InuYasha Fan Fiction / Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Vertigo ((Used to be something about polar bears and crayons. x3)) ❯ Chapter 3
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
Haku:: o_____o Chapter 3. =D I realize by now my story sucks. To clear things up. At first, the boss character was supposed to be scary. However, I found out that there is NO WAY I can make some evil red-eyed demon scary. Because I myself find evil red-eyed demons adorable. o__o *cough* Anyways, so if you will all find it in your hearts and humor me, and pretend the guy is kinda scary, and that my story makes sense. It will, I promise!
Modoko::...The story sucks. >/ The fight scene is horrible. It sucks.
Haku::...No...it doesn’t. At least, not to me. If you don’t like it, then don’t read it. Now...do the disclaimer thing......- draws her katana.-
Modoko::....-in a flat tone.- YuYu Hakusho does not belong to Haku, nor does InuYasha.
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Chapter three.
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No words were exchanged as the three stepped closer together. The demon before them stood, a mighty seven feet, towering over the three young women. It wasn’t until Kagome reached for an arrow and nocked it, infusing it with her own energy that they finally saw what their prey looked like.
The term angel suited him well. His hair was a silky midnight black, reaching just a tad bit past his waist. Muscular but lean, he held himself with a sort of noble ease, one of his clawed hands resting on the hilt of his long sword. He wore a deep crimson red fighting kimono ][ are there such things?][ tied with a black silk obi ][ the sash?][, which also bound the katana as well. On his feet were wooden sandals, rising about 3 inches off the ground. ][ Like the kind Hotaru has in Samurai Deeper Kyo. Those sandals are waaaaay cool. x3][ His outfit went together perfectly, but the most wondrous feature about him were his eyes. Deep, alluring crimson hues glared out at them from heavy lidded eyes, boring into their very souls. ][ how many times have you heard that one? - snicker.-][ Those orbs captivated them, binding them to that spot. in fact, all there were so lost in those eyes that they didn’t notice until too late that he was only inches away from the three. ][ basically, the general picture I’m trying to paint here is kinda like Kyo, from SDK, in his real body, not Kyoshiro’s. o___o Only a bit taller. And demonic.][
Rin was the first one to snap out of their daze. Kicking out her right foot, she shoved Kagome and Sango over, while reaching for her guns. She barely had time to draw them before the demon wrapped his deadly claws, tapered to a fine point, around her neck, efficiently cutting off all air. Rin choked, as she aimed a kick to his mid-chest, attempting to get him to relax his hold. He merely stumbled back as her foot connected. With a growl, he rushed forward to slam her back against the wall, making her see stars.
Sango rushed forward as she saw Rin being forced upon the sheet of metal. Reaching behind her, she wasted no time in throwing Hiraikotsu, then followed up with her katana.
“Rin! Duck!” She shouted as the boomerang flew towards them. The demon dropped Rin, none too gently, onto the floor and spun around, narrowly missing the giant thing of bone as it ricocheted off the wall and back into her hand. She placed it on her back and began a downward slash, which was parried by the demon, who in turn, forced her blade aside and kicked her away from him.
After being tossed aside, Rin rolled over to where Kagome was. Drawing her guns, she took aim at the demon ][ I have the urge to call him Kyo now....p__q][ and let loose, knocking about 6 or 7 silver imbedded bullets into him. He let out a howl of outrage as he thrust the hilt of the sword into Sango’s ribs. with a speed none of them could ever hope for, he flung himself across the room and clawed at Rin, causing her to drop her guns as his lethal fingers raked across her wrists.
Kagome, seeing her friends fall, fired arrow after arrow at him, with deadly accuracy, piercing through the skin of arms, chest, lungs, one of his beautiful crimson eyes, and lastly, as blood spurt out, his heart.
He fell to his knees, then forward, and there he lay. Crumpled on the floor as the slow yet torturous process of purification began eating away his insides, reducing him to nothing but a glowing pile of ash.
Kagome reached out to sweep the leftovers of the demon into a leather bag, which she sealed with her own aura. In a flash of silvery-blue light, the bag disappeared, leaving no trace it had ever been.
Gathering her fallen comrades, Kagome made her way through all the carnage and walked straight out the front door, not stopping for anything until they were safely back at their own apartment.
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Haku:: Ha. I’ve finished. - reaches for the box of Pocky.-
Modoko::......- takes the Pocky away.- >)
Haku::...p___q Evil bastard. - claws at his back.- Gimme mai Pockeh!
Modoko::....Nope. -eats it.-
Haku::....- sits down and cries.-
Modoko::....- mean laughter.-
Haku::...I got a review! Yay! I was happy. It’s nice to know people actually attempted to read my story.....>/ I hope they keep doing so....even though it takes me forever to update....I should’ve finished my story then entered it...>/ Arigato Yabun-san. You’re the first review I’ve had! I’m happy you read it, even though it’s really bad, I know, and I spend way too much time on these note things than the actual story...>_>;; - goes to work.-
Technically, no one is supposed to know about my sake...seeing as I just might be a tad bit underage...o___o;;....
