Ranma 1/2 Fan Fiction ❯ Ranma Vs. Krueger ❯ Ending/Bonus Features ( Chapter 5 )

Opening Comments: Okay, here is the fifth and final part of Ranma Vs. Krueger. Following the end of the section will be some "Bonus Features", including story statistics, some comments on the creation and ideas behind the story, as well as a few "deleted scenes", things from the written draft that didn't make it to the final typed draft. In the meantime, enjoy this conclusion to Ranma Vs. Krueger!

Revision Opening: Yeah, this is it. Hopefully the last thing I'll have to post of Ranma Vs. Krueger aside from a possible commentary version at Dimi-Chan and Juton's Secret Stash (more about that in the conclusion).

Ranma Vs. Krueger: Part 5

EXT. GRAVEYARD -- DAY, OVERCAST

PRIEST

We now lay Nabiki Tendo, Tatewaki Kuno, his sister Kodachi Kuno, Ukyo Kuonji, Dr. Tofu, Ryouga Hibiki, Happosai, Mousse, Cologne, and Shampoo down to rest. While their passings were both regrettable and untimely, let us not give in to sorrow, for they have all gone to a better place. And though I walk through the valley of the shadow of… (incoherently continues speaking)

DIMI-CHAN

(whispering to Juton) How come they don't usually have funerals for all the people who die?

JUTON

(whispering back) Probably because there are so many of them.

D-CHAN

Yeah, it's kinda weird having one funeral for ten people, isn't it?

JUTON

Now could you please stop talking, I'm trying to listen to the sermon.

D-CHAN

It's really boring, anyway…

JUTON

Shh!

PRIEST

…and greener pastures ahead. Let us pray.

FADE TO BLACK

Text: A couple weeks later…

FADE INTO…

INT. A ROOM IN A CHURCH -- AFTERNOON

Ranma's dressed up in a tuxedo, and talking to Juton.

RANMA

Remind me again why I'm renewing my vow's with Akane hardly a month after we made our first ones?

JUTON

Because she said she wanted to have a quote, "real wedding night and honeymoon"".

RANMA

(starting to grin) Oh yeah, thanks for the reminder, my best man!

JUTON

Me and Dimi-Chan, we haven't even gotten married once and you're already about to have a second one. It makes me feel like we're a bit behind.

Dimi-Chan bursts into the room dramatically.

DIMI-CHAN

Ranma! Juton! You guys are gonna be late! It's not everyday I get to be a maid of honor! C'mon, let's move it!!

Ranma and Juton sign, and follow Dimi-Chan to the Chapel.

INT. CHAPEL

Ranma and Juton get into place, Genma is in the seating, still staring blankly into space. Is he ever going to get over that "incident"?!

The organ begins to play the wedding march and the bridal progression begins.

Dimi-Chan seems to skip down the aisle, in fact-she IS skipping down the aisle!

Juton groans and slaps his hand to his forehead.

Dimi-Chan nearly runs over the flower girl, who only just manages to get out of the way in time.

Then comes the bride, holding her father's arm (not the other way around) down the aisle. It seems perhaps that both their parents may never recover, oh well… Eventually, Ranma and Akane stand next to each other, and this they're actually smiling this time.

PRIEST

We are gathered here today… We fade to black again… Text: Around a month later…

INT. LIVING ROOM, THE TENDO DOJO -- DAY

AKANE

Ranma, I've got some good news!

RANMA

What, Akane?

AKANE

I'm pregnant!

RANMA

UH…UH…UH… (faints)

KASUMI

Oh my, what if Freddy decides to come back by haunting the dreams of your unborn child?

AKANE

Well, I did my research too, Kasumi. But the last time he tried that it didn't turn out so well for him. Why would he try it again?

We then zoom into Akane's womb, where a baby is growing inside (it shouldn't have this many distinctive features at this stage of the pregnancy but WHO CARES?!) but there is something very wrong, its fingers look they've got claws, and its face, it looks just…LIKE…FREDDY'S!!!

CUT TO BLACK

Akane screams

KASUMI

Oh, my!

Freddy laughs maniacally.

After a few moments the laughter fades, then Dimi-Chan speaks her wisdom.

DIMI-CHAN

And THAT, my dear Juton, is why we use birth-control! Mmmm hmmm.

The credits roll.

The End?

BONUS FEATURES

A menu pops up with cool graphics, Ranma standing to one side of the menu and Freddy to the other. It's one of those things where the characters talk and wait for you to make selections, then it eventually turns into a loop. We can select either Ranma or Freddy's bonus features. We choose Freddy first, of course!

