin showdow. White Wolf of the Moon: Good my Falcons eye against you tounge of sia ping. Ray: Wait I didn't mean you. Loup: Add in the sword off the storms to *all of us Together: Fong ye tem pi. White Wolf of the Moon: *I pull out my small note pad and write Loup and Ray lose and jump out the window and the note pad being my biggest story tool makes them do so now leaving me with Julia and Sita* Sita: What now. Julia: Let's leave and go have some fun *they both leave leaving me alone* White Wolf of the Moon: Oh well peace all that's all i have in my mind today.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:04 CST
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LOL,you gotta love Miroku "100th time the charm" and it's amazing that kagome wants inuyasha's curse...can't wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 08:31 CST
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Great chapter! I'm glad Sango finally admitted her feelings for Miroku. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 22:23 CST
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NOOO!!! That has to be the most evil cliffy I have ever read!!! You better update soon or i'll track you down and make you tell me what happens!!! Evil Evil Evil!!!! Grrrr.......*breaks down in tears* I didn't mean it just PLEASE update SOON!!!!
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Title: *tears in my eyes*
Reviewed By: AyaMorikana On: January 22, 2007 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh!!! Imootochan!!! Another AMAZING chapter from her royal majesty of writing!! And ending the chapter in yet another cliffy, I'm not sure if I can handle the insanity of waiting to read what happens next!! *faints* ...Oh, sorry about that, but really incredible!! All I can do now say a quote from her highness -"Wow!"
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Title: Yo!!!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LE GASP*.... you didn't.... that is.... so sad!!! *cries* Kagome is so brave!!! *cries another river* Kyah!!! What a cliffy!!! Grah! That sucks! But bah! What a great cliffy!!! You, my friend, are skilled in the delivering of cliffies... Take this gift, and use it for the good and not the evil... Just imagine what evilly diabolical plots you could come up with that kind of cliffy power... It's down right scary, I tell yah! Best give us the biggest finally soon, 'ya hear! Now git! Git to that there typing contraption you can keyboard and type your little cliffy heart out!.................... lol...... sorry. I'm not usually like that. I don't think I've reviewed in a while. How are you? I'm good. Stickin' around the mediaminer.org, you know... doin' that reading thing... *looks at clock* HOLY CRAP, I HAVE MATH HOMEWORK. Gotta go. au revoi!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She is the most bravest person in this story. Man, I think I might do that for someone I love, might. But that was cute what he said to Kagome and the whole Miroku asking Sango to marry him thing is nice too. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace. Plus, I would had never, EVER think she would do THAT for him, damn she must really, REALLY love him for doing that.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 19:42 CST
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i love this chap. AWESOME job. please udpdate soon.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:57 CST
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Chapter 11: When you talked about Inuyash hearing Kagome's laugh and immediately afterward hearing her scream, it seemed as if it was two connected things. Yet, from Kagome's vantage point, you made it seem as though she had been fighting for a few minutes after laughing before she screamed. Unless, of course, it was Shippou's scream you recorded. But I think Inuyasha would be able to tell the difference between the two different screams, even on a human night. ANyways, your story is just brilliant, and I am really looking forward to reading the rest. Just about now...
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Reviewed By: annet On: January 08, 2007 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i can hardly wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: miley On: January 08, 2007 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the best story i ever read
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 08:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Evil cliffie, though. Please update soon! I can't wait to what happens to Inuyasha.
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