Angelic Layer Fan Fiction ❯ The Hentai Deus ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )

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By: Persona Ohnlyne
Lime vs. Snow White Angel

Anime/Manga: Angelic Layer Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Hentai | Type: Divergence | Uploaded On: 01.03.2006 | Pages: 7 | Words: 5.7K | Visits: 1.2K | Status: Completed

 
The Hentai Deus
An Angelic Layer lemon
By Persona Ohnlyne
 
Legal crap: Angelic Layer is owned by CLAMP, I'm just burrowing the characters. I don't intend to win any money with this, so don't sue me.
 
This is a LEMON, so if you are underage, stop reading.
Did you stop, no, well, you have been warned so it's not my fault if you get caught.
 
You could say that this lemon involves sex with underage characters, but since the Angelic Layers are not real people, this is just half true.
 
 
Anyway, on with the story. I just hope you enjoy it.
 
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Chapter 1:
 
"Misaki! Misaki!"
 
Misaki turned around, her Angelic Layer, Hikaru, was in her pocket, it was inanimate as always. Of course that changed every time she was placed in the Eriol Dome.
 
"Yes, what is it Tamoyo?" Misaki said as she looked at her friend.
 
Tamoyo was panting, the 12 year old girl looked like she had run, a long way, and was tired.
 
"Are you alright?" Asked Misaki, why would Tamoyo had run like that?
 
"A new … gasp … a new Deus had come to Tokyo."
 
"A new Deus? I see. Why did you say that she came to Tokyo?" Misaki asked.
 
"Because she's not Japanese," answered Tamoyo, "she's from France."
 
France? She knew that Angelic Layer was a very popular game, some people even considered it more than a game. But why would someone from France would come all the way to Japan to participate in the big league (Japan was considered the birth place of Angelic Layer and so it was the most challenging league of it).
 
"I don't know, but she had challenged that unknown lady." Tamoyo said, she had got all her breath back.
 
Misaki's eyes went serious, she knew what that meant, a fight of undefeated Snow White Angel, she always looked forward to see a fight of that Angelic Layer.
 
"Let's go." Said Misaki, and ran towards the Eriol Dome.
 
"Misaki, wait for me!" Said Tamoyo and ran behind her friend.
 
***
 
When the two of them reached the Eriol Dome, there were many Deus to see the fight, that hadn't begun yet.
 
"Hello Misaki, I'll knew you'll come sooner or later." Ohjirou said to Misaki as he saw her come in, Wizzard was lying limp on his shoulder.
 
"Ohjirou! Are you interested in this fight too?" If even Ohjirou, Deus of Wizzard the two year consecutive champion Angelic Layer was here to see the fight, then it was going to be a good one.
 
"I don't know why he's here. I'm just here to do my usual watching and analyzing of fighting styles." Sai Jinouji interrupted before anybody could answer. Shiara-hime, her Angelic Layer, was on her pocket.
 
"Sai you too?" Asked Misaki.
 
"Everybody is here Misaki," said Ohjirou, "that French girl said that she was the undefeated champion of the Europe Angelic Layer league, and challenged Snow White Angel as soon as she found out that she was the undefeated angel in here."
 
"She could be just bluffing." Said Sai.
 
"I don't think so," answered Ohjirou, "even if she was bluffing about being the Europe champion, she shouldn't bluff about fighting an Angelic Layer like Snow White Angel, we'll just have to see the fight and take our own conclusions."
 
"Whatever, what did she said her name was again?" Asked Sai.
 
"Hmm … Iris Charbonnier." Answered Ohijirou.
 
"Shhh, they are about to start." Said Misaki as she looked at the Eriol Dome.
 
At the two sides of the dome were the chairs and the goggles that every Deus used in their fights. Everybody could see the unknown lady at one side holding Snow White Angel on one hand, she looked calm like always.
 
At the other side was the other girl, Iris Charbonnier, she had untied blond hair that reached the small of her back, and deep blue eyes.
She was wearing a yellow mini skirt and an orange tank-top, she wasn't wearing any socks with her white tennis shoes all and all she looked sexy and beautiful at the same time, she looked to be no more than 17 years old. She was holding her Angelic Layer on her right hand, but they couldn't make them out from were they were standing.
 
The two Deus sat down on their chairs and grabbed the goggles witch they used to give telepathic orders to their Angelic Layers once they were into the Dome.
 
The unknown lady did the same, and threw Snow White Angel into the dome. Immediately it stood up on her own coming to life into the dome.
The name and picture of the Angelic Layer appeared on one side of the giant board above them.
 
Iris smiled mischievously and also tossed her Angelic Layer into the dome.
 
