| "Turquoise Bracelet" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: grr
Reviewed By: xXjovieXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 03:09 EDT
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So is this it?? You are just going to let Satoshi die like that?? *tear* He can't die. . . He has twins to attend to. You should have seen me as I was reading that last chapter. I was yelling at the computer like I always am. >< I'm such and emotional girl I tell you. Well yeah this was a good story. I hope you continue it because you are really good at this. But your editors really need help becuase I found a million errors. But yeah. I liked it. .::jovie::.
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 01:17 EDT
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wow must have more did or will satoshi die. love it .^_^.
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad Daisuke, Bad! Riku is not the right chioce, and once you give birth you really won't be able to give up the baby to Satoshi.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: August 30, 2006 08:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DON'T KILL SATOSHI....I want Dai and him to get together...PLEASE Update soon...please?
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 18:12 EDT
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no! Satoshi musnt die! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluerose24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:56 EDT
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I hope that you update this story soon. It is really good so far and I would love to read more of it. I want to know what happens with Satoshi.
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola On: August 18, 2006 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH THANK YOU FOR FINALLY UPDATING!!!! I have waited SOO long and I almost thought that was the end of Tourquoise Braclet!! I almost gave up and almost never came to see if it was updated again. Thank you so much for updating! I really love this one update again soon ok! Thanks!
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Title: 0.o
Reviewed By: Yami_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:14 EDT
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This can't be the end of Sato-kun!!! I luv him!! But.. if it's the end of sato then also the end of krad... Ohmigod! Well, great fic!!! write on!!
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Title: BTW...
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 04:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
by the way just thought I'd tell you i loved how you made Riku into a two timmer... I like it at the time, but now there engaged that's not right! poor daisuke is going to go into labor early from stress or something and now with Satoshi!! O GOD! I just pieced this together...what if he miscarages V V that would be depressing... or if something happened to satoshi! o jeez I need to stop thinking because I just keeping coming up with worse case scenarios here....
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Title: Ok so yea I have alot to say!!
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea so i'm reading la ti da I was so happy and then you go writing about chocolates and truffles at that one of my favorite deserts.... just make me drool all over my dad's lap top fine... ok so i'm reading aHHHH!!! what happens I seriously couldn't breathe and then I burst into tears... (yea i'm a cry baby I no) and I thought I had a bad day this is terrible!!! what happens??????????????? sorry but I'm freaking out here ahhh! yea so you no it would great if you didn't wait a month to update again... if possible of course. Please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LalRaLuLa On: August 03, 2006 09:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I abosolutely LOVE the story so don't stop!!!! Please continue writing and updating cause I have to know what happens next. so again update update update update update for all of you reading fans. I come to see if you updated every single day and you are disapointing me by not doing that so will you please update for me and the rest of you fans. we want to know what happens and not all of us can write great stroies like this ourselves so we need pleople with this exseptional writing abilities to write these magnifisent stories for us. I really hope you update cause I know that I have checked everyday for about a month and if you don't update soon I will no longer see if you updated cause I will have asumed that you had stoped writing your story. one thing is for sure and that is that at most if you don't update within 2 weeks I will no longer come here so please don't make me not come here cause I really do love this one of a kind magnificent original work of art! update ok thanks!
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola On: July 28, 2006 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my Favorite D.N.Angel Fanfiction so you HAVE to update soon! I have to know what happens next so Please update. Font Coloror i will be really sad...
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Reviewed By: halrey On: July 27, 2006 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this story i started reading it on fanfiction.net. i love the pairing and your style of writting and i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: halrey On: July 27, 2006 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this story i started reading it on fanfiction.net. i love the pairing and your style of writting and i hope you update soon.
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Title: what happends next???
Reviewed By: tohrukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!! please I beg you 2 update it. its very interesting.
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