Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / Dragon Ball/Z/GT Fan Fiction / Fan Fiction ❯ Keeper of the Worlds ❯ Konnichiwa! ( Prologue )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
~~Konnichiwa!~~
K, basically, I had this idea for a story, wrote the first chapter and posted it, then found out that it's really hard to continue a story if you haven't planned it out properly, so I decided to rewrite it. Kinda had to or else I just wouldn't've ever gotten a second chapter. That said, here's the new fic, it's got the same concept and title, just from an easier-to-write angle. And some things had to be changed (try everything) so if you're one of the few who read the first chapter, forget what you read.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my character, some issues of Shonen Jump , some volumes of Vampire Game , and a bunch of cds that I bought instead of downloading because I like my favorite artists being able to make more music, which I will buy when it is released.
And that's my only disclaimer for the whole fic, so don't sue me.
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Also, the watch that Jiyami and her friends wear has some buttons with some interesting effects. There are five buttons and a dial, the red, green, and yellow buttons are on the right side of the face, the purple is on the face below the screen, and the black is on the left, along with the dial.
The red button is for shrinking and unshrinking things, most of the time it's Jiyami's favorite modes of transport, including a 1967 self-painted GTO, a custom Harley, and a red quad-cab F-250.
The green button is for opening and closing portals, although the portals don't lead directly from one world to another, but instead to a central tunnel that connects all the worlds of the time-space continuum with gates on each side that have to have coordinates programmed in as to the destination in that world before the portal can be opened.
The yellow button is for communication and requires use of the dial to scroll up or down the list of contacts, and can only be used to call other people with t-s watches or a t-s communications chip installed in their phone. It's also for answering calls.
The purple button is for holo-cloaking, and can use the dial to scroll or be pushed twice to randomly select a disguise off the list (although in the early stages of production, random selection mixed up several options for some interesting combinations). It also automatically changes the user's voice, again having some interesting results in the beginning stages.
The black button is a t-s radio, which uses the dial to scroll through stations. The watch sends electrical signals through the body to the brain where it is directly interpreted as music. That means that people around someone listening to the t-s radio on his or her watch don't have to be annoyed by music they might not like or consider to be crap. But it has caused confusion in crowds when the listener was bumped into by or collided with someone else due to the fact that the other person heard a two-second clip of some weird song they'd never heard. There is also a t-s radio adapter that can be hooked up to a car so the watch battery doesn't have to be wasted. All of which was invented so Jiyami wouldn't have to keep loaning out her Metallica cds to all her friends that she'd gotten hooked. Which was basically everyone because most of the music in their worlds sucked.
Also, I'm going to need some characters that I can use as once-in-a-while-, don't-have-a-real-role-, fifteen-words-of-fame-type people, so if you give me some specifics in a review, I'll use your character. Fill in following info.
Name:
Personality:
Age:
Weapons (if any):
Height:
Home (world, country, some psycho's mind, etc.):
Hair:
Clothes:
Eyes:
Gender:
Whatever else you can think of (no pairings!):
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Finally, for now, I'm not going to name the chapters immediately, but you can select one of a few that I list for choices or give me one of your own in a review, and I'll change it when I add a new chapter, depending on the number of votes or if a suggested one is perfect and couldn't be improved upon. That means I need enough votes or suggestions, so you'll have to review if you want a new chapter. And also, I doubt it'll ever happen, but if you notice any spelling or grammar problems, let me know (and not the on-purpose-for-dialect mistakes). R&R!!! I will accept flames, so long as they are descriptive and not just something like "Your fic sucks!".
K, basically, I had this idea for a story, wrote the first chapter and posted it, then found out that it's really hard to continue a story if you haven't planned it out properly, so I decided to rewrite it. Kinda had to or else I just wouldn't've ever gotten a second chapter. That said, here's the new fic, it's got the same concept and title, just from an easier-to-write angle. And some things had to be changed (try everything) so if you're one of the few who read the first chapter, forget what you read.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my character, some issues of Shonen Jump , some volumes of Vampire Game , and a bunch of cds that I bought instead of downloading because I like my favorite artists being able to make more music, which I will buy when it is released.
And that's my only disclaimer for the whole fic, so don't sue me.
~~~~~~~~
Also, the watch that Jiyami and her friends wear has some buttons with some interesting effects. There are five buttons and a dial, the red, green, and yellow buttons are on the right side of the face, the purple is on the face below the screen, and the black is on the left, along with the dial.
The red button is for shrinking and unshrinking things, most of the time it's Jiyami's favorite modes of transport, including a 1967 self-painted GTO, a custom Harley, and a red quad-cab F-250.
The green button is for opening and closing portals, although the portals don't lead directly from one world to another, but instead to a central tunnel that connects all the worlds of the time-space continuum with gates on each side that have to have coordinates programmed in as to the destination in that world before the portal can be opened.
The yellow button is for communication and requires use of the dial to scroll up or down the list of contacts, and can only be used to call other people with t-s watches or a t-s communications chip installed in their phone. It's also for answering calls.
The purple button is for holo-cloaking, and can use the dial to scroll or be pushed twice to randomly select a disguise off the list (although in the early stages of production, random selection mixed up several options for some interesting combinations). It also automatically changes the user's voice, again having some interesting results in the beginning stages.
The black button is a t-s radio, which uses the dial to scroll through stations. The watch sends electrical signals through the body to the brain where it is directly interpreted as music. That means that people around someone listening to the t-s radio on his or her watch don't have to be annoyed by music they might not like or consider to be crap. But it has caused confusion in crowds when the listener was bumped into by or collided with someone else due to the fact that the other person heard a two-second clip of some weird song they'd never heard. There is also a t-s radio adapter that can be hooked up to a car so the watch battery doesn't have to be wasted. All of which was invented so Jiyami wouldn't have to keep loaning out her Metallica cds to all her friends that she'd gotten hooked. Which was basically everyone because most of the music in their worlds sucked.
Also, I'm going to need some characters that I can use as once-in-a-while-, don't-have-a-real-role-, fifteen-words-of-fame-type people, so if you give me some specifics in a review, I'll use your character. Fill in following info.
Name:
Personality:
Age:
Weapons (if any):
Height:
Home (world, country, some psycho's mind, etc.):
Hair:
Clothes:
Eyes:
Gender:
Whatever else you can think of (no pairings!):
~~~~~~~~
Finally, for now, I'm not going to name the chapters immediately, but you can select one of a few that I list for choices or give me one of your own in a review, and I'll change it when I add a new chapter, depending on the number of votes or if a suggested one is perfect and couldn't be improved upon. That means I need enough votes or suggestions, so you'll have to review if you want a new chapter. And also, I doubt it'll ever happen, but if you notice any spelling or grammar problems, let me know (and not the on-purpose-for-dialect mistakes). R&R!!! I will accept flames, so long as they are descriptive and not just something like "Your fic sucks!".