Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction ❯ Sex and the city:Dbz style ❯ Does this sound like an episode of days of our lives to you? ( Chapter 6 )

Hello everyone my comp ban has been lifted so I can update (does a crazy jig), I love all your reviews they are just lovely, I love u all, my song for the week diamonds are forever listen to it U ppl coz I LOVE IT, o and the game-dreams that's so SICK!!!(GOOD) LOL

 

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Kinoha: phew that was 1 long ass review, I take critism very seriously, about the 10 review thing, I knew it was wrong but I just wanted more reviews unfortunately I'm a competitive fucker lol in every sport, even writing and I wanted loads, It works for various writers and I thought I would try it out, and I gained 9 reviews so I'm not angry at the method, but I respect your views and I'm not going to do it again, because it was a bit childish and also I need a beta reader unfortunately grammar is what I lack, I mean as a writer I don't see the mistakes, that other viewers do, so I apologise for it, surprise surprise, that I got a B in English literature and a B in English language at GCSE lol I fool u not maybe my damn grammar would have earned me an A, also ill take on flamers they won't spoil my determination if they want to bite, ill bite right back, I encountered 1 in a fanfic I'm currently writing, they left the most stupid comment and I just gave her a piece of my mind, I am open minded about comments, so any issues you wish to address go on ill reply because that's what you must do it you want to write a good fanfic : ) lol his name is Calvin not Colin, and ill keep in mind the spelling of 18's name

Juuhachi-gou, I know how to pronounce it thanks to my Budokai games for PS2 but my spelling of it was only lil error no biggie, anyway I'm boring U read on and enjoy my attempt at good grammar lol.

 

Goku fanatic1: heya girl, I thought u would be sour about the review I left for your fic, im glad to hear from you, and I'm happy your enjoying reading it because I enjoy writing it so expect more chappies lol heres ya update for your reading pleasure

 

dark ki a.k.a. lee: hey I'm gonna be totally honest, I didn't understand your review, but I'm glad u reviewed anyway, I happy u like it and heres an update

 

Caryl Mc: YOU'RE A MEMBER CALL THE REPORTERS, AN AUTOGRAPH PLSSSSSSS, LOL damn straight I should be on your favs list I'm brilliant( Vegeta moment there lol), I couldn't watch live aid, dumb mother , stupid TV ban : (, watched BB though, Makosi is being dumb, bloody attention seeker, Kemal still rules, I was proper shocked when Maxwell left instead of Science, Science needs to get an education he has limited vocabulary and all he says is “U get me” or “I'm speaking to you on the level” get a dictionary DAMN IT, I hate Maxwell at least he left with Saskia's knickers, saddo loser, why does everyone think his name is Colin, Calvin is his name you lose brownie points lol, I'm rambling again so ill get on with your update, here you go!!, I guess I can spare you from my saiyan slaves, in fact ill give you one choose, (Goku, Goten, Gohan, Trunks, Vegeta, M.Trunks are off limits leaves you with crappy options BWHAHAHAHAAHA (Cough. Cough) so er choose or else it's the dungeon for U, It's punishment (I'm very weird), Diamonds are forever listen 2 it damn U by Kanye west love it 2much DUDETE! O one more thing, I read your profile, why are you scared to write you should girl, if you have an idea express it don't be scared ill help and review for you, like you did me if it weren't for reviewers like you supporting me, I may have lost inspiration, come on lets get your ego flowing and pride bubbling ( get a lesson from Vegeta) Confidence is the key

 

Lil sweetie: Heya thanks for the review, I think you're the only one who loves Radittz at the mo, lol I don't love him at all, damn idiot won't leave Goku alone, and in later chappies you will see more of Goku's family, hmmmmmmmm maybe his mother should make an appearance, lol if you love Radittz, you'll love her!! Here's ya Update, ps, I think I may feed oolong to Goku, he is annoying how the hell can a pig be perving on humans shouldn't he be after female pigs whatever they are called

 

