| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 14:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A strange voice.....you just had to leave us hanging dident you.....PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEASE UPDATE SOON *bows down*
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Reviewed By: ArrenOne On: December 02, 2005 01:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I've been hoping the Voice of Necessity would show up soon-- I just wasn't sure InuYasha would be the one to hear it. Thanks very much for staying with this story. Your writing has brightened many cold nights up here in the American Mallorea. I've recently become both an InuYasha and an Eddings devotee, and think your characterizations are about the truest I've seen. Thanks again--ArrenOne
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Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: November 29, 2005 16:15 PST
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lol yeah i love seeing sesshy confused for once instead of always so cool and collected. ooh - 16 pages?!!! and thats just the first half?! well, im very excited now - this is definetely worth the wait!!! and it was good to hear from you, just so we'd know you hadnt dropped off the face of the earth lol. keep writing - i will eagerly await with more reviews to write! ^^
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 12:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATS. on tiying for third place though you should of gotten first.
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Title: Mellie
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 11:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have given reviews, but they are mostly on Fan fic, so I do need to catch up here. I loved the mud fight, but feel you are neglecting the close friendship between Sango & Kagome and Miroku and & InuYasha. I like the Inu/ Sess relationship perhaps bring all the boys together. Love the story just thought I would let you know how much I Really LOVE IT!
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Title: Mellie
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 11:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should have won your catagories on IYF You write very well. I look forward to your next chapters and I did vote for you. Thanks so much for writting.
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Title: Only 49?
Reviewed By: KeeperOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 13:30 PST
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PPL are evil....I cant believe that you aint getting the reviews that you deserve I am also reading this fic on ff.net and still you dont get many reveiws!That is crazy!PPL NEED TO REVIEW!!!!!LOL anyway love this story ^_^.
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 18:49 PST
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Would you read my story plese, its called One board day PREETY PLEASE. oh and UPDATE SOON
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Title: DMInuyasha
Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 17:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its me,chey i finally regusterd as a media miner member.i just wanted u to no
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this before it was brought over to MediaMinor. And I still love it. LMAO when they had the mud battle though. And the one female that threw herself at Miroku and he never once asked her to bear any of his children,lmao. I had been wondering what was going on with Sesshomaru and Rin. Pretty cool with what Rin seems to be able to do now. Cant wait to see what else you come up with for her. And aside from the mud battle, Ive been wondering what was going on with InuYasha and Kagome. Should be interesting. Will be awaiting the next update.
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Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: November 17, 2005 14:11 PST
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Awww that chapter was so sweet! I loved it! Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what's next.
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Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 18:18 PST
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I discovered this story three days ago and have sat at my computer obsessively reading the chapters to get caught up! I am thoroughly enjoying your melding of these two universes and in fact, I'm now interested in reading the books your crossover universe is based on. What a fun world, and the Inuyasha gang has fit right in. And aside from loving the Inu/Kag romance (yay!), I think you've done a terrific job of developing Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's brotherly relationship. I've gone through the gamut of emotions with these two from amused to frustrated to heartbroken and back again. I especially loved the mud fight scene -- I just had this image in my head of two big dogs barking at each other and romping in the mud! So, I greatly look forward to the next installment when your muse and/or time permits! Thanks for sharing your story!
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Reviewed By: Chey On: November 14, 2005 16:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slaps self* Im soooooooo sorry for not reviewing as much.this chapter was wonderful as always.this fic has become the longes one i have read and so far the best.i cant help but wait for the next chapter.plese update soon.what gets me is only 43 reviews and over 1000 visets,shame on them it only takes a few minets to review this wondreful fic.again sorry for not reviewing.
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Reviewed By: Patchcat NSI On: November 12, 2005 13:50 PST
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I have to say that I have been enjoying this story greatly; and even though I have never read any of Eddings' novels, I have not trouble following what's going on. That said, however, there is one thing that tends to throw me out of the story, and it is very easily fixed. Rains -- when water falls from the sky. Reigns -- what a king or queen does to govern their realm. Reins (and this one you should use more often) -- the leather straps used to control a horse. I'm sure that you already know this. I only mention it because it detracts from the otherwise pleasurable experience of reading your work. Thank you for sharing with us, and I look forward to your next update. Patch
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Reviewed By: emilyhigurashi55 On: November 08, 2005 18:10 PST
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oh my god this fanfic is amazing - PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M DYING HERE!
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