Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Avenge Frieza! ❯ I'll make my debut! ( Chapter 6 )

Goten was not in the mood for enjoyment. He felt wave after wave of immense hatred wash over him. His face began to reflect how he felt. He clenched his fists so tight, blood not only dripped, it spurted out of his fists. His heart began to race. The piece of pavement he stood on began turning scarlet. Soon, it was a puddle of red blood. Goten screamed in hate, angst, and rage. He couldn't take it. He screamed as if it would help ease the pain. He exploded inside, emotion flowing right out of him. His pupils shrunk so small, it was as small as the period at the end of this sentence. His arms began to vibrate up and down. Chi-Chi stared at him in terror - she was actually afraid of her own son. Goten's head turned blood red. Trunks went up to Goten.

“Hey, let's fuse so we can beat this guy.”

Goten stopped screaming… he didn't like the idea one bit.

“No way… no way… I don't think so. Gotenks will not appear in this story, Trunks. He's too immature. You're going to mess the story up. Elvor has done enough today. You don't know how I feel, Trunks. I feel like shit!!!”

Goten cursed at the top of his lungs. It was enough to turn Elvor's attention to Goten. “Hey, kid. You're like four years old. You're not allowed to curse like that. Only I can curse in this story, you @$$hole!”

Trunks saw that Elvor's curse word was censored by the author.

“Uh, then why did you say @$$hole instead of asshole?”

“Gah!” Elvor exclaimed “D@mn this author! Why can't I f*cking curse? I'm going to deal with these two before I get the author.”

Goten finally reached his boiling point - just looking at Elvor made him explode inside. Goten transformed to Super Saiyan.

“Elvor, you can kill my brother -“ Goten exploded to Super Saiyan 2 “You can try to curse -“ Something brown shot out from behind him. It was a tail! “You can see how durable my dad is, in the process, hurting him -“ Goten's hair began to lengthen. He became a Super Saiyan 3! “But nobody should ever mess with my family!” Goten teleported behind Elvor and he slammed his elbow into Elvor's back. His shoulder pierced Elvor, and Goten's elbow shot through Elvor's chest. Green juice squirted at Goten and also out Elvor's chest. Elvor began making choking sounds. Goten pulled his arm out of Elvor and his tail slammed into Elvor's side. It was enough to send him crashing into a 30-story skyscraper. The building collapsed onto Elvor and he was under almost 20 tons of rubble and steel. After 20 seconds, lightning from the negative energy clouds hit the pile of rubble. The rubble went flying in all directions and Elvor was screaming in rage. Then, Elvor appeared, fully healed after the dust cleared. Goten powered up and a golden aura surrounded Goten.

“Ka… me… ha… meeee… haaaa!”

A bluish-whitish wave raced towards Elvor. Elvor seemed to smack the wave with his hand, and then he sent it up to the sky, where the lightning bolts destroyed the massive kamehameha wave.

“You caught me off guard last time. Let me see how you react to this!”

Elvor extended a pointer finger at Chi-Chi, Goten's mom. Goten turned to see what Elvor was pointing at. Elvor then shot a small, thin, red energy wave at Chi-Chi. Goten saw the wave pierce Chi-Chi through the heart. Goten and Chi-Chi didn't get the chance to yell. Chi-Chi fell backward and died instantly. This added a huge amount of fuel to the monster flame in Goten. His heart shattered as he heard the sick thud come from Chi-Chi's body.

“You… sick… jackass - first my big brother, now my mom.” The fire became way hotter than hell! The two stars became a black hole! The hurricane went way over category five rating! The earthquake measured 9.8 on the Richter scale! Rage and power inside Goten became too much for an individual to comprehend. Goten just met the criteria for his ultimate form! Goten's hair began to recede back to normal size. His aura began turning gold to black, back and forth. His pupils shrunk, his hair turned from Gold back to black. It was styled in his Super Saiyan 1 style. His power level soared to 250 million. His aura was completely (but still transparent) black.

“250 million and still going! That's impossible!” Elvor exclaimed, as he read his scouter.

Goten's transformation was finally complete. He pointed a finger at Elvor like Elvor pointed a finger at Goten's mom. Instantly, Elvor was in pain, as if he was being crucified by the Romans. Elvor thought his skull would explode and his brain would fly in all three hundred sixty-five directions. After thirty seconds, Goten lowered his finger slowly. Elvor got up and charged after Goten. Calmly, Goten pointed at Elvor again, but this time a black sphere surrounded Elvor and began to compress to Elvor's size. More black spheres appeared and surrounded the first black sphere, creating countless layers of black spheres, each compressing Elvor like he was under 9,000 layers of cement. After the 13th sphere, miniature lightning surrounded the completely black super-sphere which contained Elvor. Goten lowered his finger down to his side swiftly, like he just did an army solute. The sphere immediately exploded without warning. The aftermath of the explosion was so massive; some buildings were reduced to nothing but rubble, some skyscrapers were tilting, the glass from the windows were blown off, and the pavement of the road Elvor and Goten were fighting on was cracked, making it look like a jigsaw puzzle. A crater appeared where Elvor was standing - it was deep enough to place a three-story building in it. Goten flew up and used an attack similar to the one Broly loves to use. A transparent sphere with a black filter surrounded Goten, and then compressed to become a yellow ball at the palm of Goten's hand, just smaller than a baseball. Goten threw it into Elvor's crater, which made the same planet-rocking explosion before. The remaining buildings were blown to nothing, the road was gone, and the city was reduced to nothing. The crater was wide enough to place a ship in it. Elvor, making it look like it didn't hurt him much, bravely crawled up to the top of the crater and climbed out. The scars Goten gave him healed quickly, and he looked brand new. Goten's face contorted into a more angry glare at Elvor.