Saiyajin Princess Chichi: I loved sex and the city too, I think this story is straying away from it's plot, but I'm trying to blend the two, I love G/CC not enough if them so I'm trying to fill in the blanks, glad u likey so here's an Update for u

 

gir3000: Geez Louise, I can't update everyday, ill get cramps in my hands but I'll try my best to give you one every other day is that ok (dodges rotten vegetables) fine fine, I'l try to be frequent here's your update U HAPPY? U BETTA B lol im weird

 

Gosha: heyagirl, I hope your hols ruled, it must have it got u off boring ol school, lol mmmmm I might be nice to Goku in this chappie I really don't know, I'll think about it as I go along, I love my goku-chan though I can't be evil all the time so maybe yea maybe not, you'll neva kno until you read.

 

super etarnal swordsman: Glad u likey, so here's an update, don't worry I'm continuing lol.

 

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Jeanna- hiya glad u reviewed again, kinda helped my ego, im glad your enjoying my fic, Veggie and Bulma are like rabbits never stop lol, goku and chichi have always been cute lol I'm just enhancing it, ummm your welcome to Radittz but he may end up with a surprise character so grab a box of tissues if that upsets you lol.

 

Heirresstothethrone- cheers for the review, there is gonna be a surprise twist that will shock U, I'm sure just wait and see because if I mentioned it, it would be a dead give away, anywho there would b defo more b/v lol but they aren't gonna go too smooth all the way, what kindof writer would I be if I don't create suspense with them lol here's ya update and I hope to hear from you soon.

 

Nakazaki- lol are you sure you haven't fallen for a particular character, here's your update

 

Dark kl- I'm happy I have changed your perception of G/CC I personally love them as a couple and hopefully more ppl can feel the same way because there is a serious lack in fanfics for them I'm glad you have been honest with your view of them, because it lets me know that people who don't like them can have their minds changed thank U, I hope u enjoy this update.

 

Nastia- I'm glad you like this fic that was my intentions lol, but may I say that your comment about the clothing, I feel the need to express it because it matters to me, you see when I write or read fanfiction, I have an active imagination and I want to feel like I can connect with the character male or female and see them like that, it helps with imagery, without descriptions they could look boring, it may sound dumb but it does help to have the descriptions because everything sets the mood, u can't go to a club dressed in a bin liner lol, but if I didn't describe it, it could be a possibility, cheers for the critism, any other issues you want to highlight feel free to leave them I'll answer and give reasons or improve. Heres your update : )

 

 

Damn that was long but it had to be done, I hope u enjoyed my comments people, I feel its important to relate with readers, so I can give you the right fiction, address any problems you have they don't all have to be comments praising the fic, but if you really like it then leave a comment saying you do I'm not opposed to those comments they give me an ego boost lol : )

 

Thanks for the reviews the mean a lot

 

Disclaimer: nope don't own it and never will

 

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Does this sound like an episode of Eastenders or days of our lives?

 

Vegeta was sat atop Goku's leather blue chair, watching various maids running around, in short black skirts, cleaning up the food mess in the kitchen, about 5 of them were situated around the room dusting and cleaning, he snarled they were so annoying, with stupid French accents, just because he couldn't understand them didn't mean he was stupid.

 

“Hey Vegeta what's better, tie or no tie” Goku came into the room, with only a towel on, that wasn't very modest, Vegeta growled and adverted his eyes.

 

“Put some damn clothes on before you address me” Goku looked confused before noting Vegeta's annoyance, he shrugged and went back to his room to change.

 

“Monsieur let me dust your room,” a blonde maid yelled quickly scooting in.

 

“Er Miss, you can't I'm about to change” Goku said as the maid started straightening the already tidy sheets.

 

“But sir, your room needs cleaning, I've never seen a room so dirty” she said while dusting the already clean cupboards.

 

“Um Ok if you feel it's necessary” Goku just scratched his head “I'll go change in the bathroom” Goku made his way the en suite bathroom, but the maid stood in his way.

