InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ shiver me timbers ❯ chapter 5 ( Chapter 5 )
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By: black flame kitt 
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Adventure | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 04.07.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 874 | Visits: 555 | Status: Work In Progress
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Adventure | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 04.07.2007 | Pages: 1 | Words: 874 | Visits: 555 | Status: Work In Progress
'ello minna
I just wanted to say a couple of things real quick then you can read chapter 5.
Thanks to all that reviewed and just to let you know the ones who guessed correct were:
Tweak
Icywolfflame
and
anonomous_angel
also it was brought to my attention that the dialog is hard to read so I am going to try something new for when they speak so tell me if you like this way better or if not tell me how you would like me so write it where it is easy to read.
I dedicate this chapter to " anonomous_angel" for all the wonderful advice she has given me. ( if you are not a girl please tell me and I will fix that.)
chapter 5 (dedicated to "anonomous_angel")
“Umph! Ugh! Grr! Damnit!” A young girl of ten years mumbled under her breathe as she attempted to get in the carriage but her rather poofy dress was having other ideas. Finally The girl managed to get in the carriage a few minutes later when the driver gave her a push that sent her sprawling into the carriage. Sitting down on the covered bench to wait out the long ride to her uncle’s friend’s house she looked toward the window to look out side but she only saw her reflection. In her reflection she could see her long brown hair, which she would have up in a ponytail, but she was forced to wear it down because that’s what all the ladies of the courts children have theirs. She stared at her brown eyes that were reflected back to her the eyelids were covered with pink eye paint as they call it.
Looking further down at herself she glared at the bright pink poof dress that her mother made her wear for this trip.
(Brown haired girl’s point of view)
How anyone can think this horrible dress is pretty is beyond me. Oh well I just hope we get there soon so I can get out of it. I can’t believe that mom is sending me away I wanted to be there when the baby comes. But no I have to go to My uncle’s friends house and stay with them. At least I heard that there are two other girls there around my age. Oh man I am sleepy I guess that is right since I was forced to get out of bed before dawn so I could pack my stuff and head to this place. Apparently the minute mother got the okay from my uncle she sent me out the door oh well I think I will take a nap till we get there…
( a couple hours later)
“ Miss Sango. Miss Sango! We are here. Wake up!”
I wake up instantly, forgetting where I was, and jumped up banging my head in the process which in turn made fall out of the carriage flat on my face in a mess of bright poof that I begrudgingly call my dress, great first impression huh? I was pulled off the ground by a man with short black hair and dark brown eyes. I am assuming that this is Naru, my uncles friend. Behind Naru stood a tall woman with brown hair and beady black eyes geez I didn’t know anyone could look that creepy. To the creepy woman’s left were twins although on closer inspection one had really dark hair while the other had a more brownish tint to it. Of course they were wearing the same style of dress as me, poof poof and more poof. But the light haired one seemed to be happy wearing it while the dark haired one looked slightly uncomfortable. It was then that I realized that Naru was talking.
“Everyone this is Sango, Sango this is my wife Kani and my two wonderful daughters Kikyo and Kagome. You will be staying in the room by Kagome’s so if you don’t mind she can show you around because I have a meeting to go to.”
With that said Naru got in to the carriage that just showed up and took off while the creepy woman and Kikyo went in the house leaving me with Kagome. She walked forward and said,
“Hi I am Kagome its nice to meet you.”
She then stuck out her hand a bit reluctantly. Normally I don’t shake hands with people because they can feel the calluses on my hands from playing in the forest when moms no home but I had no choice so I shook her hand. Our eyes widened at the same time as we realized that the other had calluses on their hands too.
AN: I am sorry but I have to get up early in the morning so I can’t write anymore even though I promised to tell about her training in this chapter. I am sorry but I will explain everything in the next chapter I promise. Please don’t hate me.
I just wanted to say a couple of things real quick then you can read chapter 5.
Thanks to all that reviewed and just to let you know the ones who guessed correct were:
Tweak
Icywolfflame
and
anonomous_angel
also it was brought to my attention that the dialog is hard to read so I am going to try something new for when they speak so tell me if you like this way better or if not tell me how you would like me so write it where it is easy to read.
I dedicate this chapter to " anonomous_angel" for all the wonderful advice she has given me. ( if you are not a girl please tell me and I will fix that.)
chapter 5 (dedicated to "anonomous_angel")
“Umph! Ugh! Grr! Damnit!” A young girl of ten years mumbled under her breathe as she attempted to get in the carriage but her rather poofy dress was having other ideas. Finally The girl managed to get in the carriage a few minutes later when the driver gave her a push that sent her sprawling into the carriage. Sitting down on the covered bench to wait out the long ride to her uncle’s friend’s house she looked toward the window to look out side but she only saw her reflection. In her reflection she could see her long brown hair, which she would have up in a ponytail, but she was forced to wear it down because that’s what all the ladies of the courts children have theirs. She stared at her brown eyes that were reflected back to her the eyelids were covered with pink eye paint as they call it.
Looking further down at herself she glared at the bright pink poof dress that her mother made her wear for this trip.
(Brown haired girl’s point of view)
How anyone can think this horrible dress is pretty is beyond me. Oh well I just hope we get there soon so I can get out of it. I can’t believe that mom is sending me away I wanted to be there when the baby comes. But no I have to go to My uncle’s friends house and stay with them. At least I heard that there are two other girls there around my age. Oh man I am sleepy I guess that is right since I was forced to get out of bed before dawn so I could pack my stuff and head to this place. Apparently the minute mother got the okay from my uncle she sent me out the door oh well I think I will take a nap till we get there…
( a couple hours later)
“ Miss Sango. Miss Sango! We are here. Wake up!”
I wake up instantly, forgetting where I was, and jumped up banging my head in the process which in turn made fall out of the carriage flat on my face in a mess of bright poof that I begrudgingly call my dress, great first impression huh? I was pulled off the ground by a man with short black hair and dark brown eyes. I am assuming that this is Naru, my uncles friend. Behind Naru stood a tall woman with brown hair and beady black eyes geez I didn’t know anyone could look that creepy. To the creepy woman’s left were twins although on closer inspection one had really dark hair while the other had a more brownish tint to it. Of course they were wearing the same style of dress as me, poof poof and more poof. But the light haired one seemed to be happy wearing it while the dark haired one looked slightly uncomfortable. It was then that I realized that Naru was talking.
“Everyone this is Sango, Sango this is my wife Kani and my two wonderful daughters Kikyo and Kagome. You will be staying in the room by Kagome’s so if you don’t mind she can show you around because I have a meeting to go to.”
With that said Naru got in to the carriage that just showed up and took off while the creepy woman and Kikyo went in the house leaving me with Kagome. She walked forward and said,
“Hi I am Kagome its nice to meet you.”
She then stuck out her hand a bit reluctantly. Normally I don’t shake hands with people because they can feel the calluses on my hands from playing in the forest when moms no home but I had no choice so I shook her hand. Our eyes widened at the same time as we realized that the other had calluses on their hands too.
AN: I am sorry but I have to get up early in the morning so I can’t write anymore even though I promised to tell about her training in this chapter. I am sorry but I will explain everything in the next chapter I promise. Please don’t hate me.