| "Surf, Sun and Slippers!" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please this fic is real good!!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 18:49 CDT
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Hi there! This was a cool chappie. It looks like the whole gang had a fun time at the club. LoL. I saw the picture for this story and I saw the plumeria. They smell nice, huh? And it comes in lots of colors too, not just yellow and white. Anyhoo, good update, and I can't wait til the next. And yes, your right they use oranges with drinks here too. LoL.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 00:11 CDT
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Love it I can;t wait till you update again YOU ROCK
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely amazing update. DO IT AGAIN, DO IT AGAIN :P
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 20, 2006 05:38 CDT
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Hey it;s me TriniK. Thanks for the thanks in the beginning. LoL. Though just so you know, I'm not Hawaiian, but I do live in Hawaii. I'm a local though, born and raised. I'm actually Asian, though you probably didn't really need to know. LoL. Anyhoo, cool update. I think you got most everything right. And as for cocktails, they like to use a lot of pineapple to put on the ridges. That's all. Great update, can't wait for the next. Sorry, I was too lazy to sign in. Blah. ;p
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Reviewed By: golden tuna On: May 19, 2006 23:43 CDT
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LOviN It!!!!!!!!!1 update soo please!!!
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I've been having PC problems. Anyways, another great chapter, and, my final words as always.......DO IT AGAIN, DO IT AGAIN, DO IT AGAIN :P
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 14:16 CDT
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Love it please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 14:47 CST
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Hey there. Cool story so far. I actually live in Hawaii, so yeah. You got that slipper part down-packed. LOL. I'm not sure about the cousin part, but we do call elders like auntie and uncle. I think it's cool to read when people write a story base in Hawaii cus I get to see how you guys see it. It is is nice place to liove and grow up. ave you been here on vacation? Or do you live here also? Which island? I live on Oahu. Well anyways, cool story, I can't wait for the next chappie. ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed in) On: March 25, 2006 00:37 CST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! i love this chapter. ok totally off subject wat in the world is a phone strap?????????????? it had me wonderin. ok well keep up the great writing and update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good update......DO IT AGAIN, DO IT AGAIN :P
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Reviewed By: supersailorfanner On: February 15, 2006 05:25 CST
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woot! the kiss was so cute!!...i loved it! youre a really great write...keep up this excellent work^^
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, awesome, love the story. Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 16, 2006 23:01 CST
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Inu and Kag sittin in the jacazzi. K-i-s-s-i-n-g. First comes love then comes marriage then comes the baby in the baby carriage. Anyway that cruise sounds fun. But I not the best swimmer so I think I would come only for the sights.
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Reviewed By: lil_chica_from_south On: January 13, 2006 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know this are the kinds of stories i like, with much detail..as yours. I really enjoyed reading this story. I must say i love it! Very funny, realistic in a way..,interesting. Hopefully you get to finish this story i would love to read it all. Bye!
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