Loveless Fan Fiction ❯ OBEDIENCE ❯ continued ( Chapter 3 )

TO MY LOVELY REVIEWERS!:::

 

AshCat:

Yes, I intended to have Soubi's thoughts in there a little more, but ended up doing it more from Ritsu's point of view mainly because I thought a peek into his mind might be interesting. Upon your request this chapter shall be a bit more from Soubi's point of view.

 

SephielyaJMaxiell:

Thank you, I can sleep with ease tonight knowing that you aren't going to attack me with Ritsu's whip. ^____^;;

 

RabidFan

Yes, I'm a male. *sighs* not many male yoai writers out here today. Oh well. And yes, a lot of people say this is cool… I still cant quite understand why. -___- it must be a woman thing. Sorry I had to cut off so suddenly by the way… but, here's more, so I'm making it up to you.

 

 

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FEAR ME!

 

 

Soubi jumped, somewhat startled when a wet cloth touched his cheek. Slowly the cloth washed away the evidence of his tears, leaving his face with its usual perfect texture.

 

Ritsu sighed, “That's better, Soubi.”

 

Soubi was quiet for a moment. He raised his head hopefully, “Is it over?”

 

Ritsu sighed, “Almost, Soubi.”

 

The young man seemed somewhat relieved, though deeply troubled as to what the rest of his punishment would be.

 

“What are you going to do, Sensei?” Soubi asked in a meek voice.

 

Ritsu answered calmly and directly, “I'm going to do the worst thing imaginable to you. With the worst done, Soubi, you wont have anything to fear.”

 

Soubi went silent, shivering slightly as possibilities of what the `worst' would be passed through his head.

 

He felt himself being turned towards the desk and he went along with the movement obediently.

 

When Soubi put his hands on the desk to support himself he noticed the large blue butterfly, its wings had stopped moving, but its legs tapped around as its antennas swirled, confirming it was still alive.

 

With a small bit of inspiration, Soubi relaxed, telling himself he was going to make it, no matter what.

 

Ritsu's leaned against the chair behind the desk, realizing that Soubi was distracted, he decided to take his time.

 

He removed his jacket; tie and shirt then undid his pants, pulling them down beneath his hips.

 

The teacher stood behind Soubi, wrapping his arms around the youth and pulling them closer together.

 

Soubi hissed as Ritsu's sweat glistening chest pressed against the open lacerations over the blonde's back and rear.

 

The youth was about to complain but was cut short when Ritsu shoved his length inside Soubi's entrance. The forced entry elicited a long scream from Soubi.

 

The blonde arched away from Ritsu, trying to push off the arms that encompassed him and held him close.

 

Soubi shook his head, his eyes widening with fear and hate.

 

“No! No! Not again! Never again!” Soubi cried angrily.

 

“You remember your first time with me? When I took your precious little ears?” Ritsu asked, biting the top of Soubi's ear as he thrust into his tight anus again.

 

“Stop it! Don't!” Soubi grit his teeth and opened his eyes, looking to the butterfly, as if it would help him.

 

The stronger man wrapped his arms around the other tighter, forcing Soubi to put his arms to his side and allow his back to be pressed against his instructor's chest.

 

“Soubi, take it, feel every moment of it, this is going to remain with you for all of your life.” Ritsu whispered into his ear.

 

The blonde whimpered, partially from the words but mostly from the salty sweat of Ritsu's chest that trickled into his open wounds.

 

Soubi cried out as the unduplicated member pushed in and out of his abused hole. His cries of mercy were soon reduced to single word pleas, “Sensei… please… don't… don't! Stop! Please!”

 

“What was that? Don't stop?” Ritsu mocked, “I wouldn't dream of it Soubi.”

 

The blonde bit his lip and tried not to scream.

 

His most private areas were mercilessly opened and ravaged, and in moments he was trembling, haven broken down to his anger and stress.

 

Soubi couldn't believe this was happening to him again, and by the same person no less. For so long he'd fought to become stronger, to protect his master… and himself… from this.

 

Yet here he was, going through the same agonizing experience.

 

Blood coated the teacher's member, making his movements more slick but hardly less painful for Soubi.

 

Ritsu slid a hand down Soubi's stomach till he reached the groin. He found that Soubi had not grown hard, at all.

 

Soubi grit his teeth as his `rapist' stroked his member, but he kept himself from being the least bit aroused from any of the caresses. Eventually Ritsu lost interest, giving Soubi at least a small amount of pride to hold onto.

 

The younger man closed his eyes and lowered his head, giving up completely.

 

Finally Ritsu arched, thrusting deeply into Soubi, successfully forcing the young man onto his toes to accommodate.

 

As he released his seed into his student, Ritsu bit the youth's neck, growling in a carnal way.

 

Soubi remained motionless as the cock was removed and he was let go of.

 

The blonde gripped the side of the desk hard, his knuckles turning white. His face was stoic, eye down cast and bland. His breaths were deep and hollow, trying to calm himself.

 

Ritsu leaned forward and whispered, “I've done the worst to you, Soubi. No one can ever defile you, disgrace you, humiliate you, or hurt you more than I have. You will never fear anyone or thing now, because compared to this it is nothing.”

 

The blonde took in the words silently, trying to force the pain off of his body.

 

Ritsu turned and left the room after quickly dressing, “I suggest you dress yourself and leave. Or should I call on someone to help you.”

 

“No, Sensei. I'll do it on my own.” Soubi replied, humiliated at the thought of any other students seeing him in this way.

 

“You will be gone in 5 minutes.” Ritsu stated, closing the door behind him.

 

Soubi nodded, still trying to compose himself. He opened his eyes and noticed the large blue butterfly was again flapping its wings again.

 

He narrowed his eyes and realized that it hadn't been pierced properly, the needle hardly even going through the body.

 

The blonde reached forward and pinched the head of the needle, pulling it up, releasing the butterfly.

 

After a few seconds of batting its wings, gaining its composure, it lifted into the air.

 

Soubi watched it with a small smile as it calmly made its way around the room before slipping out the window.

 

The war craft put on his clothes, and left the room quietly.

 

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BONUS ENDING:

 

(Note: the bonus ending is only a bonus ending to this chapter, not the fiction. There's still at least one more chapter coming up.)

 

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Ritsuka walked down a street towards Soubi's home, deciding he'd stop by to see how his `beloved' was doing.

 

One his way he noticed a large blue butterfly just in front of him. He stopped and watched it, closing his eyes for a moment when he could almost swear he felt Soubi.

 

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The butterfly disappeared of course, and when Ritsuka opened his eyes he noticed Soubi stepping up the stairs to his apartment.

 

Ritsuka decided he'd go talk to him, finding himself rather excited by the sight of his beloved.

 

 

 

((AHEM! This was made at freaking 12:40 A.M!{consider time differences}And its too damn late for me to be able to put much more effort into this. So I finished this chapter about 4 hours after finally completing the second chapter.

I hope you all enjoy this and if you are disturbed by something, tell me and I'll change it. I probably left out a lot.

 

Love you all, hope you enjoyed, keep reviewing, makes me feel nice. ^____^