Fan Fiction / Zoids Fan Fiction ❯ With You ❯ Alcohol and the Aftermath ( Chapter 2 )

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With You

Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids, as much as I wish it to be true, it isn't.

Therefore, I do not own any of the characters within Zoids. Nor do I own

the song With you, or, now, And One. Both by Linkin Park. This is

however, only like 3/4 of the song. There was one hip-hop style part that I

felt was unnecessary to this chapter.

Chapter 3

Alcohol and the Aftermath

Raven and Fiona had been dating for a month. Raven had joined Van and

Fiona in their journies (mostly due to the fact that Fiona would be with him

24/7). One night Fiona and Raven went out to a club, while Van stayed at the

hotel they were staying at. They were both drinking heavily, but for some

reason, Raven wasn't becoming drunk. Fiona, however, was.

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Where should I start?

Disjointed heart

I've got not commitment

To my own flesh

And I'm left all alone

Far from my home

No one to hear me, to heal my ill heart, I

Keep it locked up inside

I cannot express to the point I've regressed

If anger's a gift, then I guess I've been blessed,

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"Come on," said Raven pulling Fiona's hand. "We should be getting home."

"What--what are you talkin' bout? One more drink," said Fiona. It was

obvious by the way she walked and talked that she was drunk.

"No," he objected. "You're drunk as it is. Anymore and you'll collapse on

the spot."

"Alright," she said with a smirk on her face.

Raven dragged her out of the club. He got in the car and drove back to the

hotel (remember, the drinks had no effect on him).

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I

Keep it locked up inside

Keep my distance from your lies

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He picked her up out of the car and carried her into the hotel room.

"I love you," said Fiona.

"I love you, too" replied Raven.

Fiona began to take off her shirt.

"Lemme get out of the room," said Raven.

"No," she objected. "I want you to stay."

"For what?" he asked.

"I think you already know," she said suggestively as she walked towards

Raven. She beagn to unbutton his shirt.

"I can't," said Raven pushing her hands away.

"Why NOT???" she asked.

"Becuase, you drunk, and we've been dating only for a month. Let's wait a

while," he said, trying to talk some sense into her.

"I can't wait," she said walking up to him again, "I want you now."

"No," he said pushing her away again, "it wouldn't feel right."

"Then get out," she said.

"Fine," said Raven walking out the door.

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It's too late to love me now

You helped me to show me

It's too late to love me now

You don't take a word in

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Fiona began to cry as he slammed the door. "What have I done????" she

asked herself when she became a little more sober. "How could I have done

that to him? I have to appologize to him." She ran into the bathroom just in

time to puke into the toilet. "I'll appologize to him in the morning," she

noted before she began to throw up again.

Raven ran to Van's door and knocked.

Van answered the door, "What's up, Raven?"

"Fiona is drunk," he replied.

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Breaking a part of my heart to find release

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace

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"And?" asked Van.

"She wanted me to fuck her. I wouldn't and still won't. When I refused, she

kicked me out of her room," said Raven.

"Are you serious?" asked Van.

"Yea," relied Raven putting his hands on his head.

"She's always tellin' me she's gonna save herself for until she gets married,"

said Van.

"Alcohol can mess with your mind sometimes," said Raven.

"If she's so drunk, why aren't you?" asked Van.

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Breaking a part of my heart to find release (Break)

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace (Me)

Breaking a part of my heart to find release (Too)

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace

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"Those weak drinks don't affect me that much. Hell," he said, "it would take

like 50 shots of their strongest stuff to get me tipsy."

"I see Mr. Tough Guy," Van replied. "You wanna stay here? They gave me 2

beds instead of 1."

"Sure," replied Raven.

Van showed Raven to his bed. Raven jumped into the bed fully clothed and

before he fell asleep said, "Oh, and Van...if you ever call me Mr. Tough Guy

again, I will strangle you with my bare hands. Goodnight."

With that, Raven fell asleep.

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Keep it locked up inside

keep my distance from your lies

Breaking a part of my heart to find release (Break)

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace (Me)

Breaking a part of my heart to find release (Too)

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace

Breaking a part of my heart to find release (Break)

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace (Me)

Breaking a part of my heart to find release (Too)

Taking you out of my blood to bring me peace

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An hour later, Van was still awake. There came a knock on the door. Van

looked over at the clock.

" 'Suddenly there came a tapping, as if someone gently rapping, rapping on

my chamber door. 'Tis some visitor, I muttered, tapping on my chamber

door, only this and nothing more.' "

He opened the door and Fiona stepped in.

"Is he in here?" asked Fiona.

"Yes," replied Van, "he's sleeping right now. He told me what happened."

"I was drunk," she said, "I couldn't do anything. I wasn't thinking straight.

He, however, was smart enough to say no to me. Thank God he isn't that

type of guy." Fiona stared at the sleeping form of Raven. "God, he looks so

cute."

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Keep my distance

Keep my distance

Keep my distance

Keep my distance

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"He's sleeping," said Van, "don't wake him up."

"When he wakes up will you tell him to talk to me in the morning and that I

came?" asked Fiona.

"I was already planning on doing that," said Van. "I'll send him to you in the

morning."

"Thanks Van," said Fiona. "I'll talk to ya later."

Fiona walked out of the door. Van moved over to his bed.

"Sleep time," said Van to himself as he slid into bed and began to fall asleep.

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The clock turned to 8:00 A.M.

"It is such a nice day here on Zi. Sunny, barely any clouds, exactally the

weather a Mr. Raven hates. If he would wake up soon, he could maybe get

something to eat or GO VISIT A GIRL NAMED FIONA!" said Van

standing right next to the bed Raven was in. Raven woke up and reached for

Van's throat. His hands missed Van's throat, but managed to grab his shirt.

"Why the hell you wake me?" asked Raven.

"A Mrs. Fiona came in last night. She told me to tell you to visit her in the

morning because she was soooooooooooooo sorry. She wanted to

appologize to you in person, but you were sleeping. She said, if I may quote

her, 'God, he looks so cute', while she was staring at a sleeping you," said

Van.

"Really?" asked Raven letting Van go.

"She said she would be in your room. Go to her," said Van.

"Thanks," said Raven running out of the room.

To Be Continued...

a/n: You detail freaks that have read this before might have noticed that I

made some changes to this, including:

--The Quote from Edgar Allen Poe's-The Raven

--The change from "She wanted me to screw her" (when I originally wrote

this, it was intended to be on a PG-13ish level, now, since I've upped the

rating to R, I can add all the swears and phrases I originally cut out!) to "She

wanted me to fuck her".

--Also I added Van's crack about Mr. Tough Guy and Raven's reply.

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