| "He Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suppose it all being a dream would explain why the anal was so easily performed. I understand all kinds of lube is needed for that sort of thing in real life. With it being her first time (or a dream of her first time, whatever), it seems strange to me that the initial penetration was never explicitly mentioned, let alone given any importance. Though I suppose the value of such things varies from person to person, and author to author. Kagome seems to have little problem with the idea of deceiving Hojo, and that's too much of a difference from the original character, especially when this Kagome has had pretty much the same past as the original Kagome, thus eliminating much cause for them to be different. I'm not sure exactly what I think she would do in this situation, but I know going through with the marriage while secretly trying to romp with his dad is not quite it. Inuyasha is awfully forgiving of his son's apparently remorselessly unfaithful fiancee, too. Maybe he can somehow tell that the attraction between himself and Kagome is special and Kagome isn't normally prone to infidelity, but there's been nothing in the story to indicate that so far. So far he just seems kind of...dumb.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 14:32 CDT
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Hey great fic! Loved the lemon scene, it was very hott. Too bad it was all just a dream. Poor sexually frustrated Kags, hopefully she and Inu will hook up soon. I like the plot of your fic, it's original and interesting. Please update soon! ~Peace!
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Title: Hot!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so lovin this. Toobad it was all a dream :P Sticky ne?
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WHOA steamy steamy.Damn too bad it was just a dream lol.Update A.S.A.P. i like where ur going w/ this.:)
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Inuyasha as Hojo's father?? It sucks that Kagome didn't meet him before she met Hojo...damn! Lol, anyways I thought this story was really different, different in a good way of course! I can't wait to see what happens with the two of them...and as for the disgruntled uncle...is it...hm...Sesshoumaru? Or...Miroku? Lol, okay I wore out my guesses. I hope you continue writing soon!
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Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i love this story you should update asap please
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I like your story! I never read one like this before and thanks for referring my fic! Well hope you update soon! Untill the next chap, see ya!
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this chap PLEASE FINISH SOON
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~Hotness its Like Dammm Update!
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Title: HOT
Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG why'd u stop there?! lol damn it was just starting to get steamy too..oh no..what if Hojo wlaks in a sees them?!...damn cliffys..-.-.Update A.S.A.P please :)
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Title: Oh WOW.....
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This one was SOOO good. Dayum -do your thang! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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Title: O.o wow
Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW pretty good..u know i dont think ive ever read a fic like this lol.Well i like it and i hope u update A.S.A.P. b/c i'd like to see where u go w/ this.:)
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Title: Ok...My curiosity piqued
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So far this sounds like fun...and i LOVE the older Inuyasha concept. I just know he would look so damn yummy ::drool:: can't wait for the update.
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Title: :P
Reviewed By: Amanda_Trinh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good^^ But Hojo is just sooo dull. I don't blame Kagome! But is Inuyasha married or did his wife die..or is he divorced? It would be better if he didn't have a wife:P I like the story. It's so awesome^_~I just can't imagine Inuyasha and Hojo related in the story! Inuyasha must be the hot guy in the family...I take it Hojo has the unattrative genes from his mother?! Update soon and let Inuyasha b attracted to Kagome...thankies^_^
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Title: Ha
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~.- I love it ha Thats my song and being with older Inuyasha totally hott (please don't make her call him daddy like ever it so wrong)Ne wayt are we going to see other Younger/Older couples Love? Well much love Update soon sweetie Ja Ne
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