| "Surf, Sun and Slippers!" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took me so long to read and review Laurell-chan...it's so not like me at all. I loved this chapter by the way. I don't know anything about surfing so i loved all the details you gave. it was so kawaii how Inu was teaching Kagome how to surf(and catching him a few looks while he was at it too ^.^) I can't wait til u update. Until then i'll be patiently waiting. Lexi AKA Bubble-chan~_^
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 14:21 CDT
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sweet! i just adore this story. it's fluffy and angsty and cute and ... yeah. i'm really hoping for something good to happen with inuyasha and kagome since they both want more so badly but have to settle for the just friends thing. i think it would be so hard to go back with sanog and miroku acting as lovey as they do. she may say she's alright with it but no one would notice their behavior bothered her until it caused her to do something out of the ordinary. update when you can!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 13:33 CDT
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LOve the story update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another AWESOME update....oh..and....hehehe... DO IT AGAIN DO IT AGAIN :P
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Title: Kick ASS!!!
Reviewed By: forsakenfaith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Wow. I loved it! It was very well writen and unique. I kind of hope Kikyou wont come back to haunt them again. I get sick of stories like that. I mean, The way you had her put in this story was great and very different....just not have the story based off of it, ya know? I was just wondering about naraku and sesshomaru? Will they be put in the story. Along with Kagura? They are very important characters in the anime. It would be fine without them. But if you run out of ideas...you can always add them. I Think that maybe sango shouldn't have so readily said "He has reasons". I think it should have been played off more about the whole Inu and Kikyou thing. But that's just me. Over all, I loved it and can't wait to read the next chapter. I think my favorite part was when Kagome says "oH for the love of god stop! I'm not stupid you guys!" (or something like that) That was flippin funny. Well kick ass job. Please update soon. -Forsaken faith
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 04:37 CDT
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Great story so far i really like it. That said i would have liked to have seen a chapter/paragraph about the dinner they were heading to at the end of chapter 6 i believe.
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Title: future author
Reviewed By: tiffani On: September 08, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew!!! Glad that was explained. I was getting nervous there. Anyway, I'm glad our not yet a couple have worked it out and things are back in sinc. I enjoyed this chapter just like I enjoy the whole story. i can't wait to find out what happens next. So update soon, and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness things are better for the moment. I say that cuz i'm not sure what u may have up ur sleeve with Kikyo. I just don't see it being that easy but then again it could be. I'll just keep my mind open for anything lol. I am so enjoying this story and will be sure to check u out on DA. Lexi AKA Bubble-chan
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dum dum DUM.....Plot twists always make me happy lol.....I want another chapter please....:P
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Reviewed By: tiffani On: August 12, 2006 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this story. i think everything works out between the two. i hope kikyou really isn't inu girlfriend. Anyway, i can't wait to read the next chapter. whatever, happens next i'm sure it will be interesting. Update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 23:48 CDT
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Hahahaha I love the icecream part I hope you update soon I love it
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Title: YAY! A new chappie
Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I wasn't expecting the next chapter so fast. I'm so happy. And it was a great chapter too. I'm not disappointed that there was only sleep going on at the "sleepover". It was so kawaii how she woke up with Inu holding her and it was so funny when Sango got in the bed with them and Miroku caught them all in the bed together(lol). Anyway I hope they can get over this Kikyo thing quickly. It's not like they have a lot of time left. Thanks for the quick update. Can't wait for the next chapter. Lexi AKA Bubble-chan
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter and I like the fact that it wasn't too much citrus but just enough. I can't wait to see where this little "sleepover" will lead *winks*. Can't wait to read more. Update soon! Lexi AKA Bubble-chan
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Reviewed By: Zackzman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey hey.....another great update....but....you guessed it....DO IT AGAIN, DO IT AGAIN :P
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think your story is great! It is highly entertaining and romantic. I am such a romantic. Anyway I would have reviewed sooner but I just started reading yesterday and I figured I would get caught up and then do a review. I can't wait for the next update. I have been to Hawaii and it is very romantic, so romantic that I got married there so I can so envision what it looks like even though I was in a different part of Hawaii.
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