| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: August 23, 2005 17:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best chapters your fanfic is very good in most they change inuyasha's personality but you kept it the same i really like it!
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 23, 2005 05:53 PDT
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Two more action packed chapters. You are doing a great job with this story. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 21, 2005 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two chapers at once is fantastic. You are so talented. This story is one of the best I read in a while. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kag156 On: August 21, 2005 12:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, totally different and new plot then then any other fanfic. but I was wondering is Kagome ever going to use her miko power and get a bow?
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 20, 2005 16:54 PDT
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Since this doesn't let me have enough room to give the full explanation of my idea, could you give me your email? You can reach me at snowecat1974@yahoo.com Thanks.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 20, 2005 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story. Thanks for writing such an entertaining fanfic. Needless to say this is on my favorites list. I hope you can update soon.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: August 15, 2005 18:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was one of the best keep going every time i read a chapter it get better so i can't wait till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 14, 2005 16:52 PDT
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Hope you upload the rest of the chapters soon. It's neat that Rin is a sorceress, and Sess and Inu are getting along. I know that my review is for much later chapters, but I felt that I should say something. I've got this Inuyasha idea floating around in my head, but no real idea of where it should go. It's Rin-centered but not a Rin/Sess. In my idea, Rin is a descendant of an alien and because of Tenseiga, that blood is starting to wake up. It gets more complicated than that, but that's the gist of the first part of it. If you're interested, I'll give you a more detailed explanation about what's going on with it. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: August 13, 2005 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the great update you could do this type of thing for a living the story is awsome cant wait till next chapter
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Title: more!!
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: August 09, 2005 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story its realy good i hope to see more before augest 10th
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 06, 2005 12:09 PDT
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I found this on aff.net, but it's so much longer than this one. Are you revising it or something? I've enjoyed everything so far, hope you keep going.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 04, 2005 15:29 PDT
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How disappointing, I seem to be the only other reviewer. I think it would be interesting to see the reaction of the Orb to the Shikon if it gets completed in your story. You seem to be past the Ulgo lands, but will Relg be mentioned in here? Also, you should have a chapter of the other Inu-gumi wondering where Kag and Inu are. And where is Kohaku? Does Naraku have any more incarnations that we need to worry about, and where the glitak is the Sardion?
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 02, 2005 14:22 PDT
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Is this set past the Mallorean series or an alternate version of just before it? There is no mention of Eriond as a God, but Silk is married to Velvet, and Garion has his son. I sorta figured that Naraku had somehow managed to be the one raising demons. Keep going, this is getting good.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 01, 2005 22:48 PDT
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This is great, and such an unusual combination. And it's working, that's the weird part. I've read the books and you're doing a great job with the characterization of Garion and Co. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: gihm On: July 27, 2005 01:16 PDT
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I have a question lol, is this to be a sess/rin romance fic? or father/daughter
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