| "Silence of the Monkeys" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: fazkataz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2012 22:07 EST
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Welcome back! It's always exciting to read a new silence of the monkeys chapter. Looking forward to more chapters. |
Title: Great!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2012 17:39 EST
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i thought you said this was suposed to be scary!! Ohhhh....well......I loved it though! |
Reviewed By: utsukushi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The overall concept of this story is good. I think that you capture Bulma quite well. However, I'd recommend a beta reader because you have quite a few grammatical errors in specific subject verb agreement and lack of punctuation. There also seem to be times in the dialogue when the don't seem to fully complete sentences/thoughts. Right now I think this is a good fic, but these things keep this from being a GREAT fic.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 01:40 EST
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I enjoy reading this fic so much..it's excellent! I really like that you each character their chance for the spotlight...it's very well-rounded. The suspense is artfully written..and killer I might add. I luv it...update soon! ^_^
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Title: great
Reviewed By: vegetaslover3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are going to make more right? Because i LOVE it. you really have vegetas bad side down.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 23:27 EST
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Another great chapter exploring the human- or Saiyan ^_^- thought process. I loved it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 06:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update, this story is very unique for a B/V story
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, please keep updating, you have a great style of writing, i just love B/V a/u's great stuff
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Title: me likey
Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:54 EST
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I love this story! I really enjoy DBZ/AU and this one is an interesting twist of one of my favorite movies/books. I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 23:15 EST
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This is a very different twist on the B/V relationship. It's interestingly done and keeps you wanting to come back and read more. Great story!
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Title: well done
Reviewed By: vegetaslover1 On: October 19, 2006 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very well done fic plz continue u need to write more!!!!!!!!!
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!
Reviewed By: VegetaLover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more i love the story but write more often it took u half a year just to write 1 chapter?
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: VegetaLover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:07 EDT
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please write more i love the story but write more often it took u half a year just to write 1 chapter?
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Reviewed By: LURVELY! On: August 17, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I don't think you're sick, Vegeta was eating flesh even in the show, when he was with Nappa. He just pulled an arm off a dead guy and started munching down. I like this story a lot though. It seems really interesting, and I like how threatening you make Vegeta when he's still in a cage. You are such a great writer anyway, I've read quite a bit of your fiction and I love your style. This is great, please continue. I'm really sorry you're not getting the amount of reviews that you DESERVE but people are lazy, they read, they enjoy, they leave. I like to add in the "review" step between "enjoy" and "leave". I enjoy reviewing stories. So...Great Job, Thank You!
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Title: like it
Reviewed By: vegetaslover9 On: July 29, 2006 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think u should continue the story it was great i want more
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