Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Avenge Frieza! ❯ Finale ( Chapter 7 )

“You are a man of hardly any words, aren't you Goten? Well, this will wipe the smile off your face!”

Elvor telekinetically lifted all the rubble from the remains of Satan City and launched every projectile at Goten, speeding at 300 miles per hour. Goten was hit by every single one of them.

“And since you were able to rudely hit me with two assaults, I'll hit you with three! This one should finish you off… Firewhirl and lightning!”

The negative energy clouds created a larger Firewhirl than the one that killed Gohan. It sucked Goten in like a vacuum cleaner. Goten experienced the same painful agony Gohan felt. Then, lightning with trillions of volts hit Goten inside the Firewhirl. Goten was reminded about his brother's death, which angered Goten to the point where he was no longer pure-hearted for now! Goten formed a ki-shield to protect himself from any fire or lightning, which surrounded Goten like a ball. He made the shield expand until it was too big for the Firewhirl to contain. The Firewhirl weakened and dissipated, so Goten removed his ki shield. Just when he did so, a bolt of lightning tried to electrocute Goten, but he caught it without strain. He squeezed it until it the lightning he caught formed a ball as small as a softball. Then, Goten caught a piece of fire and compressed that to the size of a baseball.

“Let's give you a dose of your own medicine!” Goten shouted. He threw both the lightning and fire balls at Elvor. “There you go, Father Nature!”

Elvor deflected both back to Goten. “Back to you, Bob!”

Goten got hit by both. He became injured and even angrier. Elvor raced up to Goten and slammed his knee into Goten's back, where his kidneys are, which bent Goten at a bad angle. The slam was so forceful, shockwaves hit the ground and the sand began to swirl below them, forming a sandstorm beneath them. Goten's back made a sickening CRRACK. Elvor launched a death ball at Goten, which hit him square in the chest. Goten was so angered, his power began to skyrocket at extreme levels. His hair remained black, but its style changed to look like Gohan's Super Saiyan 2 style. Goten's transformation reached a new high, Ultimate Form 2, and his power level exceeded 575 million and counting! Compared to the Super Saiyan 1, Full Power form (which doesn't deplete excessive amounts of energy), Goten's new form is more power conserving than Super Saiyan 1, Full Power, so Goten can stay in the form for an indefinite period of time. Goten's aura expanded to 15 feet in diameter. Elvor charged up to Goten again, but once he penetrated Goten's aura, he was burning like someone poured gasoline on him and set him on fire. Goten's power level was so high, his aura became lethal enough to obliterate Elvor in a matter of minutes! Elvor became grotesque, and began having second-degree burns all over him. He got out as fast as he can. Once Elvor was out, his skin was burned very deep, and was wrinkled so much; he looked like a large raisin.

“That's how Gohan felt like when he was being burnt by one of your damned Firewhirls. An ordinary human would've been vaporized if they tried to penetrate my aura.”

Elvor tried to heal, but to no avail. He was so damaged, he had no healing powers!

“Now I can avenge my big bro and turn you into a pile of bones, just like you did to Gohan. He meant a lot to me, he was like a hero. But you just had to come around and barbeque him! I will make sure you never leave this fight without being totally destroyed first!”

Elvor did not want to stick around for more. He launched a massive ki ball at Goten which wasted half his energy. Goten easily kicked the ball like a soccer ball and sent it up to the clouds. Goten retaliated and powered up. His aura reached nearly 60 feet in diameter and 120 feet in height. Goten suddenly had an idea that hit him like a brick. He shouted “Hell Wind!” and his aura began blowing in Elvor's way, gusting up to 175 miles per hour. Goten's aura began to whip Elvor to bits, giving him burns from the wind and Goten's lethal aura. Elvor felt like he was burning in hell. A layer of dead burnt skin flew off from Elvor, revealing a skin wet with pus. Goten flew right above Elvor and shouted “Now, Elvor, this is MY version of the Firewhirl!” Goten's aura began spinning faster and faster until it looked like a massive tornado out of control, clocked at a speed just barely exceeding 380 miles per hour. Elvor was fried like a fish in Goten's tornado-aura. After what seemed like 1,000 years, Goten slowed the firewhirl and freed Elvor, now horribly ugly, pus dripping down, this covered his entire body. Elvor was burnt so bad, he smelled like rancid 100-year-old eggs.

