| "Sweat Drop ....." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: eh.
Reviewed By: Rei Ayanami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 21:09
Comment/Review:
Please tell me thats not Kagome
| Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Dee (not signed in) On: April 17, 2005 20:40
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Drawing Skill: 6 of 10
Use of Medium: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this picture isn't as fluid as it could be. Certain aspects of this image don't fit together, such as Kagome's body position. Her arm hangs too loosely to her side while her other is on the wall, and her face is turned away from Inuyasha's. Also, Inuyasha's body is a little feminine for me. It's very slender and lithe, even Kagome's head is a little too large for her body. I'm also not one to talk since I can't work with the computer for squat, but the coloring could have been up'd a notch. Otherwise I definitely give you props for the hard work. There's always room for improvement!
| Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Phoxy_kitsune (NLI) On: April 17, 2005 20:22
Comment/Review:
I like the coloring. Fan already commented on the shading. I had problems with shading, infact, I still do and am still told by all these people to do more shading to give it depth. I like kagome's hair and how the charecters are pictured too. The two of you did a great job togeather besides a few small details that I would have done differently. Inuyasha's right eye seems a bit too close to the side of his face. Just something that caught my eye, over all, I give it an seven of ten for the team. ^^~Phox ^-.-^
| Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 00:13
Comment/Review:
You said that songies did the line art so ill just review the coloring. Your base colors are nice, not you need to add depth to the characters with shadows. Skin clothing hair everything has several tones some darker and some lighter. I know your characters are a take off of the series ones. Inuyasha normally is dressed differently, but he has a darker skin tone then Kagome does. Overall its a good start on doing computer coloring.~Fanilia
| Title: ARG :)
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 22:19
Comment/Review:
Your facial expressions are getting really good Songie in fact all the line work is starting to come together really well, keep using the art you are imitating as references and review each drawing when your finished as compared with the professional character art. Only thing that springs to mind is the line work of the males mouth, its best to have a direct reference for more complex mouth expressions it doesn't take much for it to look a little confusing. The coloring is great to, the next step is some bold shading... I see good things ahead! ;) Biz :)
| Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 07:42
Comment/Review:
Thankies so much Songie. Actually, I didn't intend on her hair being completely blue. I screwed up and just went with what you see.
| Title: Buddy in Crime
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 07:39
Rating(s):Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love how you colored it Yidee. It looks so smexy it fits the story so well that I feel like writing the next chapter now. You art skills are getting better and better and I am starting to get excited for you. I actually do like Kagome's hair like that with the blue. Hmmm... me like so much. *huggles* Your the best co-author I ever had (actually your my only co-author but just forget about that part)
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