Fan Fiction / Crossover Fan Fiction / Sailor Moon Fan Fiction ❯ Eclipse ❯ Chapter 2.5: Reply ( Chapter 4 )

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okay, this is a response to a review sent in from Bunny Aino.

First, thank you for putting your criticism as nicely as possible, you didn't have to, and it was nice to see that some people actually have manners. Also, you raised some interesting points that I feel that I should have explained.

1. You're right. Usagi is too pure to wear leather or something so revealing. But my whole story is based on the fact that Usagi is not what she seems. She was pure, and she was not under a spell.... well, not one that would change her attitude anyway. Her mother is Queen Neherenia, NOT Queen Selenity. Basically my story revolves around the fact that when Queen Selenity sealed her sister, Queen Neherenia, in the mirror, she discovered her niece, Siva. As Queen Selenity was heirless at the time, she adopted young Siva, placing a strong glamour on her to make her look like Queen Selenity instead of Queen Neherenia. Queen Selenity raised her niece as her daughter, taught her to love things, to see the good in people. She loved Siva as her own.

Follow the basic Sailor Moon plot, up until Sailor Stars. Usagi/Siva thought that she was Princess Serenity, because she was... in every sense but blood.

And she isn't evil. She's just dark. She will still defend the innocent, and will sacrifice her own happiness for the happiness of others, but she just goes about it a different way. And as for why she's so... violent, she's just discovered that her friends aren't her friends and her mind is being swamped with the darker side of her bloodline. Eventually she will settle down into a more gentle bunny. Just wait. K?

2. Mamo-baka will be in here later. But because I forgot to add it in the next chapter, I'll just tell you now. The scouts didn't mention their plan to him until they were sure that they could bring 'their' Serenity back. He won't try to change her back, because technically, she isn't his betrothed. (I really don't like Mamoru)

How they got princess Serenity there when Usa's still alive will be explained later.

3. The senshi don't want to kill her. They want to destroy the evil. You've got to remember, of all of the senshi, only Sailor Moon had the ability to change the villains into good people. If she succumbs to the darkness, they will have no choice but to destroy her. They know that. So, in their minds, she obviously could not be Serenity, because Serenity was pure, not dark. So they want to bring the true serenity back and destroy the darkness. (I'm still debating whether or not I'm going to have the senshi realize what is going on and have them try to apologize to Usa, or if I'm going to make them the bad guys)

Does that answer anything? If it doesn't, just continue reading, as I didn't want to give away too much. And this is not a Usagi-goes-nuts-and-kills-everything-mary-sues. I promise.

I'm also not quite sure what I'm going to cross this over with. Harry Potter would be nice, but I really can't write anything but slash fiction for Harry potter, so that's out. So far, the choices are:

Gundum Wing

Labyrinth

Nightmare Before Christmas

Pitch Black/ Chronicles of Riddick

Underworld

Pet Shop of Horrors

YuGiOh!

Dragon Lance

Take your pick and e-mail me. Poll ends on February 14.

Ja ne,

Ceris Malfoy