FREDDY

You'll like my bonus features, they're a real scream! Ahahahahahahahaha!!!!

The following Features are listed in the "Freddy Menu":

Statistics, Bringing Freddy into Anime, and Who is Dimi-Chan?

We watch them in order.

STATISTICS

Body Count: 10

Wisecracks from Freddy: Approximately 28

Main Characters Still Alive: 7

2 Adults, 3 Young Ranma Characters, and Dimi-Chan and Juton are the last two

Number of times that Kasumi screams: About three.

Number of times that Kasumi says "Oh my!": About 8.

Bringing Freddy into Anime:

JUSTIN (A.K.A. JDHGAMER)

The idea for Ranma Vs. Krueger really started with me becoming a HUGE Freddy Krueger fan, and since by the time I became a fan, Freddy Vs. Jason had been out of theaters, I had to turn to the novelization, and I did take a couple things from it and put them into this story. But in any case, Freddy Krueger had to be VERY comical and slapstick in this story, more akin to Nightmare 6: Freddy's Dead where they decided to take a Warner Bros. approach, simply because this story combines Freddy's universe with Ranma's anime universe, and therefore the comedy simply has to shine on Freddy's part to match with the nature of the anime show and Manga. It's also interesting to note the contrast between the sadistic humor behind Freddy, and the slightly humor light-hearted humor that I tried to touch on a bit (but in retrospect I see far more sadistic humor than light-hearted) in the story. So unlike other fans, Wes Craven purists and such, I thought that the comedic side of Freddy was kind of fascinating and I for one found it funny and refreshing, although I do realize that he's scarier in parts 1 and 6, and even 2, where he's not a super wisecracker. I liked the idea of the "elaborate deaths" that he'd give his victims, based on there talents, their characteristics, and PARTICULARLY ones based on their flaws. For instance, the first death scene involves Nabiki, the greedy type that takes advantage of people, she first ends up on a Monopoly board, in a game that's all about money and such, then of course, she dies via photographs, which represent the photos she takes of Ranma and Akane and sells to Kuno without their knowledge or permission. Kuno's death is in an art museum, it's not entirely symbolic of any character flaws, but it's more based on the "artsy" characteristic I've seen in

Kuno, how he always seems to speak in sonnets and such. There are then two nightmare sequences where, although the characters do not die, Freddy takes advantage of their fears, another trademark Freddy concept. Firstly, Akane's fear of rape, signified with the hentai-esque, but done with as much good taste as I could muster, tentacle scene, then in addition to that, Ranma's fear of his girl-form being violated. In the next scene, along with the constant "cat" puns, is Freddy playing on Ranma's fear of cats, and it's worth noting that Ukyo's line when she knocks out the "Freddy Cat" is taken from Wes Craven's New Nightmare, essentially his own words being used against him. Which brings us to Ukyo's death, while having nothing to do with her skills, fears, or character flaws, it's mostly because this character is liked by quite a few people, including in part myself. So those people might not like to see Freddy humiliate Ukyo, so she dies a reasonably heroic death after she saves Ranma from the Freddy Cat. Then there's Dr. Tofu, there's a deleted scene that you'll see in that section where I actually "show" Freddy jumping into Dr. Tofu's body, I deleted that for pacing and as not to patronize the reader/audience. His death scene, in case you haven't noticed, is a riff off of the movie Alien, with the chest-burster scene. I call this scene the "Freddy-Burster scene, and it's one of my favorite jokes in the story. Next is Ryouga, who leads us into are next elaborate death scene. What a better way to torment the "lost boy" then to put him in a gigantic maze. The whole "experiments" thing was devised after I finished writing the story and felt that it was too short, and this scene in particular was missing

