| "Royal Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am impressed. It takes a lot to interest me and
I like your work, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Huggle_my_spike [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story! I like the Ayeka/Vegeta pairing, you make them look really good together! my only thing though is i dont think Vegeta would try to scrounge some free douhnuts, a bit below his character. I also like the attraction going on between Ryoko and Goku, or at least from Ryoko's side, i think you should countinue it! overall, great pic! keep up the goodwork! |
Reviewed By: Ang On: April 20, 2002 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, but y don't you finish it?¿ |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2002 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this, I can't wait for the next chapter. PELASE update this soon, this is a great story! LOL Peace |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SO COOL! I love it. This is so great. I was REALLY HAPPY when I found out that you had updated your story! hehehe I can't wait for the next chapter! Who is the evil person though? Ryoko or Nagi? hmmm Anyways PLEASE post the next chapter soon! This is such an awesome story. I can't wait to see where you take this story! Peace |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: February 27, 2002 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! You can't just skip away like that! You have to write more! Come back here! lol Good chapter. (sigh) Still not liking the V/A pairing though.... But Ryoko is a nice touch. I like her. Sort of. Too much left unsaid in this chapter. I have no questions because I don't know what to ask. Did that make sense? Oh, well back to class. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: February 19, 2002 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, finally. You make me slightly dislike Bulma enough for Ayeka to worm her way in...clever little thing, you are! ;) Oh, is it Ryoko? I like her. She's cool.... Vegeta was good in this, but what exactly does he feel for Bulma. Anything? At all? Hmmmm...well, go on...I'm still here. Although I'm sure it's a sin to all Vegeta-dom. ;) |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are now titled "The Great One"! I love your story! It is so awesome, I SOOO can not wait until you post up the next chapter, this story is just perfect! This is my fave story ever! I love the situtations that you place them in it is great! Anyways I think you are going along and buliding up a plot just fine! I hope you put the next part up soon, good luck! I am totally your biggest fan ever! Luv your way with words! Peace |
Reviewed By: MandM...(not!) On: February 09, 2002 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fanfics ever!and i like the way you got the charecters personalities like the were on thier respective shows.i dont like that dumb bulma.i hope ayeka gets what she wants.and wouldnt it be funny if ryoko were added to this fic. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, finally got what the 'm' word was. (blush) I'm so naive sometimes it's sickening! Anyways, I like. I'm still trying to get over the fact that there's no B/V so forgive me, please. I like Ayeka, sure. But, I don't know....(shrugs) I'm reading it, so there must be something there. Perhaps it's just your writing alone that keeps me here, no matter what the pairing. Now that's saying something, neh? |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cool, I enjoyed the chapter! It made me laugh at how Bulma and Ayeka don't like each other. Their 'fights' so far have been rather amusing! I can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE POST IT UP SOON! This is without a doubt my most favoritest story like ever! It is so realistic with how the people react to the events that they have been placed in! You're a great author! Peace |
Reviewed By: Kiya Sama On: February 07, 2002 10:13 CST
Comment/Review:
*bows gratefully*...thank you for all the awesome...awesome reviews so far. I will try to answer as many questions as I can in the short time I have...*blinks at clock*...okay...many have asked if ryoko is going to make an appearance...the answer to that is..i am not sure for now. I would have to wait to see how the story pans out. Another question I tend to get is if Vegeta and Ayeka have a kid and if that kid is going to be Trunks...O_o;;...umm...i really do not know either.
Basically, the long and short of it is that I am just as eager to find out what happens next. So we will keep our fingers crossed and watch as events fold out.
Thanks again, the encouragement really means a lot! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so awesome! I love reading your story! It is so funny, just like the shows. I can't wait for the next chapter! You are a really great author. PLEASE post the next part up soon! This story is so cool, I have never read anything like it. You combined both worlds (shows) better than I have ever read in any fic! I am surpised that you are/were able to combine both of the universes so well! Keep up the good work, I REALLY wanna see the next part soon! This is my fave story! Peace |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 30, 2002 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is too cool. i must know what bulma does to vegeta and what her reaction is to the jarians. also is ryoko is this fic. i mean she could pass as a sayin. any way loved the fic its funny and i almost fell out of my chair a few times. hehe. anywho loved it but gata go. bai bai. |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2002 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was funny! I was giggling at it and my family was looking at me funny. You are a great author. I hope you post up the next chapter soon! Peace |
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