InuYasha Fan Fiction / Fruits Basket Fan Fiction ❯ Much Needed Help ❯ unhappy with the story ( Chapter 5 )

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Ok, I was looking over my story and the more I think about it the more I dislike it. I'm of taking it down and reworking it and trying to finish it then reposting it. I would like to know what you the readers thinks of the work I've done so far. Leave it and add to it or delete and rework it? PLEASE LET ME KNOW!
Ja ne!
Kimi