| "Keep Your Friends Close But Your Enemies Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 11:12 CDT
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Ah! No! I need the next (real) chapter! You can't leave off like that! Ok, after my ranting... Nicely done fic. I just recently got into Death Note (why I call "Raito" "Light", but I've become so attached tot he characters. You portray Raito/Light and L so well. I love the whole "it's a game and I'm fighting for dominance" thing playing for both of them. Your beta does an excellent job, btw. I have a built in detector for errors, and I don't think it picked up any. Seriously, this story is developing really well and you should really jump on that whole "updating" thing. Haha, just kidding. Take as much time as you need, just for the readers' sakes, please don't take too long! Happy writings to you and your co-author! ^_^ ~Tori-chan, a big fan of L~
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Reviewed By: Oitaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice...everything was very nice...except for the author/s, though, a little off in the head perhaps? Oh, but don't be offended, I mean that in the nicest way possible. Actually, I like crazy authors. They raito great fanfics. The crazier the better. Gambatte yo!
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Title: hardy har har
Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 09:55 CDT
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Ha ha! That scared me! I thought that was the ACTUAL chapter! I love your humor (all that innuendo is hilarious!) I can't wait until the next chapter is posted!(I've been waiting ever so long, you see..) But, I am confused. What the heck does "I'll take kira you" mean?
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG YEA! XD This is so exciting! I haven't read a fic like this--that's updated, exciting, and hilarious-- in a long time -__- Please update again sometime soon! Can't wait!!
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Title: Love this and Update
Reviewed By: snaplesugar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeease update soon. I'll be checking quite often...I want to know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: _uchiha girl_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 18:01 CST
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ok, it's almost 1am here, and tomorrow, no, today i have things to do, like school, training and stuffs, and i read this, all this in what was like 1 hour. i think i hate you. but please go on!!! i love you so much that i'd kill you for keeping me up. and i am 87% sure that you are kira. update. NOW.
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Title: pleeze update
Reviewed By: lydia_tepes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:36 CST
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i luv this fic pleeze update!!!
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Title: Great Chapter! Update Fast!
Reviewed By: xdiamondheartsx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updateing!! I would love to read the next part so please update ASAP!
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Title: Great Story!!! Please update soon!!
Reviewed By: xdiamondheartsx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this Death Note FanFic! Its one of the best Light/L Fanfics I've ever read! Please you must update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: hott_sportz_babe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really liked it,(and I MEAN it). You did a great job with Light's personality. I like the whole idea of Light seducing L too. I'm gonna totally read the rest of it (I only read up to chapter three). Feel free to read one of mine..I only have one..It's a Naruto fanfic. So if you read/watch Naruto, read it. (It's called Secrets) (I like reviews too ^_^)
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Reviewed By: hott_sportz_babe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really liked it,(and I MEAN it). You did a great job with Light's personality. I like the whole idea of Light seducing L too. I'm gonna totally read the rest of it (I only read up to chapter three). Feel free to read one of mine..I only have one..It's a Naruto fanfic. So if you read/watch Naruto, read it. (It's called Secrets) (I like reviews too ^_^)
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD YAY i cant wait till the next update!
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Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 23:18 CST
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It's about time you updated it! i've been waiting! hahaha matsuda is an idiot telling raito that he(Raito) and L have 'something going on'....tee-hee! ^_^ read it! love it!
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Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 00:30 CST
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I LOVE this manga! It's so sad that so few people seem to know about it...I'm really glad you've written a fanfic about it! Keep up the good work! (Man, I hope my friend will cosplay L...I'd be willing to cosplay Raito. XD)
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Title: DeAtH NoTe
Reviewed By: Master Haku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story! Its enjoyable, just a little shonen-ai, myterious... Perfect! Oh, by the way, I'm in the process of writing a Death Note fanfic too, so expect to see it soon! Keep writing! :) !!!
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