something. It went straight from Ryouga falling into the pool of water and becoming P-Chan to Freddy making his infamous "Fresh Pork" line. So I devised the scene where P-Chan wandered around the maze and got "experimented" on by Freddy, before finally getting cooked and Freddy giving his line. Next is Happosai, obviously based on his character flaw of being a womanizer and overall pervert. In the scene, his heaven becomes his hell and of course in the end he begs to be killed. Mousse and Cologne's deaths were another added scene to increase the length of this story. Mousse's death was a homage to what Robert Englund (the actor who plays Freddy) considered to be one of his favorite "kills" in Nightmare 6 where he steals a kids hearing aid. I, being a wearer of glasses myself, thought it would be interesting for Freddy to do something similar, but with a "vision aid", so to speak. While the scene is much more brief than what happened in Nightmare 6, it still bears some similarities. Cologne I just wanted to have her know about who Freddy is, but then be hopeless to destroy him, although some people might argue that she wouldn't be defeated so easily, despite the fact that I was trying to extend the story, there was still a matter of pacing, and that in the end, I'd have to end up having her killed, anyway. Then there's Shampoo's death, based mainly on her character flaw of "coveting" Ranma. I added in a scene between the first scene at Nekohaten and the scene with Shampoo to at least get the reader/audience to think that maybe it IS Ranma, or at least for a brief moment, and also to show that Ranma is in fact entering the dream world now. On a final note for this scene, I took a line from the novelization which was changed, and I feel appropriately given the fact that she wasn't actually saying anything. "Your lips say no,

but Freddy says YES!", it seemed to fit into this scene perfectly, so I used it. Then there was Freddy trying to "intimidate" Ranma with the cooked P-Chan, I love this part because Ranma just punches him in the face instead of getting freaked out. The final death scene, Kodachi, was the least to do with any character flaws, although she was killed with her own ribbon, which was kind of cool. The way Freddy ultimately "dies" could be seen as a cheap thing, the whole "ki energy ball" concept which my sometimes co-writer and basis for the character Dimi-Chan said was "overused" in most fan fiction. I decided to poke fun of it a bit more in the final draft, because I couldn't come up with a more complex way to "kill off" Freddy, plus I'd already written one of my first elaborate death scenes. So in the end, Freddy's "killed", but the question we must ask might be "is he really?".

A clip is shown of the "surprise ending" and the cut to black as Freddy's laughter rings.

We show the copyright disclaimer, then return to the Freddy Menu, where we select

Who is Dimi-Chan?

JDHGAMER

Dimi-Chan is a character I created with my ex-g/f and still sometimes co-writer, who is based on her, kind of. The real girl behind Dimi-Chan is catholic so there are some OBVIOUS differences. Dimi-Chan and Juton were first introduced in published fan fiction as Dimi-Chan and Silent Juton in Chasing Akane. Originally, I'd intended to keep them as Dimi-Chan and Silent Juton in any later fan fictions, until I had the idea to use them in non "Ranma-Askewniverse" stories. I decided that Juton would only be "silent" in those stories, but you can learn more about him in his featurete in the Ranma menu. Dimi-Chan is always the quirky and occasionally crazy girl of the couple, in Chasing Akane she's a lemon head, in Ranma Vs. Krueger, the second published fan fiction she appears in, she's a quote "Sadistic Psycho Bitch". The weird thing about her character, which I have realized, is the fact that readers/viewers might not be sure whether to like or hate her. But I say to them, if you hate her, you should be hating yourselves as well, because Dimi-Chan serves as the perspective of a crazy horror movie fan, who loves blood and gore and elaborate death-scenes, and somehow realizes that nothing that actually happens has any real consequence, so hence she enjoys it. I also think that as soon as you see/read about her dancing in a fountain of blood, you'll pretty much understand that her character is NOT to be taken so seriously as to warrant hatred. Dimi-Chan and Juton are always opposites of each other or one level or another, representing my concept that opposites attract, no mater how ridiculous the differences between the two people are. That and that Juton insists that underneath that sadistic maniacal psycho-bitch exterior lies a heart of gold. O.o

FADE TO BLACK

And there's that copyright thing again.

We go back to the Freddy menu and exit back to the main one.

FREDDY

Aw, leaving already? Well, sweet dreams then! Ahahahahahaha!!!

In the main menu, we then select Ranma.

RANMA

'Bout time you picked me!

In the Ranma menu, there are the following selections.

Getting Closer Through Adversity: Ranma and Akane, Crossing Over: Ranma Enters Freddy's World, Who is Juton?, and Deleted Scenes We go through these in order.