Now everybody could make out Iris' Angelic Layer.
She was a not to tall, not to short girl, with semi long red hair that reached half way of her back. The only clothing of this Angelic Layer was a one-piece pink swimsuit, no gloves or shoes or headbands, just the swimsuit.
 
And the board above lit up the other side, the picture and name of the Angelic Layer was on the board for everyone to see.
The name of the Angelic Layer was 'Lime'.
 
***
 
Lime and Snow White Angel were facing each other in the Eriol Dome, waiting for the battle to begin, Snow White Angel was calm as always, Lime looked like she had a mischievous grin.
 
"You know," said Iris before the battle even started, "its funny that you named your Angelic Layer 'Snow White Angel'."
 
"Uh? Why is that?" Asked the unknown lady.
 
"You'll see." Answered Iris.
 
And so the battle began.
 
Snow White Angel ran towards Lime as fast as she could, she was going in for a quick victory, her hands began to shine to toss her energy attack.
 
FWOM!
 
The bolt of energy flew towards Lime.
 
"Bo-ring." Said Iris.
 
At that moment Lime made a somersault, jumping over the bolt of energy, that just impacted harmlessly on the floor, and then Landed just behind Snow White Angel.
 
"That was an incredible somersault," commented Sai, watching the battle, "that girl made her Angelic Layer jump just at the exact moment."
 
The other Deus next to her could just nod.
 
Snow White Angel turned around fast as to not to give Lime a chance to attack her from behind, just in time to see how Lime was coming right at her. Snow White Angel embraced herself for the incoming attack … but it never came.
 
Instead, the unthinkable happened.
 
Lime kissed Snow White Angel passionately on the lips.
 
***
 
Many things happened at that.
Everybody who was watching the fight went 'Oooohhh' at the actions in the dome.
 
Misaki was stunned "That … that Angelic Layer … k … kissed Snow White Angel …"
 
"There is no place in the rules of Angelic Layer battles that says that two Angelic Layers cant kiss. In fact the battles are 'anything goes'." Replied Ohjirou.
 
Sai was at a loss of words, she never expected THAT.
 
"What are you doing!?" Asked the unknown lady.
 
"He he he he … you'll find out soon enough." Replied Iris.
 
Inside the dome, Lime was still kissing Snow White Angel on the lips, at the same time that she began to remove Snow White Angel's helmet, letting everybody see for the first time her light blue eyes.
 
"Your Angelic Layer is so pretty," commented Iris, "I'm going to enjoy this."
 
"What are you doing! Stop kissing my Angelic Layer!" the unknown lady said, for some reason she couldn't make Snow White Angel pull away from Lime.
 
But Lime didn't stop, as they kissed she began to take off Snow White Angel's clothes starting by the elbow pads and her gloves, then she uncovered Snow White Angel's well formed breasts (I could say that they are big, but since the Angelic Layers are not bigger than an action figure, that would sound kind of weird).
 
A second later, Lime moved her right hand to Snow White Angel's breasts and began to rub it gently, never breaking the kiss.
 
The unknown lady's calm face, winced suddenly at the moment that Lime began to fondle Snow White Angel.
Was she felling what she tough she was felling, no … no it couldn't be.
 
"That … that Angelic Layer is … is …" Misaki couldn't say it.
 
"I … I can see that … why … why is she doing that …" Said Sai.
 
"Hum girls … she has finished undressing Snow White Angel." Ohijirou said, beginning to blush at what he saw on the dome.
 
Immediately, the two girls turned to see the fight.
 
While Lime was kissing Snow White Angel on the lips and massaging her breasts with one hand, the other hand had moved down and took of the rest of her clothes leaving Snow White Angel in only her knee-high boots.
 
"Now, in for the fun part." Iris said to nobody in particular, and finally made Lime stop kissing Snow White Angel.
 
Gently, Lime pushed Snow White Angel until she was lying on her back on the dome's floor, with Lime on top of her.
 
Lime moved her head downwards towards Snow White Angel's breasts, and began to lick them, her nipples were already pretty stiff from the previous fondling, and when Lime began to lick them they were standing on attention in no time. Even so, Lime continued to lick them for a while before stopping.
She only stopped licking to move down to Snow White Angel's pussy, that was already wet.
 
The unknown lady just didn't know what to do, for some reason she was felling aroused, VERY aroused, even though she tried to make Snow White Angel break free of Lime's ministrations, her telepathic orders were just not reaching her.
She could feel her own nipples getting hard and pressing against her bra, she was biting her lower lip to suppress a moan, and was beginning to fell wetness on her lower lips, along with a burning felling in her loins.
 
Iris never stopped smiling, her mischievous grin still in her face. "You know," she said to the unknown lady, "I will make Lime stop if you give up."
 
"N … gasp … never." The unknown lady managed to say.
 
