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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 14:51 CDT
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I am a little appalled at some of the reviews that you have received from this site. Specifically the one telling you to pull it off of our site. As one of the mods, I am happy to stumble across such a long fiction with so many different sections. I like the development that you have set up through this fic. From Ino's change in volume one to the many surprising events in Volume 3 this is a great read. I am enjoying what you have of Volume 4 and I know that sometimes life happens and you get distracted from a project. I see that you haven't been updating any stories - probably focussing on your original works since I see that your webpage has been updated recently. And that is fine, I would like to see where you ultimately end up with this. The conclusion of the plots you've set up with the Clans, Lee, Blossom, and Naruto & Sakura themselves. I see that you are still having problems with formatting on MediaMiner - I can probably help with that if you are willing to email me. It is probably something that isn't easily solved from instructions in a review. That being said, the only technical thing I wish you would rethink is the use of a beta - at least while you are working on other things. Have someone look over your posted works and make suggestions - you have very interesting tendancy to invert your ei to ie - like in the case of the word "weird." I am actually one of those people who know how to wait for an update - I'd rather get your best than haphazard. But it is ultimately your call. Personally, from what I can see of these chapters I would like to see a little more exploration of Tsunade's research into the Hyuuga. I look to see more from you. Thank you for posting this!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a great fic, but if your not going to continue it take it off media Miner.
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great Naruto fanfiction! i hope you update soon! i can't wait to read more! i *really* LOVE this story!!!! it is just too good! please update! ^^
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Title: Excellent Work
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is not only one of the best Naruto based fan fictions I've ever read, but it is easily one of the best fan fictions I've ever read period. The amount of time, detail, and planning you've put into your story reaffirms my admiration of the great author's in this world. I have not a single criticism what so ever. The fact that you don't have more reviews almost makes me angry, which again just says something about how much I truly enjoy your fiction. I honestly have to thank you for posting such a wonderful writing.
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Death Fan Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really,Really like this fanfic. it is one of the best ive ever read. ill truly regret the end of this fic but i know from reading previous chapters that it will be spectacular.my only problem is that for a fic thast has hentai as one of it subjects it doesnt hav many lemons. still a great read though.anyway, i hope you manage to get ur life together quickly and just enjoy urself, have fun!
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Reviewed By: scion234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ONLY (and I mean ONLY) thing I dislike about this story is that some of the dialouge can become a little monoloauge-ish at times. Other than that, this story is perfect! All of the charecters are actually IN CHARECTER, relative to how they act in the manga. The mistakes or inconsistansies regarding the "facts" of the Naruto mythos is to be expected, and are so trivial in nature I would never have caught them if the author never pointed them out. I have read some truly dreadful fics in my time, and this fic was exactly what I look for in a fanfic. I cannot compliment this author enough for the wonderful story I have read here.
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
you did good. Welcome back.
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Title: confusing review?
Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi sorry if this review gets confused, but my born language is spanish, not english by the way... i would like to see Shikamaru and Temari's marriage, with some "help". also to see Gaara acting again if possible, and ofcourse, to see how manages Naruto to make people from Konoha respect him (i know he can do it). He deserves a great announcement, and also would be interesting if the other clans were allowed to see the Blossom party again, with caution, but seenable nonetheless(sp?). also i want to see how Rock Lee manages in Blossom, and may sound weird but, could be a good idea for Lee to be actively with a girl n.nU your fic is really good! please update soon!
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Title: must have more... addicted to teh story T_T
Reviewed By: granpa sengir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first i was just after the lemony bits but after reading the first few chapters(i did not want to miss any lemony detail) I was hooked! i did a reading marathon of your fic ignoring almost all my itenerary for 3 days straight. thank you for your dedication into writing this fic and i am looking forward to your future chapters. (slightly wishing that the story would not end in the near future since its that goo T_T) again thank your for writng and more power.
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Title: ARGH
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 07:29 CST
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It's the end of March and I do not see a update. I am a patient guy, but this is killing me I have to know what happens next I even stalked you over to FF.net, but it's the same there too. Please please update I cannot take it anymore. Thank you and if anyone can review my fic i would appreciate it. I guess just look up my pan name it's called Angelus Bloodlust, I only have 2 chapters done, but I want to make sure I have at least one fan b4 i update more.
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Title: Keep at it
Reviewed By: Jetset King [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! Start updating like you used to.
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Title: Training for the Job
Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I forgot to say on FF.net that I can't wait to see Naruto's reactions unfold. I wonder if he'll be upset that some people close to him kept the secret of his Dad so long. Maybe, maybe not... Anyways.. yeah... I hope you buzz through all your work.. not just to finish this fanfic.. but it's not fun to have a lot of work in general.
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. I love the story line you have going and the suprises are great. Keep up the good work. ;)
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Reviewed By: DarknessReader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You managed to update that fast, even though you still had a cold? Wow. Anyways, I can't wait to see a new chapter, write on!
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice! keep'em comin
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