 

“Sir, that place is dirty, I feel you should change in the room, while I'm dusting, the bath room is full of unhealthy germs” she said placing a hand on his muscled body and pushing him away, her hand lingered there longer then necessary, but Goku never noticed.

 

“Um maybe I'll just wait for you to finish, I mean the room isn't that messy it should take about 5-10 minutes right?”

 

The maid played with the feathers of her duster, before smirking “Actually, more like 2 hours. No less”

 

Goku frowned; “Well I'm sure ill be done in a few minutes” he began guiding the maid out of the room.

 

“But sir, sir you might get a life threatening disease if I don't dust and clean there” she spluttered

 

“I'm sure a few minutes with the dust particles wouldn't cause me lasting damage” Goku chuckled as he gently pushed the maid outside.

 

All the other maids laughed as the angry blonde walked to the kitchen to tackle the dishes that was her 23rd attempt to seduce their boss and they all knew from experience that he held no interest what so ever..

 

 

“Well babe, aren't you going to let me in?” the stranger asked

 

Chichi squealed “Yamcha, you never told me your back from LA” she said giving him a hug. ( A/N I HATE YAMCHA WITH A PASSION, but I'm not gonna bash him, well I will a lil lol, haha to all u who thought it was Calvin, any who he plays a role can u guess what? Brownie points if you get it right)

 

Yamcha chuckled as he returned the friendly gesture “Well that's the type of reaction I was looking for, not a what are you doing here? Your damn rude”

 

Chichi gave him a playful slap on the chest, “I was shocked you said that you won't be back for 2 years or something”

 

“Well I'll explain that as soon as I get out of your door way”

 

Chichi blushed “Sorry, come on in”, Yamcha grabbed both of his suitcases and came in.

 

“Just drop them in the corridor, and come to the sitting room, you have a lot of explaining to do”

 

Yamcha obliged and followed chichi to her sitting room, which was white decorated with mystical paintings of dragons, angels, unicorns and mystical creatures, she lead him to her white leather couch, and promptly ran to the joint kitchen grabbed a jug of lemonade and two glasses, she put it on a tray and set it on her square glass table.

 

Yamcha watched her pour the lemonade and give him a glass he accepted and drank thirstily.

 

“ Home made just the way I like it, I swear you should go into catering or something not only does your lemonade rock, but your food does too, chiche the chef”

 

Chichi giggled at the childhood nickname and wiggled her finger, “ Your complements won't fool me, so come on spill, why are you back?”

 

Yamcha sighed, as he leaned into the couch “Would you believe me If I said I missed you?”

 

“We have known each other since high school, why would you leave your baseball team to visit me? ”

 

Yamcha chuckled again, “I do care for you chich, but unfortunately you know me well” He sighed

 

“Well…. I'm waiting, SPILL!!” Chichi said impatiently

 

“Bulma”

 

Shock passed over chichi's face, she knew that the two parted on bad terms, Yamcha had to go to LA and fulfil his dream of being a professional baseball player, but he would be gone for 3 years.

 

Bulma had never accepted it and told him to choose, he had chosen his carer leaving her upset and angry, she was just as angry as Bulma, but he had called and emailed her, showing he still cared, she slowly forgave him over the 1st year of his absence, but Bulma remained adamant and ignored his messages.

 

“I still love her chiche, and as much as I want to forget her and her bossy ways, I love the way she would smile and get the twinkle in her eyes, I miss the way her hair would blow in the wind while we rode in her convertible, Fuck chichi I miss her so damn much” he cried out

 

Chichi touched her mouth, she saw a lone tear fall from Yamcha's eye, he swiped at it viciously she grabbed him and brought him into a bone crushing hug.

 

“ O Yams, I never knew you thought about her so much, what happened to Rayne?”

 

“One time we were making love and I called out Bulma's name, she never got over it” he laughed lightly and sniffed.

 

She chuckled lightly, “I bet Rayne loved that, so are you here to get her back?”

 

“Bigger then that I'm here to make her my wife”

 

 

 

Bulma and 18 were exercising the national sport that had swept women everywhere, and that sport was known as shopping.

