| "I Need A Vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Title: omfg ha
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg I love this fic!!! ^_^ hazaah for you and your authorness!!!! =) I really hope that you update soon!!! I've been and will be waiting!!!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 21:23 CST
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OMG........ Poor Sota! I wouldn't want to learn .... THAT! .... from Yuka of all people!!! O.o Update sooon!
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Title: Favorite Author
Reviewed By: Taskun56 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. Even without the sex, it still has a really funny twist to imagine Inuyasha blending in with a human world. However, the sex makes it hilarious because ( ex. Ch. 7 ) we think about what happens if Kagome gets pregnant. And what about Sota? To know his sister is human. Lol. Aren't we all when it comes down to it? :-p But on a serious note. Great comical originality. Great plot. Spelling isn't perfect, but I don;t play a game for the graphics; I go for gameplay, if you catch my drift. ;-) I really hope you'll continue writing this. Even if you don't post it here, message me on my E-Mail and let me know what you plan on doing. I sent it to you already. Keep up the good work.
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Title: update?
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 15:48 CDT
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there has to be more to the story right? it can't just end like that, right? There's like eight days still in the vacation and....there's so much more to be answered!If its not finished then update!!! It's a WONDERFUL story! ~dark irish sorceress
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Reviewed By: Elaine-sensei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 10:04 CDT
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*at a loss for words* Wonderful.... story.... Your masterful writing skill shines through once again! ^^ If anyone here deserves the title sensei, it's you!
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Title: good style blends
Reviewed By: Zach On: August 23, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked how you can put comedy in some parts and have good lemons, i assume u got more chapters about kagome's parents right? is there something extraordinary(priestess/demon) about her parents that her mom left the dad? im confused about that...lol ur good at hiding some things, or im really stupid i cant see something reasonably obvious...
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 22, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely awesome. The kitchen scene was absolutely hilarious. I can't wait to find out what happened with Kagome's parents and what will happen with everyone else. Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: August 14, 2005 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. I love the ending to the last chapter. BTW, sorry I haven't reviewed earlier. I really like your story- you're an excellent writer.
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Title: Sorry Again
Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm REALLY not trying to get more reviews I JUST want to see the reviews that it won't show me (it's really frustrating) It always works when I add one of my own, so I'm doing that. BTW YOU GUYS THOROUGHLY ROCK AND YOUR ARE AWESOME!! I have 908 VISITS!!! THAT'S AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: shessylover89 On: August 11, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chap, it's was still funny. i hope u know that this story almost got me in trouble last night. everyone else in my house was asleep and i died out laughing. i had to practically clamp my mouth shut i was laughing so hard. can't wait for the next chappie! Update asap please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Anonymous07 On: August 11, 2005 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Another update! That was fast, thank you! This is still great, keep writing.
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Title: Me being curious
Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 03:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't want to review myself, but I'm hoping if I do I'll be able to see the three reviews that its NOT letting em see. It's showing six of the nine reviews I have and I can't STAND IT!! So this is a THANK YOU OMG FOR YOUR SUPPORT YOU WONDERFUL PEOPLE!! I LOVE YOU!! MWA!! *kisses*
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Reviewed By: shessylover89 On: August 10, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HIRLARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please!
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Title: I Need A Vacation - Review
Reviewed By: Taskun56 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done and very humurous! Keep on writing! ---- Ive always wondered what Inuyasha and Kagome would be like if Inuyasha met 'Present Day'. And this is definitely a good rendition of Inuyasha and Kagome in the modern day world. PYON!
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Reviewed By: sessylover89 On: August 09, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! LOL! I can't wait to see how they are gonna get out of the hut withut being seen! This story is so hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon!!! PLEAASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: somepersonthatlovesurstory On: August 09, 2005 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, ur the greatest writer that ever lived. i love ur story, ur the best its the greatest
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Reviewed By: Anonymous07 On: August 09, 2005 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story so far. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 11:24 CDT
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Awe That part on the plane was so cute. I like it. Sounds like it's going to be a funny and romantic story. Please keep going!
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Title: Hi^^
Reviewed By: kashu On: July 30, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to rate this fanfic that i have read because I love how you have come up with the idea and that it would have been an iteresting movie. You put the details in and give great info that I can imagine it playing in my mind. thanks for making it and keep up with the good work. Oh and could you email me when you write more fanfics ? my email address is kashumaru@yahoo.com if you have the time to email me cuz I don't want to bug you. I will keep on printing them and show them to some of my relitives (sisters and brother that are inu fans^^) thanks a bunch kashumaru
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Reviewed By: bk On: July 30, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to find out what happens when they arrive.
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Reviewed By: Mikomi_the_Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far keep on writing!
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