Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Avenge Frieza! ❯ Torment ( Chapter 5 )

“The battle is far from over, Gokou.”

Elvor then pointed at the sky “Ball lightning!” then pointed at Goku. A massive bluish ball came down from the towering black clouds and hit Goku with a force so destructive; the windows from the surrounding skyscrapers broke. Some weak buildings even collapsed. Trillions of volts electrocuted Goku and afterwards, Goku felt a little vertigo. Elvor raced up to Goku and stabbed him in the stomach with his knee. He then slammed his fist into Goku's cheek, causing Goku to spit, then vomited to his right. Elvor grabbed Goku's hair, and forced Goku's face into his own puke.

“Eat it! Eat it now, you damned Saiyan!” Elvor forced Goku's face deeper into his own vomit and pavement.

“Damned Saiyan, you bastard, you don't know how to follow directions… how the hell are you going to get anywhere with your life?”

“Stop it!” Gohan stepped forward. “Stop torturing my dad!”

Elvor then shouted “Firewhirl!” up to the sky. A tornado descended right above Gohan from the ominous clouds. This tornado was massive, and instead of being covered by cloud, like all tornadoes are supposed to be covered by, this one was covered by white-hot, rage-burning, hell-storming fire. In an instant, Gohan was sucked into the firewhirl in an instant. He felt like he was burning in hell. He was going to be burned at 20,000 degrees, fried like a fish, and destroyed like a helpless little ant in a campfire. Gohan felt like he was going to explode - he screamed, but fire went down his throat, burning his trachea and his esophagus. It felt painful, like he ingested 1,000 needles and inhaled gas that cuts your air tube. His stomach and lungs were screaming in pain and torture. Outside, Elvor was enjoying himself. The buildings caught on fire and hot wind blew everywhere, choking everyone. For Goku, he was choking on his own vomit, not 200-degree wind. The vomit smelled like fish, had spots of rice, some mashed up cabbage, digested beef, and greenish-yellowish liquid, along with other indistinguishable items in his vomit. The vomit puddle was massive, showing Goku had just eaten a king-sized feast. Elvor then kicked Goku in the testicles and let go of his head just to see how he would react. Goku jumped up immediately and yelped in pain. Elvor laughed so hard, he couldn't even breathe. Goku jumped up and down, as if he was on a trampoline.

“You look like a dog that's reaching for some treats on a shelf you can't reach.”

Elvor laughed at his own joke and looked at the firewhirl he created just 15 minutes ago.

“Oh, right. Better let your son out of that hell, right Gokou?” Elvor then pointed at the firewhirl and made a few fast hand movements. The firewhirl dissipated and the 200-degree wind died down, leaving hot air standing.

“Let's see if your son is still alive, shall we?”

Elvor waited, and Goku still jumped up and down, as if his balls were on fire. For five minutes, nothing happened. Then, Gohan's bones fell into a pile right in front of Goku.

“That's the remains of your fried-up son. I wonder if I can find his skin, I bet he would be extremely tasty.”

“Gohan!!!” Goku shouted into the darkened, ominous sky. Goten stared at Gohan's dark, burnt bones. He had no expression on his face, but on the inside, he was dying. The only person who was kind to him was burnt to dust. Gohan was the only person who helped him in fighting, he was the only person who seemed to have sympathy for Goten, who understood him, who made him feel better, who cared for him, who… loved him. Now he is gone. Goten's sadness turned to rage. Tears began to obscure his vision. His rage began to go out of control. He felt a fire burn inside him. No, not an ordinary campfire, a fire as white-hot as hell, rage as destructive as two stars colliding, a hurricane brewing out at sea, an earthquake destroying whole cities! This is a rage nobody could comprehend, so deep, so strong, he thought his mom could feel his anger radiate off his skin! Then, Goten saw Elvor torture his helpless dad.

“That's right, taste that pavement!”

Elvor grabbed Goku at the back of his head and bashed the right side of his head into the pavement. On the first blow, Goku started to bleed excessively. A puddle of blood began to form on the piece of pavement Goku and Elvor were fighting.

“Ew, gross! You better not have HIV!”

“I don't. If HIV could infect a Saiyan like me,” Goku sputtered, “They might as well turn the `H' in `HIV' into an `S'.”

“Enough smart talk!”

Elvor sent Goku's head crashing into the pavement countless times. In between the smashes, Elvor mumbled darkly - he once yelled “This is what you get for defeating my master, Frieza!” By the 56th time Elvor smashed Goku's head, Goku nearly lost consciousness.

“I think you had enough torture. Let's give you another treatment.”

Whatever Elvor had in mind couldn't be good. Goku's right side of his skull already cracked and is ready to break and his blood is already gushing out of the right side of his head like the geyser, Old Faithful. He lost too much blood and the piece of pavement he was lying down on turned scarlet - his blood began to form a huge puddle. Whatever Elvor meant by “another treatment” couldn't be good.

Elvor then dragged Goku's face on the road. Using Goku's head, Elvor dug a trail about two feet deep into the pavement. Elvor then grabbed Goku's head out and slapped the back of the Goku's head. Goku spat some sand and rocks. Elvor gathered whatever Goku spat and threw it at him. It landed on Goku's face, then Elvor slammed Goku into a forty-five story skyscraper. The `scraper collapsed onto Goku, crushing him in so much rubble. When the dust cleared, Elvor pulled Goku out in a painful process.

“It's amazing how you're still intact and conscious after all I've done to you! You are so durable - but let's see exactly how durable you are.”

Elvor then shouted “Tsunami!” and the ground began to shake. You could hear a soft, low rumble in the distance.

“It will take a few minutes to get here, so let's get you prepared.”

Elvor applied some slime on Goku's back and made Goku fall backward, onto his back.

“It's my own superglue - you like it? It's strong enough to hold you firmly to the ground, so you won't be carried away by the tsunami.” The low rumble turned into a roar, the ground shook violently. Suddenly, a huge, massive wall of water appeared just down the street. It was over 175 feet tall, but only 15 feet wide, as wide as the street itself.

“Well, I gotta go. I don't wanna stick around so… catch ya later!”

Elvor flew up out of the freak wave's reach. The tsunami finally reached Goku - it was so forceful, he though his skin was going to be torn right off his bones. The water pressure was enough to make Goku think he would explode. Goku couldn't breathe, because if he did, his lungs would fill with water. Water kept on rushing in on him, it even rushed up his mouth and into his stomach - and he thought his stomach would burst by the time water overfilled his stomach. The crest of the wave came and his clothes were almost torn off, his hair was almost torn clear off his scalp. Goku took a breath of water and he choked on it. He tried to cough, but more water gushed in. Soon his entire respiratory system was full of water, and he lost consciousness. The monster wave passed, and Goku was lying down in standing water, just two inches deep with his eyes closed. Elvor checked up on Goku moments later.

“YES! Finally, I won at my own game! He finally lost consciousness!”