Modoko::...The story sucks. >/ The fight scene is horrible. It sucks.
Haku::...No...it doesn’t. At least, not to me. If you don’t like it, then don’t read it. Now...do the disclaimer thing......- draws her katana.-
Modoko::....-in a flat tone.- YuYu Hakusho does not belong to Haku, nor does InuYasha.
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Chapter three.
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No words were exchanged as the three stepped closer together. The demon before them stood, a mighty seven feet, towering over the three young women. It wasn’t until Kagome reached for an arrow and nocked it, infusing it with her own energy that they finally saw what their prey looked like.
The term angel suited him well. His hair was a silky midnight black, reaching just a tad bit past his waist. Muscular but lean, he held himself with a sort of noble ease, one of his clawed hands resting on the hilt of his long sword. He wore a deep crimson red fighting kimono ][ are there such things?][ tied with a black silk obi ][ the sash?][, which also bound the katana as well. On his feet were wooden sandals, rising about 3 inches off the ground. ][ Like the kind Hotaru has in Samurai Deeper Kyo. Those sandals are waaaaay cool. x3][ His outfit went together perfectly, but the most wondrous feature about him were his eyes. Deep, alluring crimson hues glared out at them from heavy lidded eyes, boring into their very souls. ][ how many times have you heard that one? - snicker.-][ Those orbs captivated them, binding them to that spot. in fact, all there were so lost in those eyes that they didn’t notice until too late that he was only inches away from the three. ][ basically, the general picture I’m trying to paint here is kinda like Kyo, from SDK, in his real body, not Kyoshiro’s. o___o Only a bit taller. And demonic.][
Rin was the first one to snap out of their daze. Kicking out her right foot, she shoved Kagome and Sango over, while reaching for her guns. She barely had time to draw them before the demon wrapped his deadly claws, tapered to a fine point, around her neck, efficiently cutting off all air. Rin choked, as she aimed a kick to his mid-chest, attempting to get him to relax his hold. He merely stumbled back as her foot connected. With a growl, he rushed forward to slam her back against the wall, making her see stars.
Sango rushed forward as she saw Rin being forced upon the sheet of metal. Reaching behind her, she wasted no time in throwing Hiraikotsu, then followed up with her katana.
“Rin! Duck!” She shouted as the boomerang flew towards them. The demon dropped Rin, none too gently, onto the floor and spun around, narrowly missing the giant thing of bone as it ricocheted off the wall and back into her hand. She placed it on her back and began a downward slash, which was parried by the demon, who in turn, forced her blade aside and kicked her away from him.
After being tossed aside, Rin rolled over to where Kagome was. Drawing her guns, she took aim at the demon ][ I have the urge to call him Kyo now....p__q][ and let loose, knocking about 6 or 7 silver imbedded bullets into him. He let out a howl of outrage as he thrust the hilt of the sword into Sango’s ribs. with a speed none of them could ever hope for, he flung himself across the room and clawed at Rin, causing her to drop her guns as his lethal fingers raked across her wrists.
Kagome, seeing her friends fall, fired arrow after arrow at him, with deadly accuracy, piercing through the skin of arms, chest, lungs, one of his beautiful crimson eyes, and lastly, as blood spurt out, his heart.
He fell to his knees, then forward, and there he lay. Crumpled on the floor as the slow yet torturous process of purification began eating away his insides, reducing him to nothing but a glowing pile of ash.
Kagome reached out to sweep the leftovers of the demon into a leather bag, which she sealed with her own aura. In a flash of silvery-blue light, the bag disappeared, leaving no trace it had ever been.
Gathering her fallen comrades, Kagome made her way through all the carnage and walked straight out the front door, not stopping for anything until they were safely back at their own apartment.
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Haku:: Ha. I’ve finished. - reaches for the box of Pocky.-
Modoko::......- takes the Pocky away.- >)
Haku::...p___q Evil bastard. - claws at his back.- Gimme mai Pockeh!
Modoko::....Nope. -eats it.-
Haku::....- sits down and cries.-
Modoko::....- mean laughter.-
Haku::...I got a review! Yay! I was happy. It’s nice to know people actually attempted to read my story.....>/ I hope they keep doing so....even though it takes me forever to update....I should’ve finished my story then entered it...>/ Arigato Yabun-san. You’re the first review I’ve had! I’m happy you read it, even though it’s really bad, I know, and I spend way too much time on these note things than the actual story...>_>;; - goes to work.-
Technically, no one is supposed to know about my sake...seeing as I just might be a tad bit underage...o___o;;....