“Rotten kid! Make up your own d*mned attacks! Why can't I CURSE!”

After yelling his head off to Goten, he launched his signature move. He flew up into the clouds as if he was performing a suicide attempt. The clouds began rotating like a hurricane, as if Elvor was sucking all the energy from the clouds. He raised his hands into the air, like he was going to form a spirit bomb. Elvor began mumbling indistinct words and a red ball appeared above Elvor. It grew each second as Elvor continued absorbing clouds. After a few minutes, almost all the negative energy clouds that surrounded Earth were absorbed into Elvor's “Spirit Bomb.” The red ball grew to extreme proportions and Elvor began adding his own energy to the red bomb. The ball reached a diameter of over two thousand feet.

“Time to die! Taste the negative energy bomb!”

Elvor threw his massive negative energy at Goten. Wind began to pick up and it blew everywhere, throwing large quantities into the air. When the ball was very close to Goten, he put both his hands in the air. He caught the negative energy and tried to throw it back at Elvor. Elvor began to struggle to force it all the way to the ground. Goten continued to stand up stiffly and he still held the ball up. Elvor forced the ball down with all his might, letting out a groan of exasperation. With all the force behind the ball, Goten's legs began to submerge under the ground. It was so forceful, Goten's arms and legs began to buckle; they started to tingle in pain. Goten thought his bones would break under all the force. Goten was enraged by Elvor for trying to eliminate him, along with the entire planet. Goten threw the red ball back up into the air. The ball was under so much pressure, it exploded. The explosion would have blown a piece of crust off the face of the Earth. But since it exploded hundreds of yards away from the ground, it changed the entire landscape - and the sky. There was not one bit of rubble; the ground was covered in pure sand. The landscape looked more like a desert. The sky became dark red with all the negative energy concentrated in the air, and the sun even looked red. Elvor wasted too much energy, Goten thought. Panting, but still having more potential energy to uncover, Goten suddenly had an idea he and Trunks used when they tried defeating Majin Buu. Goten inhaled deeply and blew a bubble as if he was blowing bubble gum. The bubble detached and took the shape of Goten. It looked exactly like Goten, except it looked white and had a tail at the end instead of legs, and it floated a few inches above the ground, like a ghost.

“Meet doppelganger ghost No. 1.” Goten said calmly “I think we need more ghosts…” and with that, Goten blew more bubbles, which all began to look like Goten, except with the ghostly features doppelganger ghost No. 1 has. After Goten was finished, he spat out six doppelgangers ghosts all in all. Goten told them to huddle and he told them his plan. Elvor, curious about Goten's plan, stuck his head in the huddle of ghosts, and, in the process, touched one of the ghosts, which exploded on contact. The five remaining ghosts flew out and Goten teleported a few yards away to avoid being burnt. Elvor emerged from the explosion and limped his way towards Goten. He looked like an atomic bomb just exploded above him.

“Attack him!” Goten commanded.

The ghosts threw an assortment of ki attacks at Elvor, which made a series of explosions, and tons of sand was thrown into the air. A few grains got in Goten's eye, but he didn't care. In the aftermath of the assault, Elvor was extremely damaged; his left leg was missing, as well as his right arm. Also, body fluids were flowing out of the sockets like a perpetual waterfall. Elvor strained to stem the flow of the fluids. He tried healing, but failed. Goten commanded all ghosts to do a kamikaze attack, which all five ghosts rammed their heads into Elvor's stomach. The explosion was stupendous. A mushroom cloud of extreme proportions rose ominously against the red sky, penetrating the stratosphere, or even the ionosphere. After the mushroom cloud cleared up, Elvor had three limbs missing, and his body was damaged beyond repair. Only his left arm was the remaining limb attached to his body. Goten asked “had enough?” and kicked his head.

