| "Surf, Sun and Slippers!" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: supersailorfanner On: February 15, 2006 05:25 CST
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woot! the kiss was so cute!!...i loved it! youre a really great write...keep up this excellent work^^
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, awesome, love the story. Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 16, 2006 23:01 CST
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Inu and Kag sittin in the jacazzi. K-i-s-s-i-n-g. First comes love then comes marriage then comes the baby in the baby carriage. Anyway that cruise sounds fun. But I not the best swimmer so I think I would come only for the sights.
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Reviewed By: lil_chica_from_south On: January 13, 2006 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know this are the kinds of stories i like, with much detail..as yours. I really enjoyed reading this story. I must say i love it! Very funny, realistic in a way..,interesting. Hopefully you get to finish this story i would love to read it all. Bye!
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Reviewed By: supersailor fanner On: January 13, 2006 16:27 CST
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gaahhh!!! i can't wait for the new chapter!!!! hehe, are kagome and inu going to be sharing chapstick? ^^ lol...that was a stupid metaphor. anyway, one little thing, when inu calls kagome, the dialogue towards the end doesn't make the most sense..he syas something, but then answers himself, liked kagome asked another question, when she didn't. ....o.O it could just be me though. nice stuff though^^
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Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:50 CDT
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LOl. This reminds me of a vacation I had awhile back...I love Sango is this story and Miroku--and the relationship blooming between Inuyasha and Kagome...thats neat that Inu means drink in Hawaiian! And I like the flower thing too--I think I learned about that from American Idol...lol. Anyways! I love this story! Its fun and reminds me of my friends! Keep it up and thanks for sharing the story! Much love!! ^^
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Reviewed By: supersailorfanner On: October 04, 2005 14:49 CDT
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once again, nice work! aww...i want to see inu now!!! now! now! now! i can't wait till they meet....it'l be so cool!!! keep up the good work!
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Title: hjgsd
Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 18:50 CDT
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please update!! this is such good work! please please please please please!
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Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:03 CDT
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ahhh!!! this is the best thing ever!! you must write more! i need to know what happens! if u don't make inu and kag hook up...i'm going to slay u! jk! this is so well written! i did the right thing when i faved u!
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, please update soon this is so awesome. PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha,ha Inuyasha a heavy sleeper.Plus he has a hangover that funny to me. Of course everything is funny to me.I like your story it a new idea to me. Is he human or demon. I mean half and where those cute doggy ear.
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Reviewed By: girlformallyknowasSagittariusgr On: August 23, 2005 13:29 CDT
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Keep writting pleasssssssse i like where it is going
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: August 22, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story. You should keep writing I want to find out how Kagome meets the sexy boy with the cute fluzzy dog ears.
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Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you captured mirouku perfectly!! *faves*! i have to see the rest of the story!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: August 08, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You make me want my graduation to come sooner. c/o '06. hopefully the year will go by fast. *sighs*
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