| "He Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 17:04 CST
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You know for a while now I have passed by your story like a billion times, always thinking "should I read it, or not?" and sadly always went with not...lol...its 'cause I was sort of afraid to read a story with a father/teen relationship, but then I saw how many reviews you had and visits and figured it has to be really good, and so today I took the time and have read your whole story up until this last chapter, which had me in tears. Wow, you don't know how uch I love this story right now and cannot wait for you to pdate again. This is the best and I'm glad I finally had the guts to read it!! Update soon please!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Cranberry Sauce On: March 07, 2006 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE. Oi! I've been checking for weeks now sheesh! The agony is unbearable I must know what happens. If you can't now, at least promise to do so sooN. PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:12 CST
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hey i love your new chapter i hope you update soon well later my friend and keep up the good work
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Title: AWESOMENESSSSSS!
Reviewed By: sonataki On: February 15, 2006 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was a very dramatic fic. It was really romantic, too.If I could give you any higher than a 10, I would give you 1000!!! UPDATE!!!! I can't wait to read the other chapters that are going to be 'oh-so-awesome'! I really hope that Kagz and Yash get their relationship back together. . .Hojo isn't wild enough for her and he is far too possessive. Onegai, send me an email when you update, too. I would love to know what happens next! sonataki_the_demon_warrior2@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Ginny On: February 14, 2006 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
greeeaatttt stuff. are the song lyrics yours? or is it an actual recorded song?
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Reviewed By: CMM On: February 13, 2006 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you would do that to Yash. He poured his soul out to Kagome and SHE MISSED IT! It's like a betrayl. And what's with her skippin college for a deal that could, in reality, bottom out. College stays with you forever, fame is but a fleeting dream. Hojo is such a spiteful asshole. If you know someone isn't in love with you and that they and someone else you are related to, or care closely for, love eachother and would complete eachother would you really stand in the way of that? I guess I'm just rooting for Kag and Inu, but damn if Hojo isn't bastard. You keep making it seem like things will never workout, my poor little heart can't take it, and I'm sure Inu's right there with me. Please update soon, and with GOOD news. Please. CMM
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Title: He Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 13:07 CST
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WOW!! Superb job!! Another chapter well done! Kagome can't be moving in with Homo...it's just....not right in the world. I hope Kagome doesn't give InuYasha another heart attack...that would be too much. THey have to get toghether...I soooo can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Az On: February 12, 2006 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! i was looking through your fanfics cuz inugrrrl suggested you and its now 1:07am in the morning and i've spent all day reading your fic - YOU'RE AMAZING!!!! omg! it pricked my heart so many times and left me in tears, you're an unbelievable writer! though if you don't mind me saying you need to stop moving from pass tense to present tense during paragraphs but i'm not one to judge fics on silly grammar mistakes, you're an awesome story teller and you make the emotions come to life! this is now one of my favourite fics and i'm eagerly awaiting your next update, but till then i'll be checking out your other fics, update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yasha. So sad. Well this was a great update, and I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm starting to like Hojo a lot less and less nowadays.And I already read Shades of Gray. Great story too. ;-)
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Title: NOOOOO!!! SEXY C!!!! YOU'RE KILLING ME!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: February 12, 2006 03:33 CST
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This chap was so deep & i'm so damn hurt! Girl, you really did me in with this one. My InuYasha *snuggles him* kagome is on my last damn nerve! Stop falling for all of Hojo's shit! You whine about loving Inu & then he dangles some shit in front of you like a carrot in front of a horse and u soak it up like a sponge. Fucking dingleberry! Excellent chappie, sexy_C. The poetry was awesomeness & the whole chap was so damn angsty. The kinda shit ya love to hate. Well done!! 0.~
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Reviewed By: fabzz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait till u update!!!!!
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Title: Noooo!!!!
Reviewed By: Stupid IdiotB On: February 11, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo!!!!! the story is really good, update sooner rather than later. I really want to know what happens next, and i'm sure a lot of other pepople want to know too, sooo please hurry and update soon.
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 11, 2006 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amazing! I really feel for yasha. I don't like hojo, is it just me or does it seem like he's just trying to force kaggie to love him or be with him? any way that's what i think.I realllllllllyyyyyyy love this story and hope you write more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG poor inu! are they ever gonna be together? damn hojo! *cries* great chappie,sad but great.update soon pwease? ^_^
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