Loveless Fan Fiction ❯ OBEDIENCE ❯ pain! ( Chapter 2 )

 

TO MY LOVELY REVIEWERS!

 

Rabidfan:

I'm sorry I'm making all of you wait so much. Basically, it was because I don't have much time to write a whole chapter. So I'm writing a little and updating every few hours… or at least I hoped do. -___- thank you for the reviews none the less.

 

Mz.Bitz:

No one appreciates their relationship, I hope to some day make a fiction for Soubi and Ritsu that doesn't involve endless abuse. -sighs- like that will happen.

 

Ashcat:

I love it! I had no real idea of how to finish this but yes! Ritsuka should comfort Soubi… and maybe kiss his `booboos' as well as a few other things… thanks for the inspiration!

 

SephielyaMaxwell:

*sweat drop, nervous laughter* Well, I'll make a note to steer clear of cliff hangers then. Just one thing… I'm not an `onna' as you put it. I'm a male. >.< everyone assumes I'm woman though.

 

 

 

 

 

Warm arms wrapped around him. One hand settled on his stomach, pulling him closer as the other latched onto the front of his pants.

 

Soubi instantly stiffened, “Sensei!”

 

“Calm down, Soubi.” The older man said calmly.

 

“Wh-what are you doing?” Soubi asked, grabbing onto the hands in an effort to still them.

 

“Soubi, let go.” Ritsu instructed calmly, “It's useless to fight the inevitable.”

 

Soubi slowly let go and allowed the man to undo his pants. The garments were slid down his legs and he stepped out of them obediently, leaving his backside completely exposed.

 

He calmed his breathing slowly as he heard Ritsu folding the pants and setting them aside, watching the delicious blonde with sadistic love no doubt.

 

“This has never been part of the lessons before.” Soubi stated.

 

“I've decided I needed to make a stronger impression on you.” Ritsu stated.

 

*CRACK*

 

The whip struck Soubi's bare end and he immediately protested, “Sensei!” he spun around angrily.

 

Ritsu fixed Soubi with a deathly glare, “Turn around Soubi.”

 

Soubi remained still, staring at the man with hatred, “I wont.”

 

“Then it will hurt more.” Ritsu stated, lifting the whip threateningly, knowing that Soubi would eventually choose the lesser of two evils.

 

The blonde glared at his Sensei, daring him.

 

Ritsu brought down the whip in a fluid motion, relieved when Soubi turned at the last second, saving his flawless chest and stomach from abuse.

 

*CRACK*

 

Soubi cried out with a small amount of anger mixed in with his surprise and pain. His body was arched beautifully from the pain on a more vulnerable area. Because of his last minute turn, the strike traced his side, over his ribs.

 

“You shouldn't have tested me, Soubi.” Ritsu justified as he raised his whip and struck Soubi's ass, allowing the whip to linger long enough to leave a mark all the way down to his thigh.

 

Soubi cried out again, falling to his knees. Ritsu leaned on his desk, sipping from his water as he waited for the blonde to make his way to the wall for support, then the whipping would continue.

 

“I can't take any more.” Soubi stated, ashamed with his weakness.

 

In truth, he had enough pain tolerance to take much more, but it was the humiliation of his bare ass being displayed and punished by his teacher that was so unbearable.

 

“Get up, Soubi.” Ritsu ordered.

 

Reluctantly, Soubi made his way to the wall, crawling a good portion of the way.

 

Ritsu watched the motions with great joy. Just like a feline, Soubi's back moved in smooth rhythmic motions as his arms and legs carried him further in graceful steps.

 

When he reached the wall he got on his knees, placing both of his hands against the surface for support.

 

Soubi took a few deep breaths before trying to pull himself up. Little did he know that Ritsu was a little to excited to wait for him to be standing.

 

*CRACK*

 

The strike elicited a sharp cry again. Soubi's head fell back and his hips instinctively bucked forward, instinctively trying to get away.

 

Ritsu stepped a little closer so he could get a better view, “I thought we were past this, Soubi.”

 

*CRACK*

 

Soubi rested his head against the wall with a mewl of pain, “Pa-past what?”

 

“You're crying out. You were trained to withhold such signs of pain.”

 

“Sensei, it hurts, and it's… your whipping my-”

 

*CRACK*

 

“Excuses.” The man replied after relishing Soubi's anguished cries, “Luckily I can teach this to you again.”

 

*CRACK*

 

“Ah! Sensei no.” Soubi whimpered as the whip connected with his ass.

 

“Yes, I will. And I will continue to teach you until you learn to stop showing pain. Bite your teeth and bare with it.” Ritsu commanded.

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

Soubi released a pained whimper as he bucked against the wall from the pain.

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

Ritsu continued to whip his subject, relishing every cry of pain that was made.

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

Soubi finally begged, “Sensei! Please, forgive me!”

 

*CRACK*

 

“You will be forgiven once you've taken your punishment.” Ritsu answered.

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

“Sensei, onegai! Please stop, Sensei. It- it hurts.”

 

*CRACK*

 

“Of course it hurts, that's the point.”

 

*CRACK*

 

“Please! No more, Sensei!”

 

*CRACK*

 

“Not until you do as you've been ordered.”

 

*CRACK*

 

This time Soubi only slightly flinched. His forehead pressed against the wall and his nails digging into the plaster.

 

*CRACK*

 

Soubi's muscles tightened slightly as the strike crossed over a parade of others. But he said nothing.

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

Ritsu continued his onslaught, trying to bring at least a mewl of pain that would justify more time for torture.

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

*CRACK*

 

Soubi still remained silent, though his shoulders shook slightly and muscles flexed under the pain.

 

The older man walked towards the blonde, gripping his hair and pulling him up.

 

Soubi clenched his teeth and closed his eyes tightly as he was wrenched to his feet by his hair. The boy stumbled but was kept in place by the firm hand in his locks.

 

“You've stopped making noise.” Ritsu stated as he examined the boy's face, noticing bite marks on the lower lip and trails from tears running down the cheeks.

 

Soubi tried to turn his head from his captor, embarrassed to show his tears.

 

He didn't have to stand it long though; Ritsu lead him to the desk, letting Soubi find support against the surface before leaving for the moment.

 

The blonde contemplated what the man's next move would be. He noticed, in a somewhat distanced way, that the butterfly that had been pinned earlier was still moving, though very slowly.

 

Soubi jumped, somewhat startled when a wet cloth touched his cheek. Slowly the cloth washed away the evidence of his tears, leaving his face with its usual perfect texture.

 

Ritsu sighed, “That's better, Soubi.”

 

Soubi was quiet for a moment. He raised his head hopefully, “Is it over?”

 

Ritsu sighed, “Almost, Soubi.”

 

The young man seemed somewhat relieved, though deeply troubled as to what the rest of his punishment would be.

 

“What are you going to do, Sensei?” Soubi asked in a meek voice.

 

 

((I'm sorry I'm cutting off here for now! I'm trying to update the stories that have been reviewed! *sighs* no rest for the weary. Well, back to the grind stone)).