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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: August 30, 2005 22:07 CDT
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oh boy am i confused......so the bad guy went to jail, the future inuyasha killed him for revenge for killing an older version of kagome....but if the guys in jail how'd he kill the older version, unless it happened already at which point wouldnt the older inu have already avaenged his mate? then again....we may have just created a time loop here.....ugh my head is spinning. if the younger kags is still alive and the man that is going to kill her in the future is now dead...how can she die later by that same person so that the older inu seeks revenge....wouldnt he have altered his past and kagome would have lived cause her killed is already dead? see my confusion? blonde moment....i just dont get it. *sigh*
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Reviewed By: yokoshima-chan (not signed in 'coz I'm lazy) On: August 30, 2005 16:04 CDT
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*bounces around* WHO COULD IT BE?! O.O Um, yeah, this is awesome. And a unique storyline thing. *waits for next update* ^^ Keep up the good work!
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Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....... wonder who the killer is.... flicker of gold.... hmmm. YES you used my ideer!!! YAYY! Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi swy) On: August 26, 2005 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice work on the trial chapter. i must ask, have you ever been in one? just wondering. ive read all the chapters you have posted for transformations, and now im working on this. great works. i look forward to the next chappie on this one!
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Title: wicked!
Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you're fan fics. I've only read tranformations and changing lives but i think there really good. update soon. also another weapon is two blades that react to dna you can either: chop up one person with their dna OR chop up everyone but that person.
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm leaving a nice review REALLY I AM!!! SEE ALL 10's!!! So PLEASE don't blow me up!! *swallows* I read your story Transformations and now I'm reading this one.I'm used to fanfics where Kagome is raped. But by SIX men???!! Poor Kagome... I hope they turn out to be demons or something so Inuyasha can kick their butts w/out worrying about the justice system.OH, and u r now one of my favorite authoresses. ALL HAIL THE GREAT DRAGON'S LOVER!!! *Kneels with forehead on hands* P.S. A good weapon would be duplicates of Inuyasha's Sit necklace...... (just a thought)
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Title: First time reviewing your works...
Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I really like how your story's going. Tying it in with Transformations and having it as Kagomes work was pretty ingenious. I really liked the Inuyasha/Sesshomaru (AKA: Fluffy) alot too. It shows that even the worst relationships between brothers can be put aside when a problem arises. Hopefully Kagome won't be scared for life from what happened to her. Keep up the good work. Both this story and Transformations are going on my favorites list for sure. *gives you a lifesize Inuyasha plushie as thanks for writng such a good story* Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AWESOME!!!!!!! LOVE this story. UPDATE SOON PLZZZ!!!!
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Reviewed By: junsei On: August 15, 2005 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not at all fond of AE 43..... maybe some of the previous and subsequent chapters as well... BUT I LOVE THIS STORY AND TRANSFORMATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: maranjade@yahoo.com On: August 12, 2005 17:26 CDT
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I absolutely love this story! Especially the Sesshomaru and Inuyasha scene! Please update more I enjoy all your stories.
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Reviewed By: mrw13 On: August 10, 2005 18:40 CDT
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great ae so far but u really should throw pie at bad reveiwers it's a classic but add stones and it can be very painful. ._. (i know because of past exsperences)
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