| "He Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 21:51 CDT
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Don't listen to mm-reviewer your story is great, and besides this is an AU fic so you can have them be out of character as much as you want! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do know that there is no such word as 'brung', right? Perhaps you meant 'brought'? You also have a serious problem with grammar, spelling, and punctuation. These characters have nothing to do with Inuyasha, except the use of the names. None of them act like the Inuyasha characters at all. If you want to write original fiction, then have the balls to do so and stop slapping famous names on your original characters just to get attention.
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job.. I can't believe they were put in jail... grrr.. Kikyou lol... good luck and please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOO YAY another chappie lol.Ur doing GREAT keep up the good work.:)Update A.S.A.P pwease
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHH i wonder whats gonna happen next? ^.^ lol update A.S.A.P. *gives puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 12:02 CDT
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oh oh oh.. what will happen next??? lol.. can't wait to see what happens.... great job and good luck.. please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 02:03 CDT
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This is really great. I can't wait to see what happens next. What a chapter lmao... good luck and please update as soon as you can ^_^
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was so sad..DAMN HOJO >.< Well of course im so into this ficcie update A.S.A.P. pwease? :)
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was freaky gettin with your fiance's father well anyway your gettin more and more interesting with each chap so pleaseeeeeee add soon Thank You!
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Reviewed By: Sagittariusgr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 23:11 CDT
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that chapter was good and i can\'t wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA that was HOT lol.Ah nothings better then getting a little midnight snack before u go to sleep lol.As always a great chapter,loved the lemon too by the way.Update A.S.A.P. :)
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Title: JUMPING UP & DOWN!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOO HOOOOOO! You rocked that shit! I laughed my head off at "Mr. Taisho makes me sound old" hell, i'm STILL laughing at that. Keep it up, i am SO hooked!
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Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really liked this chapter cant waite for the next one. update asap thanx
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more! I really love your storie!
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Title: NO!!!! Don't Do This To ME!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What a cliffie!!!!! You just gotta update asap!!
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