Getting Closer Through Adversity: Ranma and Akane

JDHGAMER

I was once told by a reviewer that Rumiko Takahashi always developed her characters by putting them through adversities. I decided that this story would be about just that, putting Ranma and Akane through the worst adversity I could think of-Freddy Krueger. The story is set after the end of the manga series, and some may argue that they are developed a bit too backwards at the beginning, and perhaps too far by the end. I had to make Ranma and Akane's relationship a little awkward at the beginning. Yes-they allowed themselves to get married, they've developed that far. Yes-they've allowed their parents to put them in the same room during the honeymoon, they've developed that far. No-they haven't done what married couples tend to do on their honeymoons, they haven't developed that far. No-they haven't admitted that they "allowed" this to happen, they believe, at least outwardly, that they were "forced" into this, because they haven't developed far enough yet. It was a balance and counterbalance of things that I thought worked reasonably well. They "consented" to be wed to each other, they could've said no, and it may not have happened, but they didn't and it did. They could've said "No way!" when their parents demanded that they share a room, and just maybe they would've won that battle, but obviously they either didn't, or didn't demand it enough to be taken seriously. So basically, deep down they DO have feelings for each other, and they ARE starting to acknowledge them by allowing these things to happen, however they aren't really that close to actually acknowledging anything yet. I felt that this was a great way to

set up their relationship at the beginning of the story, and I hope that at least a few people agree with me on that, or that those who initially didn't, upon seeing/hearing this explanation, will be like "Oh, yeah I guess that DOES make sense." The characters, from that point develop through the "adversity", the first key point being after the near "rape" scene where Ranma saves Akane. At first, she pushes Ranma away, but then she realizes that she "needs" him to a certain extent, and hence I begin playing in the theme of Ranma being Akane's "protector", and Akane admitting that she's almost always seen him that way. The second big point of character development is on the plane, after everything that happens, and when they think it's all over. Now, come to think of it, there is another point where Akane let's Ranma hold her, but that's not so much character development as it is a result of character development, but it is worth noting. Okay, but going back to the plane scene, it's not just about Ranma and Akane agreeing to "cuddle" together every night, it's also about the emotional connection, and each leaning on the other for emotional support. Akane cries, and of course Ranma doesn't cry because that's out of character, but he does take comfort from Akane as I said, from the fact that although Ukyo his childhood friend and a few other people, some of which he cared for, have been killed, and that he still has Akane. The grand finale of the story is a bit of a third point in character development, and the biggest point of adversity to be sure, and shows the development as a near direct-result of the adversity. Akane ends up in jeopardy, and that's what sets Ranma off to eventually defeat Freddy. And in the end, Akane also to a small extent, truly recognizes

Ranma and his girl-form as one person, so much so that she doesn't even realize which of Ranma's forms she's kissing until it's mentioned to her. Of course, this all leads up to them renewing their vows, having a "real" wedding night and honeymoon, and then to Akane being pregnant and let's just forget that surprise ending because one of the points of the scene is to show that the character development has gone full-circle. From them being a bit uncomfortable sharing the same bed, to being about to have a baby, this story has developed there characters quite far through adversity.

The copyright notice appears again and we return to the Ranma menu, and select the next feature.

Crossing Over: Ranma Enters Freddy's World

JDHGAMER (CONT'D)

As much as Freddy entered the world of Japanimation, Ranma entered the world of the live action and very violent Nightmare on Elm Street universe. While it's a bit of a stretch that they happened to rent that very house, 1428 Elm Street, and that Ranma's girl form just happened to be the one who originally defeated the dream demons who gave Freddy his power, it's still an interesting connection that I came up with between their "mythologies". A lot more interesting than Freddy Vs. Jason, yet a little more creatively liberal, particularly since this is a fan fiction (this could never been made into an actual movie, since movies tend to need to be "official", and then all these characters from the Ranma universe would "officially" be dead, and the fans would HATE it, more than they probably already hate this fan fiction for doing the same thing). It would be interesting to do a kind of prequel exploring that story thing, but I doubt I can be creative enough to do something like that. Anyway, I suppose there isn't much else to say that's not already covered in the "twin" documentary found in the Freddy menu. So that's it.

Copyright information, Ranma menu, on to the next feature

Who is Juton?

JDHGAMER (CONT'D)

Juton was first in the published fan fiction Chasing Akane, although he originally developed, along with Dimi-Chan in an unreleased and likely never to be released fan fiction called "When too Many Worlds Collide". I'm currently working on a story that's based on a slightly similar concept entitled "A Pair of Twins", but I'm not sure if I'm going to release it or not. In any case, as much as Dimi-Chan serves as a FOIL (a character who contrasts another character into order to emphasize the latter's attributes) to Juton, Juton serves as a FOIL to Dimi-Chan. In Chasing Akane, he's silent and seems a bit conservative, at least on the outside, in Ranma Vs. Krueger, he talks, but he still seems like a conservative character who is probably a little liberal, on the inside, just because he IS with Dimi-Chan. Once again, and if you haven't seen the featurete about Dimi-Chan yet-these characters are based on the idea that opposites attract. And Juton and Dimi-Chan, although changing roles with each fan fiction I write them into, always seem to bear certain personality attributes that are constant, and always seem to have the same chemistry with each other. I was once told by a review on one of my earlier works were it looked like I was introducing a new character, than "adding new characters rarely works too well", and having read a few fan fictions, I've read some stories with new characters, and I think the problem is they try to make them part of the Ranma universe, or to make these characters semiserious, and somehow it's hard to connect to a "new character" when there are so many things you're expected to "connect" to, I guess that's my kind of theory on it. I think Dimi-Chan

