Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction / InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Secrets ❯ My first ( Chapter 7 )

Chapter 7 *version 2* (the better one) *_* revised. (I'll put the original on here and you can tell me of what you think of it, but that would totally change chapter 8, you tell me after I put the other one up which one you want me to write chapter 8 from, thanx bunches for the support) Peace Out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

~ Next Day~

 

Brooke woke up on her side. She was staring at an Avril Lavigne poster she had on the side of her wall. She started thinking about Hiei, and what he might be doing. She turned over to see if Kurama was still there. She looked, and to no surprise he wasn't there. She turned to lay on her back, and she stared at the wall.

 

 

Brooke got up, and walked to the bathroom, she wasn't feeling very well. So she just went and turned on the shower, and took herself a short shower. When she got out of the shower; she grabbed a towel, and towel dried her hair. She bent over and let her long brown hair hang as she dried it.

 

When she was done she grabbed a robe, and she walked out into her bedroom; she walked over to her dresser drawer, and pulled out some black sweats and a white shirt, and a gray jacket. She got dressed and went to blow dry her hair. She left it a little wet, but not to much. She went over and grabbed a magazine, and sat on her bed and turned the TV on. She sat on the bed for a little while.

 

Kurama walked in the room, and saw her sitting on the bed flipping through every channel. (well there wasn't anything on she wanted to watch anyway…till he walked in *he*he*) he could tell she was bored out of her brains. She turned, and saw him, and she smiled at him.

 

 

“Hey” she sounded as if she was straining to speak. She just stared and smiled. Kurama walked towards her and bent down by her bed. He looked her in the eyes. She started to get a little nervous; she thought he might try something spontaneous, or something to just surprise her. She backed away from him, and sat up. She still didn't take her eyes off of him. He finally broke the silence.

 

He stared at her worried, and finally asked.

“I was thinking maybe if your not doing anything, you might want to do something with me this weekend” he stared at her awaiting her answer.

 

She didn't say anything for a little, she wanted to see if he would get nervous, or just get up and walk off. Nope, he just got all sweaty, but he looked like he wanted to move. She looked at him, and smiled, and said “Yes”. She needed to do something to get Hiei off of her mind. She wanted to stop thinking about him. She moved on, so that must have meant that Hiei would have by now too. At least she hoped ha had. She didn't know if he was one to hold a grudge against someone for so long. Well she hoped he didn't. Kurama smiled at her, and she smiled back at him, and she gave him a hug. He later left the room and she continued to channel surf.

 

She later went down stairs for breakfast. When she was on her way downstairs she was Kuwabara, and Yuske on the couch and Kurama sitting at the dinner table reading the paper. When she walked into the kitchen she leaned over and asked.

 

“Do all of you guys like, live here?” she asked. Yuske and Kuwabara turned around to look at her. “well?” she said.

 

Pretty much. Yuske said.

 

Duh! I know you live here Yuske. She said. I was asking about Kurama, and Kuwabara. There here every morning I wake up, and even earlier then this in the morning. And half the time your still asleep, but not like that's a difference. Is there like a secret room I don't know about? She asked.

 

They all looked at each other. Ah! Never mind. She grew annoyed. She used her best sound of Reese Witherspoon in sweet home Alabama. She walked over to the refrigerator, and got out some milk, and poured it in a cup, and went and sat down on the couch; she took the remote from Yuske and Kuwabara who were fighting on what to watch. She changed it to lifetime.

 

“Hey” they both said at once.

 

“Hey, I don't want to watch some old ladies bicker and complain” Yuske said, and I definitely don't want to watch the Nanny.

 

Well dill. She said

 

Why are you over here with your drink? He asked.

 

And what are you going to do about it? She asked.

 

He got up and started wrestling with her to get the remote. Brooke started hitting him in the back, she started laughing, and squirming as Yuske tickled her. she started hitting him on the head trying to get him to stop. She couldn't get him to stop because Kuwabara was trying to steal the remote from her hand, but she kept on scratching his hand, and arm. She finally kicked Yuske, and got him off of her. she started to catch her breath holding her side.

 

“You cheated” she said.

 

Yuske was laughing, and walked up to her and snatched the remote from her grasp. “Yes I cheated, and damn proud of it” he said.

