Ronin Warriors Fan Fiction ❯ Into the Dark Night ❯ Chapter Five ( Chapter 5 )

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Into the Dark Night

Nagia

Chapter Five: Falling into You

Part B: When All the Stars Were Falling

When all the stars were falling/

I reached up like you said/

All the stars were falling, one hit me in the head/

and I fell down, down, down/

I fell down, down/

When all the stars were falling,/

they fell from above,/

and I thought of hate, and I thought of hate/

and then I thought of love/

and I fell down, down, down/

/I fell down, down-Lisa Loeb and Nine Stories, Tails.

From the song "When all the Stars are Falling"

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Geez, reading D's freaky stuff is good for writing freaky stuff of your own. Just so you know, Nasuti's thoughts are freaky on purpose. You'll know what I mean. Very, very soon. And by the way, note the PROBABLY. I said probably. I was VERY WRONG. So forgive my error and READ. Thank you.

Side note: MLA means Moronic Life-shortening Assortment of drivel.

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ii. Falling into Heaven

She watched him as she fell back onto the bed, watched him as he stroked her cheek. Closed her eyes to the feeling of gentleness as his fingers brushed against her eyelids. Her hands buried themselves in his back

(fingers like claws scratching biting loving) (i do not want this)

and raked down as pleasure filled her.

(such wicked pleasure bleed for me) (this is wrong why am i doing this oh GOD MAKE ME STOP make me stop)

Salty wetness streamed from his eyes

(water coming from his eyes oh Athena from his eyes his eyes) (please)

as he pulled her

(seiji) (make him bleed BLEED)

closer to him. She moaned, the pleasure racking her body in waves. But it was wrong

(i do not want this oh god why am i doing this oh god please make me stop) (bleed bastard bleed lover bleed)

somehow. He moaned, their pleasure merged. But it was still

(god why am i doing this this is wrong wrong WRONG) (die)

wrong. And it was getting wronger.

(wrong bad make it stop stop him stop yourself stop dammit)(bleed)

A dizziness came over her, a flyaway feeling she'd not had before.

(voices voices in my head.)

She felt the pleasure diminish. Their loving had been

(die bleed bruise die) (i do not want this)

wild, wilder than their first night together.

(who are you) (I am Nasumi, Seirene Class Family Yagiyuichi.)

(who?) (I am you.)

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Cliffhanger! Alright, I have to admit that some of that confuses me. So here 'tis, copied without the thoughts so it flows better:

ii. Falling into Hell

She watched him as she fell back onto the bed, watched him as he stroked her cheek. Closed her eyes to the feeling of gentleness as his fingers brushed against her eyelids. Her hands buried themselves in his back and raked down as pleasure filled her. Salty wetness streamed from his eyes as he pulled her closer to him. She moaned, the pleasure racking her body in waves. But it was wrong somehow. He moaned, their pleasure merged. But it was still wrong. And it was getting wronger. A dizziness came over her, a flyaway feeling she'd not had before. She felt the pleasure diminish. Their loving had been wild, wilder than their first night together.

"Who are you?"

"I am Nasumi, Seirene Class Family Yagiyuichi."

"Who?" She repeated blankly.

"I am you."

Yeah, I know. Short one-scene. But writer's block is on its way! And 'tis midnight! What the hell are you expecting, five-page goodsmut? Besides, this may add to the plot. So HA!

I know. The part titles are stolen from "A Rainy Night in SoHo." No clue where that is and can't remember who sang the damned song. How's that for not-quite-cricket? (Cricket means fair, good, right, just.)