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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 15:58 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. It seems that at least for now things are starting to work out for them, the major threats are gone and they can continue on peacefully. Yet, it always seems that those are the times when life seeks to throw you a curveball so I doubt it will all be chocolates and roses. On a different note have fun with college, it's most definately a damn sight more fun than work...but ignore me, I'm just a cynic...or it might be because I work in IT. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 17:11 CDT
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I feel all fuzzy( not moldy) insie because your last chapter was full of sweetness. Anyways good luck with college. Update soon!!
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Title: Contest
Reviewed By: Purple Moose On: August 13, 2006 05:15 CDT
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Crap...i was going to enter that, I had a pic drawn and everything... but then I completely forgot about it because I had exams.. Im so sorry.. but still great work as always!
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: August 11, 2006 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I think I'm giong to cry. Poor older InuYasha. I hope he can find someone, or perhaps Kagome can just be married to both at the same time!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 10, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Sorry to double post but I realised I had made a faux pas, I left no way to respond to my comments, effectively making in anonymous. I apolgise for that and offer my accoutn here is VScorpio and on FanFicton.Net is Hououza. I know it seems excesive, and perhaps without merit but I do not believe I should comment without leaving the room for discussion or argument. My apologies once again, H.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 10, 2006 18:45 CDT
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First, before I address the thoughts and ideals of the notes at the end let me say this, it was a magnificent chapter as always. A subtle twist, in making his otheself hold on, even though his existence is now a paradox in itself. Now, in answer to your notes. I agree with some, but not all of your points. A copetition is without value if one lacks worthy opponents, yet at the same time, not everyone can be perfect, and you cannot always expect others to lvie upi to your own standards. There was a time I would screw up work over and over again for a single misspelled word but with age I have gotten past that...for the most part, because other people have demands on my time. I will admit that while the challenge did catch my attention, personally I have two reasons. The first is siply that I have little time these days, work is slowly erroding my life and it seems as I earn more respect in my profession I get more and more to do. The second, is that I am uncomfortable trying to take on another's work. It is your concept, your rendition of another's world rewritten and to try and emulate that...is not a challenge I would be willing to undergo. But I think that is more than enough said, all I can really do is express my want to see this continue, and the enjoyment I find in your work. Perhaps I may or may not replicate it, or equal it in someway but still I enjoy it and I believe that is what counts. As ever allow me to leave with what has become my usual sign off, good luck & best wishes, but please know they are heartfelt. Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 23, 2006 18:14 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. I really don't know what to say anymore, I ran out of words of praise a while back and they haven't invented any new ones yet... I would go for the competition, but unfortunately work like to consume my life. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:58 CDT
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GOOD CHAPIE, Loved it, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 19:18 CDT
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I lOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I will try to enter your contest but you know with school and all i might not be able to start till a bit later in the contest. Motsumoto should get the job i think or have his memory erased either one.
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, awesome story. keep it up! the suspense is killing me!! i think the dude should call the number that will get him employed. this is one of the best stories ive ever read. i spotted a random typo here and there, but other wise perfect. it's not easy to find a good story on the web in Mexico city.
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Title: funny
Reviewed By: TwistedHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive only red the 1st chapter of the alternat ending but then i remembered, i loved the original i mean it was simply amazing and love ur weapons, but i got a better one, my brother. Hes a cop, lifts weights and almost killed someone just with a punch in the gut. he does anything for me since i saved him from death by drowing when we were younger, so i could use him as a weapon of mass destruction, muah ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEWARE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 21, 2006 08:11 CDT
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Magnificent chapter, I think that worked out rather well considering just who yoiu had in a room together. Personally I would hope that he did call thr right one, no sense in loosing someone who might be useful. And as an aside I hope the flight back goes well and that things work out. Forget about the updates until it's all sorted and we'll see you then. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 09, 2006 18:27 CDT
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I know what that's like to a degree...but it's different for eveyone so... To be honest I wouldn't worry about the chapter. Anyone who cares will wait and the other can go (insert swearword of choice) off rather than sending the usual pestering mails. Hope the depression eases, not much advice I can give for that one. For the writers block I find writing something else in a different universe usually helps somewhat. Who knows... Well either way, I hope they both improve. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Chapter 51
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 09:20 CST
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Magnificent chapter. In a way, he is her Inuyasha, but now thathe has stopped it, now that the past has been changed...how much longer will he exist in this place? What could I possibly find wrong with this? More of a sadist than a masochist unfortunately. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*joins army of good reviewers* feel my wrath too. loved the chapter! if i were inuyasha(younger) i'd be going insane. can you say paradox? hmm....that reminds me of all the thats so raven shows where she makes it happen from stopping it....hmmm....lol. it was great, you really made me think with it. my brain just keeps going paradox *BEEP BEEP* paradox *BEEP BEEP* cant wait for the next chapter, where hopefully stuff'll get resolved a bit.... sesshoumaru as a bussiness mand...now theres something i could definately see. be great at intimidating competition.
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