 

“So B, I could see that you had a lot of fun last night” 18 laughed as she remembered the nights events and recalled the way she blushed red.

 

Bulma face looked the same, as it was the previous night when 18 mentioned it, causing 18 to laugh.

 

“Your not very funny 18, seriously I'll get you back for what you did” Bulma threatened

 

18 waved her of, “right right, I fear you, o business queen” 18 snorted “What are you going to do sue me to death”

 

Bulma smiled, “O don't worry, you'll get it”

 

“Worrying gives you wrinkles” 18 replied

 

Bulma laughed at the comment, as much as she wanted to stay mad at 18, she was too funny, but her humour wasn't going to save her from Bulma briefs wrath.

 

“O 18 I forgot to ask you how do you know the Z fighting dome president?” It had been chewing her all day and she had to know.

 

“Who?” 18 looked at Bulma weirdly as she made here way through the crowded mall.

 

Bulma raised a confused eyebrow, didn't he say she knew him.

 

“Er Goku Son, you know Multi-billionaire?”

 

18 still wore a look of confusion the name sounded familiar, then her eyes widened it sounded like the cute alien she had met the previous night.

 

“No way, he can't own that company?!” she yelled, DAMN she missed out again “Describe him Bulma” she said grabbing her shoulders.

 

Bulma looked confusedly at 18 before she started describing, “ Um really spiky hair, very handsome, well built not very bulgy just right, uh bout 6' 4”

 

18 froze sounded just like him, so her best friend was having sex not only with a sexy alien but a rich sexy alien life isn't fair.

 

She let go of Bulma and grumbled a “lets go” Bulma looked confused for a second time but shrugged it off and followed her angry friend.

 

Goku had finished straightening his suit; he wore a red silk shirt with black suit jacket and black slacks, he finished off with a pair of loafers, he smiled at his appearance Versace never let him down, he walked out of his room to find the sitting room emasculate and a pissed of Vegeta still on the blue couch.

 

“About bloody time!” He got up and dusted himself “Let's get your worthless brother so we can go to the club”

 

“Vegeta it's 6 aren't you gong to change? You can borrow one of my suits” Goku offered, capsule corp. was all the way in the west of Manhattan, it would take them a good hour to get there.

 

Vegeta shrugged before answering, “I just want to give your brother some slight education in the running of my business, I have a suit made up at club” he then swore remembering that he had left his guest pass for the capsule bash at his apartment.

 

“Well I guess being a little late won't harm our reputations too bad” he finished slightly annoyed, “But if a certain IDIOT IS GOING TO HURT BAD IF HE DOESN'T GET HIS DUMB ASS UP HERE PRONTO”

 

A shuffling sound could be heard both Vegeta and Goku's eyes met in confusion before they heard it again followed by a giggle, Goku frowned as Vegeta cursed he went to the walk in jacket closet and yanked it open, Radittz stumbled out with his trousers down his ankles, the blonde French maid from before fell ungracefully on her rump.

 

“PULL YOUR DAMN TROUSERS UP! AND LETS GO!” Vegeta screamed annoyed with the display.

 

Radittz pulled his trousers up hurriedly in an attempt to shield his white boxers decorated with hearts, as the maid buttoned her top up to cover her breasts.

 

“I'm very disappointed in you Lara” Goku commented as he shook his head “Radittz this is the 5th maid I've caught you with if you keep this up I'm going to have to employ guy maids”

 

Radittz flinched, “Sorry Kakarot couldn't help myself,” he muttered as he looked at the ground.

 

“As much as I would love to watch your version of days of our lives, I have no time for your bullshit, come now before I lose all my patience” Vegeta snarled as he walked out of the pent house followed by a disappointed Goku, an embarrassed Lara and a sexually frustrated Radittz.

 

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Lol I bet u r all swearing at me for finishing here but it felt right to, so review 4 me and leave comments critsisms woteva ya want although flamers back of coz I bite, Kinoha knows that lol