"Fine, it'll be more fun for me." Iris answered and gave Lime another telepathic order.
 
Inside the Eriol Dome, Lime had her head between Snow White Angel's spread legs, and t Iris' order, she began to lick her swollen pussy.
 
"Ah!" The unknown lady could not repress her moan anymore, as Lime continued her ministrations on Snow White Angel, her own pussy was now soaking her panties, and the burning felling in her loins was now stronger.
She had to grip the sides of the chair to keep her hands to move into her skirt.
 
Lime continued to lick Snow White Angel's pussy, rubbing her clit with her nose every once in a while.
Lime's right hand moved upwards to Snow White Angel's breasts and began to rub them again, while her left hand helped her tongue at Snow White Angel's wet pussy.
 
The unknown lady was going mad, she felt like if she was in the brink of an orgasm, but never able to reach it, the fire in her loins getting stronger and stronger, her panties were so soaked wet now that a wet spot was appearing on the front of her skirt.
She wanted release, NEEDED release, she just couldn't take anymore of this, she just couldn't.
 
"S … Ah! Stop! Please … Hmmm! I can't take it! Please!" she screamed to Iris.
 
"Do you give up?" Asked Iris, her mischievous grin never leaving her face.
 
"YES!" screamed the unknown lady, "I give up! You win! You win! Just stop this! Please!"
 
"Good." Said Iris.
 
When the unknown lady had surrendered the dome turned itself off, and the two Angelic Layers fell limp on the dome's floor.
 
The unknown lady took of her goggles and picked up Snow White Angel as fast as she could, then she ran outside. She needed to masturbate or else go insane.
 
All the Deus present watched as the unknown lady ran outside, then they turned their heads to see how Iris, in a very calm fashion, took of her own goggles, and picked up Lime. She smiled evilly when she saw the wet spot on the seat the her opponent was sitting. Then, without saying anything else she walked towards the door.
 
Just as she was about to leave, she turned around, "I guess her Angelic Layer is not so Snow White anymore. I'll be back tomorrow if any of you wants to fight me and Lime." And then the French girl walked outside.
 
No Deus could believe what they saw, Snow White Angel, the undefeated, amazing and skilled Angelic Layer had been defeated, not only defeated without throwing a single punch, but was also utterly humiliated, and her Deus too.
 
"Did … you see … what I saw?" Asked Misaki.
 
Ohjirou and Sai were loss at words, all three of them just couldn't believe what they just saw.
 
"Perhaps I could answer your questions."
 
The three of them turned around to see Mihara, the 32 year old scientist, expert on the Angelic Layer game, standing behind them.
 
"Mihara. Did you saw the fight … if it could have been called fight." Asked Misaki to the man.
 
"Yes," Mihara answered, "she knows the bug in the programming."
 
"Bug?" Asked Ohjirou, "I tough that the Angelic Layer game had no bugs."
 
"Well, it's not rally a bug," Mihara said, "you see, to make the telepathic orders of each Deus reach the Angelic Layers we needed to make it a double sided link."
 
"You mean that as the Angelic Layer feels our toughs and obeys them, we also feel what they feel?" Asked Sai.
 
"Well, not all of the feelings, since Angelic Layers aren't people, they don't fell happy or sad, they just look like it because their Deus are like that. But you can feel how they get stimulated in battle, except for the pain. That had to be erased or else all Deus would just quit after feeling a single punch of the Angelic Layers."
 
"Well, so what?" Asked Sai.
 
"I'm getting to it," answered Mihara, "Anyway, every other stimulus you will feel. The programmers were never worried about that since all that Angelic Layers were meant to do was fight inside the Eriol Dome. Somehow that girl found out about this, and based her creation of her Angelic Layer to take advantage of this bug. She stimulated the Angelic Layer in a sexual manner, making the Deus feel aroused. When she made them feel like that the telepathic orders of the Deus were mixed with the arousal, and so she just couldn't fight it. The worst part is that Angelic Layers can't orgasm, they weren't made that way. So that lady was being kept in the brink of orgasm, and not able to reach it."
 
"That's … that's …" Misaki couldn't think of anything to say.
 
"That's dirty … but is not against the rules to do that, so that girl won fair and square." Ohijirou said.
 
"Why don't they take off that stupid bug from the programming?" Asked Sai to Mihara.
 
"Because if they do, the Angelic Layer game would not be as real like and exiting as it is." The man answered.
 
"Well, I won't stand it!" Said Misaki, "We can't let that girl make us look like idiots, and win in such way. We have to defeat her somehow!"
 
"Yes Misaki! That's the spirit, I'm with you 100%." Said Ohijirou.
 
All of them nodded, it would be difficult, but they had to defeat Iris.
 
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To be continued …