| "Burning Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: WARRIOR007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was completely enthralled with your ideas and storyline, you kept everyone perfectly in character for the circumstances and have written at a level that is both intelligent and eloquent. However, I truly believe you have done us all an injustice in leaving us with two chaps. Is there any possibility that you'd consider updating this piece of art or are we forever cursed to wonder and spectate as to the remainder of the events in this newly introduced timeline? I apologize, Let manners prevail, my name is rico and my email addy is drsadvocate86@tmail.com I sincerely would like to let you know that I will review and respond to these two chaps every day, if necessary, until I receive a response. I apologize for such annoying tactics but it is truly a travesty that a vision of this caliber go unfinished, I hope to be in contact with you, for as evidenced by the piece, you are an excellent author and I would love to exchange emails with one such as yourself Even and especially, from the perspective of a truly avid db-z-gt fan, as I like to fancy myself, Hope to hear from you soon Rico
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Title: Omg!
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
My eyes teared up, when Chichi told him all that :( I'm so sorry for her, and Goku is very annoying when he leaves all the time >__< Anyways, update soon! ^^
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: Easley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this has to be the best story ever made!!! by the way what do you think raditz would look like if he became SS3
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Title: Awesome Fic!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder when Goku will die of natural causes, if he'll see Chi Chi again, but when Goku left in the series, I felt so sorry for her! =( Anyway, great fic! =)
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Debido [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A *very* well written piece of prose, this is exceedingly enjoyable to read all through. it would be difficult to find any flaws with this. The characters were well fleshed out, a little on the OOC admittedly, but I wouldn't change it. Take your time with the next chapter to ensure it is of the same high standard as this, I am very curious as to how this story will continue though, the last chapter felt more like an ending. However from reading this, I'd say you're very talented and creative and won't have trouble with that aspect. Well done, give yourself a pat on the back, you deserve it. - Debido
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Reviewed By: Clemen4daworld@hotmail.com On: September 01, 2005 10:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Poor Chichi. Hope you post the next chapter soon. Until then take care and god bless. Laters.
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Title: .
Reviewed By: . On: August 05, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should definetly continue with this fic it's really goo. the possibilities are endless where you could take this
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: gokusgirl(not signed in) On: July 26, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start girl! I'm glad you're still writing, I'll be waiting to read some more!!! gg
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Title: Luvs it
Reviewed By: Foxxy Jones On: July 21, 2005 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and I think you should continue updating it ASAP
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