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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*joins army of good reviewers* feel my wrath too. loved the chapter! if i were inuyasha(younger) i'd be going insane. can you say paradox? hmm....that reminds me of all the thats so raven shows where she makes it happen from stopping it....hmmm....lol. it was great, you really made me think with it. my brain just keeps going paradox *BEEP BEEP* paradox *BEEP BEEP* cant wait for the next chapter, where hopefully stuff'll get resolved a bit.... sesshoumaru as a bussiness mand...now theres something i could definately see. be great at intimidating competition.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 16:41 CST
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Magnificent chapter. So, the final turth is about to be revealed, the identity of the phantom and the motives and methods behind his quest. Oh and on a side note congratulations. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 19:50 CST
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Magnificent chapter. Sorry for taking an absolute eternity to review. I have no excuses this time so please accept my apologies for putting it on hold. It will be interesting to see what happens to the deterctive and if he does see the phantom what repurcussions it may have on other people... Either way the next chapter promises to have some susprises in store I expect. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza PS. A veryy late happy new year!
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Title: all my reveiw isn't showing up >-(
Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:46 CST
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*this is the part where i wonder why the hell my reveiw got cut off* if u can't see all of it (all 1500 characters =^-^=) email me at coliogirl91@netscape.net. i'll email it to you.
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Title: ok, this is for transformations..all of it =^-^=
Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, for some reason whenever i go to transformations, it logs me out.^^' so please bear with me while i write the reveiw here. IT WAS AMAZING!!!--just had to get that out. you definately drew people-me- in cuz i could not stop reading. and i sympathize with the crappy computer, i have one to. umm....the chapter with all the kids was kinda confusing, it seemed to go so fast.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a very good job in showing the progression of InuYasha and Kagome's relationship. I think the goodnight kiss thing is sweet.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 19:28 CST
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Magnificent chapter once again. So many pressures on them both...I wonder what will happen when his olderself finally completes his revenge and the timeline begins to change... As for the series, does that mean they actually finished it completely or have you seen all the ones to date? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: October 03, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice to take a break from the usual angst, ne? Much love for the last chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 27, 2005 16:17 CDT
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*Glad to be out of range of the prayer beads* Excellent chapter. Some interesting moments, in particular the fact it was a girl that had created those pictures. Brings to mind an old saying about a woman scorned... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: deserves
Reviewed By: inu-kagdude [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 21:36 CDT
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i read the story by black sugar and you are right it is such a copy have people ever heard of copyright before man so people are so inconsiderate
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 19, 2005 17:55 CDT
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Sorry for taking so long to review this chapter, it took me a while to sort out in my head that the alternate AU had taken on a life seperate from the other part and then I kept getting sidetracked... Magnificent chapter as always. On a side note I have a slightly used Scorpion available? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Poor Kagome......
Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Therapy?!! I know how she feels... my mom is making me go because my parents got a divorce. I'm perfectly fine with it and I have to go anyway!!! GAAAHHH!!! Sometimes I just feel like jumping off a bridge!!! (not literally of course) My mom and I have never gotten along and she's just lokking for something to be wrong with me so she can get full custody and more money from my dad........ ANYWAYS.... great story, and keep up the good work!!!!
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: September 06, 2005 05:11 CDT
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Please update, I love the idea of Kagome writing Transformations! So cool! Pointless information alert! The 'H's in YAHH(etc.) look really strange, I just noticed that! Keep writing, I really like your stories!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: September 05, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"How long have you wanted to please me?" When I read that I choked on my popcorn... Is it weird that I eat popcorn while reading your fic? It's like that favorite movie that you love so much and learn something new everytime you watch it. Only the books are always better than the movie, so really it's even better on my part. Anyways, great job and I can't wait 'till you update. I've got some of my friends reading this now too. If they haven't started yet then they will soon. Toodles!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_my_love On: September 03, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUWAHAHAHAH this is kinda confusing but who cares you are talented very soooo when inuyasha and kagome has a son can i marry him please its just a question please please anyways.....kept up the good work!!! please dont hurt me for asking to marry him *gulps* oh well.... update faster for the sake of ur fans please dont hurt me and put the beads on me!! i reviewed!!! lovly story thanks you!!
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