Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Goku the Monkey King ❯ The Story Begins ( Chapter 2 )

Goku the Monkey King

Part 2

Narrator: (clears throat) Long ago, there was an old rock in a fertile valley.

[We see a jungle-like area with a huge rock in the middle]

Narrator: The gods took a liking to this rock, and so they made a jade egg out of it.

[Goku's space pod crashes onto the scene. 'Ouch!' is heard from within.]

Narrator: (clears throat loudly) …and so they made a JADE egg out of it!

[Green paint magically gets splashed all over Goku's pod.]

Narrator: That's better! Now, the jade egg became fertile, and soon a monkey hatched out of it.

[The pod opens up and Goku steps out.]

Goku: (smiles) I'm here!

Narrator: Monkey roamed across the land and soon met other monkies! (whispers loudly) Goku! That's your signal! Cue the monkies!

Goku: Ok! (swishes his tail)

[A bunch of monkies show up and play with Goku]

Narrator: Monkey and his new friends traveled across the land until they came to a giant waterfall.

Goku: (Turns to the monkies) I've got an idea! Whoever can get through it becomes the Monkey King!

Monkies: (nod and cheer)

Narrator: Several monkies tried, but none could pass…

[A couple of monkies try, but don't make it to the other side of the waterfall. Goku steps up to try.]

Narrator: But the monkey from the jade egg made it effortlessly, and was therefore proclaimed the Monkey King.

Goku: Hiyaaa! (jumps over the waterfall and all the monkies cheer)

Narrator: Even though he had whatever he wanted, the Monkey King was unhappy.

Goku: (slumps in a tree, looking miserable) This is boring!

Narrator: (hits Goku in the head with a rock) That's not what you're supposed to say! That's not the reason you're unhappy!

Goku: Ow! (rubs his head) But I am bored!

Narrator: Just say your lines the RIGHT way!

Goku: Ok, ok! (sighs) I'm unhappy because I don't want to die.

Narrator: Good. Now then. The Monkey King was unhappy because he didn't want to die-

Goku: I just said that.

Narrator: You wanna get hit again?

Goku: No.

Narrator: Then shut up and do your part!

Goku: (slumps angrily)

Narrator: He didn't want to die, so he went in search of a means to become immortal.

Goku: (wanders around on winding roads) Geez, all I want is to learn to be immortal!

Narrator: In time, he met an immortal called the Patriarch Subohdi.

Goku: (comes to a door and knocks, but no one answers) Hey… (knocks more) Hello? Is anyone home? (sits down and waits)

Son Gohan: (opens the door) Who's there?

Goku: It's me! Go- uh, the Monkey King!

Son Gohan: What have you come for?

Goku: I wanna be immortal. Can you teach me?

Son Gohan: Only if you serve me and promise never to use your powers for evil mischief!

Goku: Ok! I promise! (follows Son Gohan in through the gate)

Narrator: The Monkey King served the court of Subohdi for several years. The Patriarch was pleased and so he began teaching Monkey the ways of the Immortals.

[Goku is seen practicing martial arts with Son Gohan.]

Son Gohan: Very good. Now, try turning into a cat!

Goku: Ok! (Goku jumps, a cloud of smoke appears, and when it disappears, Puar is standing there)

Puar: Tada! (Another cloud appears, and when it vanishes, Goku is standing there)

Goku: Alright! Cool!

Son Gohan: Now Monkey, you must never use your powers for trouble making! Do you understand?

Goku: Yes sir.

Son Gohan: Very well. I have taught you the ways of the Immortals, and as such you are now an immortal. Use your powers wisely.

Goku: (bows) Thank you Gran- I mean, Patriarch Subohdi. I'll never forget you!

Narrator: And with that, Monkey left for home and his friends.

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Sorry this update took so long! I've been busy with schoolwork and my other fanfic "Shi-Bun-No-Ichi Yasha" (Inu Yasha) Hope you guys/gals are enjoying this! I touched it up a bit since last time.