| "Miroku and Sango: Untitled" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: ARG Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2005 14:33
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Drawing Skill: 8 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great use of color, and the line art quality is smooth. I agree with the others on the proportions on their faces, particularly Miroku's. You used a good choice of colors and the leaf pattern is a nice touch on the background. The main (new) suggestion I have is to tighten the image up a bit - there's so much space between Miroku and Sango and the tree that you're left with that gap on the bottom left that is just grass. It stands out quite a bit as a huge amount of negative space, even though it has color in it. Keep working at it, you're progressing well!
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Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 14:33
Comment/Review:
I'm going to try not to say anything that has already been said. Basically this is a good picture that could be better--it shows sign of getting better. Try to loosen the characters up, put more expression and detail into the character's faces, perhaps add shadow (such as the weapons leaning against the tree).
| Title: ARG!!
Reviewed By: Amostar (not logged in) On: November 19, 2004 09:41
Comment/Review:
It sure seems you put a lot of work into this piece! The poses of both are nice, and the color scheme is great as well. As Biz said, try working on symetrical facial features, as well as alignment I must add. Miroku's face seem a bit our of shape, it seems too wide in my opinion. His face shape shouldbe more similar to Sango's. Very nice work overall, it would make a very cute birthday present! ~~Amostar~~
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Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 19:40
Comment/Review:
Nice, I bet you your friend liked that gift. Colouring and texture are nice and vibrant, only technical issue would be that a little more care should be spent with the line-work for the face outline and facial features, its worth putting in the extra effort to make sure all lines are smooth and fluent and that the eyes are almost perfectly symmetrical, its just something that is always obvious. Other then that the next step would be to give the picture depth, you do this with aggressive and accurate shading, give it a go; I'm sure it can only enhance your pictures further. :) :)
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