| "Turquoise Bracelet" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tricky Thief On: January 16, 2007 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so good! I almost cried! They're so sweet together! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! ~T.T.
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Reviewed By: DesertThorns [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 18:20 EST
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Wow, this story is absolutely, amazing. I like your style and the plot of this. Please don't give up on it, and keep up your hard work.
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Title: i love Satoshi
Reviewed By: jujubean On: January 10, 2007 21:33 EST
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so its going to be awhile the next time i can review, beause i don't have a computer, i owe money to the library, and i don't have a car to ride a newdkidt's house to use her computer. but she reads them over the phone for me, she such a good friend so i'll ask her to write my reviews for me. so anyway can you please update thanks
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Reviewed By: Mimikosayachi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 18:52 EST
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where is the next chapter? I need it. I CRAVE IT! now please update.
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Reviewed By: Yunni On: December 29, 2006 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always like mpreg fics. I have fun reading this fanfics. If I am to comment,it is about the irresponsible Dark. It is Dark who wear the bracelet in the first place, it is not fair for Daisuke to endure the whole consequence by himself. Why not make him switch with Daisuke for a while?
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Reviewed By: sensei_musume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 05:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. it is really original and follows the characters very well from the manga and anime series. please figure an ending cause it is a very lovely story.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 11:07 EST
Comment/Review:
OMGosh you have to update this was just tooooooo gooooood.
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: November 19, 2006 14:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLLLLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finish this fic, update it soon! I'm literly hypervenhilating here! Update it when you can. OM Ra! What have done to deserve this torture! *shouts this while her head spins*
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Title: gay marriage in Japan
Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know this may help but gay marriage in Japan works that one of the two enter into the others family registry it looks more lke an adoption than a marriage. This fic is great by the way made me very happy.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: November 09, 2006 06:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I love all your stories...the updates are really quick recently...keep up the good work...I'm loving it!
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Reviewed By: Lurala On: November 09, 2006 03:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You've UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've waited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a VERY talented writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMG!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg omg omg that was just so so so so so beautiful... I just loved this chapter so much... well the ending at least... and thank god it's not the end.... although I'd be happy it just wouldn't be enough to satisfy me.... *sighs*, but you had me worried in the beginning there my god... there was a point when I actually thought Satoshi might have died, and then the part where I thought Daisuke might actually pick Riku, needless to say I cried like no other... but you made up for it at least. but yea very very good job... I'm still a huge fan of yours, I love your work sooo much. O right I was meaning to ask you in chapter 18 the song that's in there... what's it called and who is it by??? if you know.. I'm in love with the lyrics and I keep forgetting to ask you... if you have the name and artist email it to Lost.In.The.Rain.84@googlemail.com long name I know.... I'm not very good with coming up with names... anyway I loved this chapter and I really hope that it does take as long for you to write the next chapter as it did this one... I know you've had comp troubles and all... and school must be hard to so take your time ^^.... Ps - sorry this is so long V V
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Title: Sammi
Reviewed By: silversammi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 20:37 EST
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Oh my gosh! You have to continue! Ive stayed up till about 3 in the morning reading your fic. Ive read your other one too and i love them PLEASSEEE hurrry! Im addicted.!!
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Reviewed By: Lurala On: October 15, 2006 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS ONE!!! Please continue to update! it's been soooo long! I must find out what happened next! u havn't updated since August 15!! that is so very long ago! So please update this is one of my absolute favorites!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Yea I'm back again
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea I'm just writing you again like I did for the other fanfic I want you to update!! you didn't take my advice it's been over a month since you've updated... I'm sorry I know that you're low on ideas so take your time... but not to much time. I'm sorry I sound demanding... well probably because I am... ok starting over just write when you get the chance I'll be waiting... and that's not ment to be creppy even though it sounds like that
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