“Argh!” Goten kicked Elvor hard in the face, like a soccer ball. Somewhere, at the back of Elvor's head, his skull cracked. The nose bone was broken, giving Elvor a flat, bloody nose.

“D*mned kid!”

Elvor summoned the last remaining bits of his ki, gathered it in his left arm, somehow got back up, and threw a massive ki blast at Goten. It raced towards him faster than a speeding missile. If it would successfully explode, it would be a possibility that Goten would be knocked out cold, and maybe a fourth of the planet would be thrown into space! Goten caught the ball, but he struggled to stop it from moving forward. Elvor was enraged! Elvor had more potential energy to unlock, which he did like magic. He forced the blast to move forward and Goten was almost thrown backward. He nearly fell, but caught himself. An image of the tsunami running over Goku like an 18-wheeler squashing a squirrel appeared in Goten's mind. He thought of avenging his father, and he screamed so loud, people thousands of miles away could probably hear him. Elvor could hear him, and he laughed. “What's wrong kid? Is the blast too hot for your puny hands to handle? Or is it because you know you're going to die one way or the other?” Goten was enraged by Elvor's attitude. He didn't reply, but he gave a mighty thrust and the massive ball began moving towards Elvor. Elvor was shocked and forced the ki ball to move forward, but to no avail. Wind blew furiously on Elvor's side as if a monster tornado was in their midst. Elvor began giving it 100% to just move a ki ball back to Goten. The ball moved to Goten again, and he found the ball back in his hands. The wind picked up on Goten's side, distracting him. Goten couldn't see with the sand blowing into his eyes, but he still didn't care. Goten didn't notice, but his energy soared up to 750 million. A plan popped into Goten's mind, and he forced the ball upward instead of throwing it back to Elvor. Elvor let out a long wail of protest, but before he could do anything more, Goten followed in hot pursuit of the ball. Goten kicked it towards the sun, where it would be ripped to shreds. Elvor became serious and angry for once. His power level began to rival Goten's, and even exceeded his. He sprouted his missing limbs, his head repaired, and his skin looked brand spankin' new. Goten knew this was going to happen sooner or later, but he was glad it happened now, because he would be fighting Elvor until next morning. Elvor's energy continued to climb over 800 million, 50 million above Goten's reach. He felt invincible, as if he could easily defeat Goten now. He pointed his right index finger up at the sky, as if he was pointing up at nowhere but the red sky. A small red ki ball appeared at the tip of his finger. Elvor laughed like a madman, and the small ki ball began to exponentially grow, just like Frieza's attack on planet Vegeta. Elvor laughed even more, with a hint of evil in it. Goten just stared at Elvor, calm and natural.

“Oh, you won't be that calm when this thing hits rock bottom. There's also a surprise; I won't be aiming at you!”

“What the hell is that supposed to mean?”

“You'll find out.”

Still laughing, Elvor threw the massive ball at a seemingly random place. Goten instantly knew what Elvor was planning. He didn't aim at Goten because Goten would just intervene, so why kill Goten the hard way when you could just destroy the whole freaking planet and kill Goten the easy way?

