| "Training for the Job" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: you've kept me busy
Reviewed By: captboog [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this must be (so far) one of the best (and longest) fan-fics i have ever read. very good. yay! whoop! yahoo! weeeee.... but i can tell ur going to wrap up this fic soon, so update soon!
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Title: Awesomness
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dear, I admire you like you can't even imagine. You're a brilliant writer and the story is progressing magnificently! I can't wait for what you have in store later on! :)
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 11:18 CDT
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yay! i loved this chapter, the tension seems to be building up and i can't wait until the next chapter! *as always lol*
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 02:43 CDT
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A lot of the questions I mentioned in my earlier review have been resolved, and done well I might add. I am glad to see you figured out the formatting on MM.O. It really does make things a lot easier to read. I really liked Kireme's background story in this fic, and I immediately pinpointed what culture you were referring to. ^_^ I'm interested to see what else you pull out of your hat. Including who to match Ino up with. ^_^ Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! XD awesome, the ending was hilarious! x]i really can't wait until the next chappie now. ^_^ *sigh* i love this story =]
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 09:43 CDT
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woo! can't wait to see his reaction to "let's get married" lol. probably shocked she accepted so soon after what she said about retiring. ^_^ can't wait until the next chappie! X3 ~dark irish sorceress
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Reviewed By: alchemie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I actually got a MM account just so I could finally review your story :) Great story, great writing, it's nice to see talented people who take the time out of thier lives to write for the enjoyement of others. Can't wait to see what happens next, and don't let the crazies scare you away ;)
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:10 CDT
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yay! i just can't get enough of this story. when i see in my mail "new chapter" i get so happy! XD I can't wait until the next chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice chapter well... i'm glad you updated... try t update soon ok? oh by the way i'd like to see more about how is running blossom without Naruto, from missions to even maybe the brother, etc well... good luck!
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Title: here
Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello well... i'm a weird reviewer and also i don't have any memory at all so i apologize if i was ever one of those who kiled your desire to write anyways, i liked to see Hanabi "rebelling?" against the clan heads also i wonder about what's gonna happen with the rest of the Konohagakure council okay then, try to update soon if you can good luck!
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Title: yay! glad you're back!
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 13:15 CDT
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another great chapter! can't wait for the next one! *ecstatic of the return of the story* ^_^ i can't wait to see how the whole Hyuuga "family dispute" turns out. =] ~dark irish sorceress [loyal fan]^^
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 11:40 CDT
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*cry* you still havn't updated. *sob* whenever i think about reading Naruto fanfics yours is the first one that pops into my head. im also thinking of reading it AGAIN (it's that good) and im LONGING for you to update. T.T this a really captivating story and really imprints itself onto me as a reader and fan. i can't forget about this story. please please update soon! ^_^ ;_;
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: TeeToTheFa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've read alot of fics in my time, but... wow. There was something about this one that kept me going, even through seemingly boring parts. I absolutely fell in love with this fanfiction and I must give you kudos on doing a very very good job. There were little mistakes here and there, however, that can be expected evern from the greatest of writers. I hope to be able to read more in the near future. Thank you for allowing me to experience a very nice fic so far.
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Title: Well, better late than never, I suppose.
Reviewed By: DarkiveDracormia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Mr. Tatum, let me first apologize. I read your fic like a 6 months ago and to this day I still believe it to be one of the most decisive, intricate, and well written fanfictions ever to grace my conciousness. Now, if you don't mind, would you please KEEP GOING? I'm prepared to give you cookies, lots and lots of cookies.
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Reviewed By: cormalin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 05:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like pretty much everything about this fic... Just a few issues about the formatting. My biggest complaint is that it ISN'T FINISHED *sob*
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