And Juton work, not only because they're running characters, and if you read enough of my fan fictions with them in it, you'll become attached to them (I hope) but because they're rarely in the story to be taken seriously, although at the same time they contribute something reasonably integral to the plot, for instance in Chasing Akane, they work behind the scenes in revealing Ranma's "secret", and of course, Silent Juton tells his "story", and of course here they are the landlords of 1428 Elm. Street and are responsible for the whole mess in the first place. Juton, on my final note, is based on me, and hence the couple is ultimately based on the memory of my relationship with my now ex-g/f. I still kind of have feelings for her, although at this point I can only express them in friendship, and through these stories where we're a "fictitious" couple.

Copyright notice, then we go back to the menu, and select Deleted Scenes.

That takes us to a new menu with two selections: "Krueger Hitches a Ride", "Ryouga Doesn't Get Malleted", and under Alternate Scenes: "The Junsenkyo Connection: On Nabiki's Laptop"

We go through them in order, each has an author/director's introduction.

"Krueger Hitches a Ride"

JDHGAMER (CONT'D)

Originally, Dr. Tofu wasn't in the story, although always in my mind there was one draft with him in it, and I ultimately replaced a scene where they were looking the information up on Nabiki's computer with a scene where Dr. Tofu came in and explained everything, you can see the original version under alternate scenes. Now this is a scene that I cut because it seemed to give too much away, and patronized the audience a bit by showing that Krueger is hitching a ride inside Dr. Tofu. I felt it was better to suggest by stating that he was sleeping on the plane than to actually show it.

INT. AIRPLANE

Thankfully, Dr. Tofu is sleeping, or maybe, not so thankfully.

Freddy walks down the aisle of the airplane, half-sneaking.

FREDDY

Time to hitch a ride to Nermia! Ahahaha!

He then let's himself get sucked into the sleeping Dr. Tofu's ear.

Kasumi nudges Tofu awake.

KASUMI

Dr. Tofu, we've just flown past the border of Springwood. It looks like we're finally safe!

We go back to JDHGamer

JDHGAMER

As you can see, the scene originally occurred as I went through all of the people in the plane, but I rearranged it so that Kasumi still wakes Tofu up, but now it's at the end of the scene.

"Ryouga Doesn't Get Malleted"

JDHGAMER (CONT'D)

This is an example of a scene that I changed while typing it up. I felt that Akane had to have some kind of violent reaction to discovering that Ryouga's actually P-Chan, so I changed it, but kept in the final words of Ryouga, because I felt it was important that he somehow except Ranma and Akane's marriage before Freddy does away with him.

INT. AIRPORT

RANMA

Find someone else, someone who can actually love you even though you turn into a pig!

RYOUGA

(temper flaring) Rawwwnnmah-

RANMA

No, I'm serious. I'm not just saying it to agitate you, although normally I probably would be.

RYOUGA

Ranma?

RANMA

Look, a lot has happened-Ukyo and Nabiki died, it's a long story and you'll probably think it's bogus if we tell you.

RYOUGA

Ohmigawd-Akane, I'm so sorry!

AKANE

Ryouga?

RYOUGA

(looking up) Yes, Akane?

AKANE

Just please try to leave us alone, at least for the next few months, weeks at least.

RYOUGA

Yes, Akane.

With that, they leave.

RYOUGA (CONT'D)

Akane!

AKANE

Yes, Ryouga?

Back to JDHGamer

JDHGAMER

And that's when it goes into what I wrote in the script, looking back now and comparing the two versions (this is kind of a hybrid alternate-deleted scene), I think the one I did is better and is more in-character for Akane.

Alternate Scene :"The Junsenkyo Connection: On Nabiki's Laptop"

JDHGAMER (CONT'D)

I actually scribbled this out in the hand-written version, but I can see enough of it to add it in to the deleted/alternate scenes section. I felt that adding Dr. Tofu was a better idea, and it made more sense that Nabiki's computer was password-protected. Plus it made the whole exposition thing into a running gag were all the people who deliver excessive exposition (Nabiki and Dr. Tofu) end up being killed. In this version, Ranma delivers the bulk of the exposition, and of course, we can't kill him off!