Goten raced to ground zero, but the ball was extremely close to Earth now. Wind began to pick up again, and Goten knew he wouldn't make it in time. The sand started to swirl, creating another sandstorm. The ball nearly made a destructive touchdown when Goten successfully got in front of the ball. He put his palms in the air and caught the extremely hot ki ball. His hands began to sizzle - it was almost twice as hot as the surface of the sun! Goten forced it up, but still needed more strength. Before Goten could summon more strength, Elvor forced the ball down so hard, Goten fell and got crushed by the ball. The ball made touchdown, and the ground began to collapse, sending shockwaves across the planet. “This is over.” Goten glumly thought. “I'm sorry Gohan - I failed.” The ball began giving Goten third degree burns all over him. Then, Goten heard Gohan's voice in his head. “Don't give up now! Goten, listen! This guy tortured me and your dad. He worked for Frieza, a brutal, destructive, self-centered monster who thought only of himself before others. Frieza was so self-centered, he eradicated the Saiyan Race just to keep himself safe. You have to avenge the Saiyan race - don't give up. If you do, you will let another planet fall in Frieza's name. Remember that!” After Gohan's message, Goten's head was buzzing with all sorts of questions. But first, he must destroy Elvor! Goten got up, despite the searing pain of every scar burning on him. He tried again to thwart Elvor's attack. The ground below Goten began to crumble and collapse. Goten used every ounce of energy and anger to force the massive death ball off him. After minutes of straining, Goten finally lifted it a few feet off the ground. He could hear Gohan chanting in his head “Don't give up! Don't give up!” This made Goten realize he wasn't using 100% of his strength. It wasn't even near 40%! Goten summoned the rest of his strength until it hurt him, and forced the ball up…up…up until it was in the middle of Elvor and him. Elvor was outraged! He used more force, nearly tiring himself out completely. But Goten was still winning in this contest of force. Elvor forced it down so hard, he felt vertigo from being tired - blood was rushing down from his head, making him feel dizzy. The wind from both sides were so forceful, the ball began losing its shape. Elvor was so tired; he couldn't force it down anymore. He used the remaining bit of his strength to get out of the way so he wouldn't get caught in his own attack. When Goten knew Elvor got out of the way and completely gave up, he used all his strength until the ball sped faster than 17,000 miles per hour so it can escape Earth's gravity. It began to look like a comet, and rose higher and higher until it breached the exosphere. By the time that happened, it lost 90% of its size.

“Now it's my turn!”

Goten charged his energy. His power exceeded 900 million and nearly broke the 1 billion power level barrier. He raised his hands into the air and his aura expanded to an incredible size. Then, his aura went out of control - it exploded! Wind began blowing around harder than the jet stream. Goten suddenly lost energy - but the all the energy he lost was stored in the humongous ki ball above him. The ball took the characteristics of Goku's Spirit Bomb, but instead of gathering power from the world, he donated his energy to the bomb himself. After five minutes, his power level dropped below 500 million and Goten retrograded to Ultimate Form 1. Even though he retrograded, his aura was still exploding. His hair changed to his Super Saiyan 1 style, except it stayed pure black. Goten's power level fell like a rock … 300 million … 100 million … 25 million … now 17 million. Goten retrograded directly from Ultimate Form 1 to SSJ1. His hair returned to Gold, but his aura remained black. The ball was super large… larger than Elvor's last death ball… and Goten was keeping his spirit bomb compact! After Goten hit 15 million, he threw the massive spirit bomb towards Elvor. As he did that, his aura began to slow the wind down and shrunk to normal size - then in changed from black to gold. Elvor didn't have the time to get out of the way. He was immediately absorbed by the spirit bomb. His screams of pain suddenly ended. Goten thought it was over and he retrograded (once more) to normal. He was extremely happy - he avenged the Saiyan race and most importantly, Gohan and his dad. The spirit bomb exploded in the stratosphere, but Goten suddenly had a feeling that this wasn't over yet. He transformed into the power-conserving form of Super Saiyan 2 and turned around slowly. There, somewhere in that massive explosion, Elvor was still there. Goten knew he was hiding in that massive cloud of smoke. It took 20 minutes for the enormous amount of smoke to clear up, and it turned into global fallout. Had the bomb exploded on the ground, the planet would have been blown to dust. Heck, it would've overloaded a supermassive black hole! But still, Elvor was still there. His head was deformed, his skull was literally melted, his ribs were rearranged, and his limbs were twisted. Pus was squirting out of his scars again. “I figured you've had enough, hadn't you?” Goten asked annoyingly. Elvor was pissed. He was breathing hard and his shoulders were heaving, as if he was ready to puke. Elvor plunged towards Goten and slammed his head square into Goten's stomach… deep. Instantly, Goten knew he had enough, and so did he. He grabbed Goten's head and threw him back up into the air, and prepared for another kamehameha attack… except with his personalized version. He put his hands together and said nothing for 10 minutes, doing nothing but raising his power. Elvor was confused, but remained still (bad idea). Goten shouted “Ka…me…ka…me…HA!!!!” (Notice the second `ka', which makes it Goten's personalized version). Goten's aura exploded and seemed like an atomic explosion. An extremely massive kame'ka'meha exploded out of his hands, nearly 750 meters wide raced towards Elvor. Elvor, still dazed stayed in one place (still, bad idea). Goten became sick of how long this story became. For the first time, he felt his heart stain, stain so bad, he wouldn't be able to ride the nimbus cloud for a while. He really wanted to kill Elvor. When the wave hit him, Elvor couldn't retaliate, even if he wanted to. He was smashed and burnt literally to bits. The wave was traveling so fast, he was blasted out of the exosphere and into space. He passed the moon, but his body was still intact. A few minutes later, he saw the planet Mercury, and his limbs fell off. By the time he got crushed by the sun, he was nothing but dust. The sun tore the kamekameha wave to bits in an explosion that could destroy Earth. Back on our humble planet, Goten retrograded to normal and collapsed onto the sand. His clothing was torn and tattered. A few hundred yards away, Trunks ran up to Goten to see if he was okay. “Oh…my…Kami! That was awesome, man!”