 

She glared at him, and then started laughing. She walked up, and turned off the TV. She ran up stairs, when she got up there she had forgotten something so she started running back down the stairs, and tripped over all of Yuskes shoes.

 

 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! CA PLOOYIE! She hit the ground with a loud THUD! Kurama, Yuske, and Kuwabara all ran over to see what happened. Yuske, and Kuwabara started laughing. Brooke joined them in laughing. Kurama went over to help her up. She was laughing, but she still hurt her hip. She went up stairs limping on her side.

 

 

~Friday Night~

 

 

Kagome had come over to help Brooke get ready to spend the night with Kurama. Brooke was annoyed with her clothing, so Kagome had brought her some clothes she could borrow. But Brooke wasn't to impressed by short skirts, or hooker boots. But nonetheless she had nothing to wear so she gave in, and started trying some of the stuff on. Kagome had also bought Brooke some good makeup she could use. So she also helped put her makeup on her.

 

“Is this really necessary?” Brooke asked trying to put on the boots.

 

“Yes” Kagome quickly answered.

 

“Can't I wear some capris?” Brooke asked.

 

“Capris” Kagome said. But there so plain, Hmmm…. Sure you can wear them with the coots, and the pink shirt with a gray jacket.

 

Brooke just sighed and said “alright”

Brooke looked in the mirror at herself, and shrugged; she wasn't to into the look, and Kagome smiled as if she just made an “A” on her math test in school. Kagome went and got the makeup, and had Brooke sit in front of her vanity. Kagome started to put black eye shadow on her, after she had her base on. She gave the last touch when she handed Brooke some clear lip gloss. Kagome stared at Brooke in “Aww”.

 

Brooke later walked down to a coffee café; she didn't want her brother to know she was in a relationship with Kurama. She also didn't know that she had someone following her. I'm not saying who….*cough* *cough* *Hiei* *cough* *lol*

 

Brooke looked into the windows; she was Kurama fidgeting with something silver in his hands. She walked in, and sat by him. She smiled at him when he saw her. He stared at her in “aw” he was amazed at the attire she had chosen to wear.

 

“Hi” she said.

 

He looked at her and said “Hi”. “I already ordered for us to go” he said.

 

“To go?” she asked.

 

He looked at her confused expression, and smiled at her. Brooke felt sorta weird. Hiei watched the two from a distance. He watched in disgust as the two walked hand in hand out of the door. Kurama, and Brooke were both carrying a drink. Brooke tripped over apart of the sidewalk and dropped her mocha latte. She started laughing; after she had done it.

 

They both walked up to a park, and started swinging on the swing sets. They were trying to see who could go the highest. Of course Brooke won that contest. Later Kurama, and Brooke walked home. By then Hiei was totally disgusted, and he left.

 

Brooke didn't know what was going to happen as she stared at Kurama at her door way. She thought about saying goodnight, and leaving, but that would have seemed a little gay. Well Kurama kissed her on the cheek, and walked her to Kagome's house. She's supposed to be staying the night over there.

 

~ Kagome's House~

 

 

“So,… how was it?” Kagome asked.

 

It was fine. Brooke said.

 

Ugh! You never tell details. Kagome said

 

Whatever. Brooke said. Are we leaving yet?” she asked

 

“Yes” Kagome said walking out the door.

 

I'm going to get into so much trouble if Yuske finds out I'm leaving again. Brooke said

 

“O you big sissy” Kagome exclaimed. They both jumped into the well.

 

~ Feudal Era~

 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Kagome and Brooke looked up when they heard the voice of a young girl screaming. They both hurried to get out of the well to see what happened. When they got out, Brooke was swept up by Naraku.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Brooke screamed as he picked her up. She tried to punch, and bite him to make him to drop her. Kagome started to shoot her arrows at him, but it was useless. He shot an arm out, and grabbed her, and her portion to the jewel. Naraku left back to her castle with each girl in his arms.

 

 

Inuyasha looked up; he smelt Kagome's blood. He knew something had happened. He looked back to Sango, and Mirokru. They both nodded at him, and they all took off into the night.

 

~ Present ~

 

Hiei had seen the two girls go through the well. He didn't think anything of it, till he thought of Naraku then he took off to find Yuske and the others.

 

 

I'll put in the version if you all want me too. But u'll have to review and let me know. Then you can tell me which version you liked better, and I can start writing from there. Or I'll just keep this one up.