INT. LIVING ROOM -- NEARING NIGHT TIME

Ranma is finally a guy again and is sitting with a laptop in his…uh…lap. Everyone else is looking over his shoulder.

RANMA

Now this is very interesting. Presumably these dream demons that gave Freddy his powers originated in ancient Chinese mythology. There was a time when their rule over the dream world was supreme, and where nobody could go to sleep certain that they'd still be alive the next morning.

AKANE

Sounds a lot like our problem.

RANMA

Yeah, but there was this woman warrior, well actually a young teenaged girl. She had special abilities in her dreams and used them to ultimately defeat the dream demons. Their power was taken from them for the most part. However, if they could find a host, with a compatible soul, a soul evil enough to merge with, they could once again haunt people's dreams through this person.

DIMI-CHAN

So they merged with Krueger, right?

RANMA

Yes.

D-CHAN

Cool!

RANMA

(ignoring Dimi-Chan and continuing) But the girl, she later drowned in a cursed spring, guess where that was?

AKANE

Junsenkyo!

KASUMI

Oh my, what a coincidence!

D-CHAN

Sounds more like fate to me.

AKANE

Okay, so does that mean you can defeat Krueger?

RANMA

It doesn't speculate that far. The web site's mainly about the dream demons themselves. But considering I was able to use my ki energy against him in the dream world, as well as being able to pull myself and Akane out of the dream by shear will. Of course, getting into the dream world was reasonably easy. I just had to go into a medative state. I'm not quite sure how I knew I could get us out of there. I'm still quite uncertain if it will always work so well, though.

UKYO

So what should we do? Just drink loads of coffee?

KASUMI

Nabiki tried that, and it didn't work out so well.

RANMA

We need to get some sleep, we have to be sure we're up early enough to catch that plane home and then it'll be all over. And if anything happens, I could use my powers.

JUTON

Wouldn't that mean you'd have to go to sleep in girl-form?

RANMA

Somehow, I don't think it exactly matters in the dream world which form I have in the real one.

DIMI-CHAN

Well, you can only hope he's right.

Back to JDHGamer

JDHGAMER

I think this scene is worth putting here because it does give a little more insight into the specifics of the back story, as well as the idea of Ranma's "meditation", which may be unclear in the actual story because it's not completely explained. I still think the Dr. Tofu version is better, and ultimately serves to explain how Freddy got from Springwood to Nermia, whereas in the first version, without Dr. Tofu, it was never explained.

Author's Final Conclusion: And that's all folks, the deleted scenes, the explanations of the plot and why I did everything I did. I just want to talk about one more thing-no I'm not planning any other crossover fics based on the "hijinks" described at two points in the story (the stuff with Jason, Michael Myers, Aliens, Predator, Etc.), it was simply a bit of a running gag that Dimi-Chan had a history of these kind of things, and that she was planning on another one (apparently crossing over Predator with Excel Saga). In any case, I hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Now I can get back to trying to finish Chasing Akane, and please check out that story two.

And lastly, Dimi-Chan and Juton will return in…either A Pair of Twins, or an untitled fan fiction idea I'm having where Juton is Akane's brother and Dimi-Chan is another one of Ranma's fiancés, and Ranma is split into two people, his yin and yang. I'm still playing around with the idea, and any suggestions are welcome. Once again either review here or send comments, or those suggestions I was talking about to: deejaygamer@yahoo.com

Revision Conclusion: Just a few more notes really. First, this is 35 pages long (revised), and now that my next project involving this is to create an exclusive version of this script that will include commentary (little parts inserted that mention various things about the script as you read it) at Dimi-Chan and Juton's Secret stash.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/dimichan-juton/

Please feel free to join the group and hopefully the commentary thing will be done soon (I'm a procrastinator so God knows when I'll have it done.

Well, anyway, I'd like to thank you for taking your time to read the fic, browse the "Bonus Features", and to read all these intros and conclusions. Also, lastly if there are any errors I missed, please point them out to me either in a review or via e-mail. Also, please in your reviews or e-mails to me mention some of your favorite lines, such as your favorite "Freddyism", favorite "Dimi-Chanism", etc. I really like to hear which lines people thought were particularly clever. Anyway, I think that's it. For the last time, thank you.