Goten got up while Trunks was talking to him. He felt extremely vertigo. Trunk helped Goten to his feet.

“That was the best match I've ever saw! I should've brought my camera!”

“Come on, we gotta find my dad.” Goten said.

“Okay.”

After searching for 35 minutes, Goten and Trunks found Goku, neatly buried in tons of sand. Goten saw that his dad was still injured. They woke him up and Goku coughed up all the water he swallowed from Elvor's tsunami attack.

“What happened? Where'd the city go?” Goku said with a start.

“The city is totally destroyed by the battle. Not a bit of rubble can be found here. But that's okay, I destroyed him!” Goten exclaimed

“Yeah! It was the battle of the millennium! Goten could go over one billion and he has a new transformation!”

“Yeah, but dad, we should get the Dragon Ball so we can wish everything back to normal.”

Goku agreed and the trio retrieved all seven Dragon Balls to make their two wishes. Shen Long, the eternal dragon, came out of the Dragon Balls. Goten wished for the ones who were killed by Elvor's Negative Energy or by Elvor personally across the glove to return to Earth alive, except for any bad people. The first wish was granted. All the people that were killed in Elvor's atrocity returned to Earth in one piece. Satan City's civilians were confused, seeing that the buildings vanished and they were standing on sand instead of hard cement. Gohan yelled “Hey!” in the middle of all the people, getting Goten's attention. Goten looked to the right, hearing his brother's voice. He saw Gohan waving at him with Chi-Chi standing to the left of him. Goten's heart filled up and he could barely contain himself. He ran up to Gohan and hugged him very tight. A tear was forming in Goten's eyes.

“You thought I was gone for good, huh?”

“Yeah, I did. Guess who's the strongest in the universe now!”

“Uh… it's still me.”

“That's not fair!!!”

“Nothing's ever fair with you - you know you should go to -“

Shen Long became impatient and so did Trunks.

“Make your second wish.” Shen Long interrupted.

Just to shut Shen Long up, Goten wished for Earth to return to its previous state before Elvor showed up. The wish was granted and Satan City appeared where it was supposed to be. The sky turned blue and the sun turned gold as it was ready to set in the west. The clouds were back to being white instead of an ominous black. Shen Long bid farewell to Goten and the seven Dragon Balls were scattered across the globe. The Son family celebrated their victory over another Frieza slave and partied for a while.

“Come on guys, let's go home!”

Trunks wanted to play with Goten first. “Wait! Can Goten come over at my house?”

Goku allowed Goten to play with Trunks. He watched Goten and Trunks walk into the sunset, where our story comes to an end.

 

~ Disclaimer ~

I don't own Dragon Ball Z characters, cities, etc. However, I do own Elvor, some of his attacks, and Goten's “Ultimate form” transformations.